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CaptRosko — Winter Bash Round 1 Part Three
Published: 2009-01-19 20:28:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2093; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Part Three of Aurelio vs Laine.Previous: [link]
First: [link]
Comments: Sorry to whipsmartmccoy if i ruined Laine and Jin at all. I did enjoy this little duel alot, though I felt my ambitions were a bit lofty as far as page count goes. There's room for improvement I think. Comments are always appreciated.
So what's Aurelio's ambition? I'll work it in slowly as I go. There's a few goals I have in mind for this, I just hope I have the time to work it in.
Good luck to whipsmartmccoy, definitely check her out when you get the chance.
Dueler cameos copyrighted to their owners.
Jin and Laine (c) ~WhipsmartMcCoy
Aurelio and femmine (c) me and ~koeb
SDL (c) *RoninsUltramix
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Comments: 21
Wow, so epic! *A* You did a great job of capturing the dynamic between Laine and Jin.
I think my favorite part of this entry was the "date with a mystery man" gag. XD
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Aw. thanks. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
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LMAO putting ina few things from dance in this one matt? ^_^ I don't back lead that much do I?
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Thanks that makes me feel so much better. 
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Once again I am reminded of why I love your work so much.
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Dude, you did an AMAZING entry. Very fluid. Pacing was excellent. Art was... fuckin awesome. SWEET JOB MAN
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Hmmm. Plotlein.
And finally, the Taichou are becoming characters in their own right.
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this is a serious step up from some of your earlier work. excellent battle and story flow.
think this is one of your strongest pieces in my opinion. well done.
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wow, wicked action sequences! I hope i get a control over the quality and flow of dialogue such as the one you are showing of right now! Good luck for the rest of the WB, and hurry up on posting the team tourney!
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Heh, I especially like the interchange at the very end with the taichos. Foreshadowing ftw
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