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OK you guys I really need your help again and fast! This is for a final project in my class that is due this Tuesday!!! >.< so I need you guys to tell me with Fox boy design you think kids would like the most. Or if you think I should do something else to the design to make it look cute.These there all quick sketches just to get ideas out and on paper, so pleas pleas pleas tell me what you think! The more Opinions I get the better!!
Also I have the story written done as well, but I am no writer and I suck hardcore at grammar so if you guys can read the story below and check it for me :3 I know it’s a stupid story but I am agents the ropes here trying to get this done fast!
***Story***
War on the Fox Tail Boy
Hunter was not like other kids because he was a fox.
He had to go to a human school because his parents moved to far away from his old school. Far away form his other animal friends.
Hunter tried to make new friends with the new kids at school, but they only laughed and teased him. All the kids called him fox tail boy.
One snowy winter day Hunter started to walk home from school like he always did, but today the biggest bully in the school Billy followed Hunter and teased him all the way home.
Hunter turned to the boy and yelled at him. Telling him that it was not right to teased him just because he was different.
The bully tackled Hunter and they both fell into a big whole that was covered in soft snow.
They both landed on the wet ground next to each other. More snow fell on the whole and covered there way out. Hunter got up right away and asked if Billy was ok.
Billy turned away from Hunter with anger saying, I ok no thanks to you!
Hunter looked for a way out but the whole they fell into was too high up and now covered with snow. He turned to Billy and said “if you boost me up I can dig us out of this whole”. Billy said nothing to him and continued to pout.
Hunter sat down knowing that he was not going to be home in time for dinner. I’m going to miss my favorite meal today, Hunter said. “What’s that?” Billy asked. “Dirt and worms!” No. said hunter. Every Tuesday my mother makes me a peanut butter and jelly sandwiched. “You like peanut butter and jelly to!” Billy said with excitement. “Yes it’s my favorite” Hunter replied.
They both sat there talking about what they liked and didn’t like. They found out that they liked the same things. They quickly became friends and Billy helped Hunter up so he could dig a way out for them.
The next day Billy and Hunter were both making a snowman on the play ground together for all the other kids to see.
The End
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Comments: 9
Poila-Invictiwerks [2009-05-12 06:16:49 +0000 UTC]
I pinpoint to design A. If it's a children's storybook, a more general feel rather than a anthro-specialized look might work...
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MoreSobaPlease [2009-05-11 01:58:44 +0000 UTC]
I'd personally go for D. The eyes are much more expressive!
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Teekayahr [2009-05-09 05:04:13 +0000 UTC]
I think that "D" is the best one. Not for any real reason other it's got the best looking eyes for facial mobility and emotion.
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chinara [2009-05-08 20:40:35 +0000 UTC]
Well, my favorite one is the one at the lower left. If I may recommend, take the scarf and add it, then give him some shorts. Perhaps some fluffy gloves as well? It would be cute. <3 I hope I could help.
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clockworkdragon2 In reply to chinara [2009-05-09 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Yeah I will keep the scarf on him. I might keep him wearing his natural coat hehe. Not sure yet I will try different stuff and see what I look good :3
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chinara In reply to clockworkdragon2 [2009-05-09 05:50:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, whatever you will draw, Mr. Clockworkdragon... It's always something nice to see. ^-^ I'm sure you will find the right design.
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