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I learned something from last round… I should submit pages as soon as possible. Wanna know why? Because the comments fuel my energy and enthusiasms to work on my entry.
So here are the first two pages. When I read round three of SMOCT mini had among others a musical theme, I immediately had to think of this song: Ice Girl by Emilie Simon.
It’s one of my favourite songs, and it seems to fit Victoria/SilverSnow so nicely.
So here is a Youtube link to the song: [link]
Victoria/SilverSnow ©
Lyrics from “Ice Girl” by Emilie Simon
I hope the lyrics are readable... otherwise I'll also put them in the description.
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Thanks, that was exactly the reaction I was hoping for.
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yay! Also tonight I should have it my ref up. So sorry. I was sick the past two days.
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Aww don't worry about it, as far as I can tell I've so far been the only one who made my opponent draw an extra reference in the first place... you're just super nice.
BTW I hope you're feeling better now
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Lol Awww thanks! well I need him as a ref. You can put him in what ever civilian clothes you want. XD Sine this is his 'senshi' form. XD
I am feeling better. now to pump out some comics.... XD
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You’re welcome.
I should get him a civilian outfit then
BTW it’s good to hear you fell better
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Lol you should XD Oh god your taking him shopping!
and thanks. Being sick is never fun.
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YES SHOPPING! DO IT DO IT. XD
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Yay for starting early! And its such a great start too. The song does fit her! I can't wait to see what happens next
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Indeed, I decided to start early this time because I love reading all the comments and they encourage me to work harder.
I hope to have a new page up soon, I can’t promise it’ll be soon though
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beautiful page
song indeed fits her well :3
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Thanks I had fun making this page
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Awe, such sadness *hugs silversnow* You deserve a hug!!
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You do remember what kind of a girl she is in daily live right, she beat up 2 girls for ACCIDENTALLY breaking her nose.
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*hugs her again* Poor you, misguided soul!
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Indeed, she however won't admit any time soon that she might be a bit "damaged" because of her childhood, she's far too proud for that.
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Very awesome start, and you're right the song does seem to fit her perfectly.
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Oh very interesting start to this round! I can't wait to see how it proceeds!
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Thanks
I hope to have the next page soon… but don’t count on it… I haven’t even sketched it yet. 
BTW I officially scripted Roxie for a cameo
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Yay! I look forward to seeing Roxie popping up then!
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Yay, I'll try to work some harder, so you'll see her soon
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Oh take your time, I can be patient. c:
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Ooh! Nice theme (^-^) I was curious about which themes other people would choose.
I can read the song lyrics, no problem.
I'm also working on my entry, but I now have 7 pages drawn and not yet coloured. I'm going to try and finish everything first and then colour everything.
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I’m actually planning on mixing in several themes.
You already have 7 pages, that’s great… I have… 2.
Anyway I’m glad the lyrics are readable.
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Yes, but I haven't coloured them yet
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But still, in my experience making the first sketch of a page, you know: think of what everything should look like and where everyone/everything should be on the page is the most work.
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Yes that is true
This round I'm drawing without a script though - it made me get more pages
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Without a script, then how to do you know where the story goes?
( And I can certainly imagine you get more pages, I'm now scripting by scene and I already have some more pages then normally. )
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It's like writing a normal story - I first think of the ending, then main events and then I write the story towards each event (and now I'm drawing towards each event). Drawing this way does help to avoid "walls of text", because when I'm writing a script I'm writing more like I'd write a normal story, which of course has a lot of text. And because I know the ending and there is a deadline, it's not like I won't finish this round!
Yesterday I drew 5 pages (I'm so active XD because I have a lot of school-related deadlines coming up too actually...) and now the fight has almost ended, but I plan to reveal the judge and have an ending to the story as well in this round - if time allows, that is. Otherwise I'll put the ending in an epilogue.
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Oh so you do have an idea where the story is going already... I thought you where just literary thinking up the story while you're drawing...
Too be honest, I'll probably be guilty of some text walls this round, mostly because I'm gonna use this round to dive some more in SilverSnows/Victoria's personality and way of thinking.
Anyway, I hope you'll be able to finish your entry in time with those school related deadlines coming up, I'll look forward to read your entry.
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I just finished the drawings, only colouring left now 
I hope to be able to colour some pages tomorrow and upload them, otherwise it'll be Monday or Tuesday or Wednesday... Ah well, I'll see.
I hope you can finish your entry too, good luck!!
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Sounds like your almost done, I look forward to read it
Honestly, I have no clue what’s coming of my entry... I try to work on it, but it all goes so slow... I haven’t even scripted the actual fight yet... so I’m getting a little worried. I hope I’ll at least get a lot of work done this weekend.... and I hope I’ll get some brilliant idea for the rest of the script soon. ^^:
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Go off DA for the rest of today and draw everything first - then youll at least have all the pages even though they might not all be coloured next week?
Good luck!!
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I wish I could... since it's Saturday I also have 2 aquariums to clean at my parents place... so I'll be busy anyway... and then there where the Mythbusters on tv around breakfast...
I have no discipline
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But you also have tomorrow, right
Maybe everytime you go onto the computer to check DA and such, also draw at least 1 frame?
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Indeed. Also I actually draw in front of my computer, which has both pros and cons... because on one side I know I will be distracted by my computer but in case that happens at least my drawing stuff are only inches away from me so I can also get back to drawing easily. 
Also I'm probably gonna try a new story-telling style, it's quite experimental and I have no clue if it will work out, but if it does, perhaps I'll be able to finish my entry on-time-ish this time.
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I finished mine, but page 7 and onwards are all half-coloured. I'll continue colouring and scanning tomorrow/Tuesday, so I'm almost finished with this round
I hope you can finish too, I'm curious about the fight in your entry.
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I'll look forward to the rest of your entry then.
I have no clue if I'll finish in time... my new story-telling sounds faster in my head... however I haven't tested it yet so I can't know for sure.
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*is lang opgebleven om alles te kleuren*
Morgen scannen en uploaden en klaar
Ik denk wel dat-ie beter is geworden dan de vorige ronde...
Ik ben benieuwd of jouw storytelling sneller is!
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Ik denk dat je deze keer inderdaad een hele goeie entry heb, kleur maat altijd een groot verschil.
Ik ben er trouwens nog niet zeker van of dat deze manier van story-telling sneller is… ik denk dat het zou kunnen als je het goud doet, maar op het moment verlies ik mezelf een beetje in het schrijven van gesprekken en gedachten, in plaats van dat er daadwerkelijk wat gebeurd.
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