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Cherry-Chain — Fire and Ice and Rage
Published: 2013-04-18 06:39:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1695; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 29
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"He’s like Fire and Ice and RageHe’s like the Night and the Storm in the Heart of the Sun
He Burns at the Center of Time and he can See the Turn of the Universe
And…he’s Wonderful"
I've only proofread it myself once, if anyone else wants to have a go at it I'd love it if you'd tell me any mistakes you find, although I have to warn you, I did make up a few homebrew rules when writing this when it came to how lines work
I wrote this based off of Circular Gallifreyan [ [link] ]
Took me...a very long time
My other work in Circular Gallifreyan: [ [link] ]
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"homebrw rules". Usually if a line crosses a bow, it does not count as a line starting at that bow. If a line ends at a bow, it does count as starting at that bow. You seem to have done it the other way round. Which results in some letters having not enough lines and some having one's they shouldn't have.
*The L in "like" should not have lines
*The F in "fire" should have a third line
*The N in "night should have a line
*What is that light circle in the center of the second sentece, the one that goes behind the S and the U of "sun". It does not belong there.
*The T in "time" should not have have a line
*The R in "wonderful" should not have lines
Nice work of interlocking the words in the longer sencences
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I'm aware. I've also chosen to write it like this, my own homebrew rules
Thanks ^^
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I think I just found my first tattoo
so beautiful!!!
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Oh my Spock. The most beautiful writing in the universe.
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just as I clicked on this, this is Gallifrey came on my playlist [link]
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Wow, what a coincidence.
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