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Chris000 — Traffic Stop (WIP)

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Published: 2018-02-01 21:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1202; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 3
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Description This piece is almost done. I'm going to spend more time getting rid of small errors and adding in lighting, but I'm happy on how this is turning out right now. 




"Is this your vehicle, sir?" 

"No, it's the company truck." 

"But you are the registered driver?" 

"Yeah, of course I am. You aren't the cops though. What the hell are you guys doing here?" 

"Sir, are you aware a perimeter has been set up around the impact site?" 

"Uh... no."

"But you went in roughly seven hours ago?" 

"No." 

"Can I see your log?" 

"Huh? What?" 

"Your log. I think by law if you have a company vehicle, you need to fill that shit out every time you pull out of the lot?" 

"Uh... yeah. Yeah, sure. Log. Wally, get the log in the truck." 

 "What?" 

 "You heard me. Get the goddamned log in the glove compartment!" 

"You hot sir?" 

"Huh?" 

"You hot? You're sweating up a storm!" 

"Yeah. Guess I am." 

"Hey, Clarke." 

"Yeah, Gunny?"

"Think there might be something in the truck?" 

"Maybe. Maybe not." 

"There's nothing in the truck, man." 

"You sure? Giant alien rock falls from the sky, blows a two mile deep hole in the ground, you're the only truck on site that also managed to breach the security perimeter, and you're sure the truck's empty?"

"Uh..." 

"I open up that truck there isn't going to be anything? That's not going to be a problem, is it sir?"
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Comments: 7

Rookie425 [2018-02-13 08:16:40 +0000 UTC]

This dialogue is on point.

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Chris000 In reply to Rookie425 [2018-02-14 03:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Dialogue brings a scene together. If there's something I pride myself in, it's character dialogue. 

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Rookie425 In reply to Chris000 [2018-02-14 06:52:01 +0000 UTC]

As a writer, I totally understand. I like to constantly improve upon tapping into a character's innermost.

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ShaozChampion [2018-02-02 17:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! i cant wait to see the final product

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Chris000 In reply to ShaozChampion [2018-02-02 21:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Won't be too long. Will be mostly shading, highlights and details to make it look a lot better. 

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PossessedIron [2018-02-02 00:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Looks terrific! I love the story, plus the civilians design looks fantastic!

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Chris000 In reply to PossessedIron [2018-02-02 01:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I've been trying to do more civilian art lately!

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