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Published: 2007-03-30 00:17:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 12148; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 425
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Description Here is another page from my series, "Venus Hunter" (Gender Fender Bender). It's sort of a jokey page, and the overall story is still in the sketchy phase.

However, this page does feature a glimpse of the aliens in the story, and Harry in full assassin mode.

At some point of the story, Harry has to take care of a baby, seen here, even while trying to meet his obligations as an assassin.
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Comments: 38

Grabbergirl11 [2011-10-23 02:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Now in fire emblem style with Shinon and his mom.

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chrisnfy85 [2007-03-31 22:05:06 +0000 UTC]

hmm....like the 1st panel....the women's hand and legs are too short for a mature female....and the last, breast feeding part, the buttocks looks same sizes with her head...the 2nd panel is good!!!i love that most!! XD but when it comes to the 4th panel, the hand like too small to hold a rifle...the thumb u showed in2nd panel can reach the upper part of the gun but in panels 4th, it looks like it couldn't reach...hmm...just my opinion anyway....and i mentioned the changes is about the layout... and i hope all these might able to help u on ur works~~ XD

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cluedog In reply to chrisnfy85 [2007-04-01 15:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the excellent critique! I'll try to keep an eye on the anatomy in my drawings. Feel free to comment on my art anytime, they're much appreciated.

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chrisnfy85 In reply to cluedog [2007-04-01 15:43:19 +0000 UTC]

waiting for ur improvement!! XD keep it up!!!

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chrisnfy85 [2007-03-31 20:09:39 +0000 UTC]

haha!!funny!!love this!!u got ur own style in drawing comics!! XD hmm...mayb u can improve ur anatomy on ur drawings....and...i think the panels are too equal...it's because of 1 page comic needs interesting layout too... XD mayb u can try to make some changes in ur next piece of work!!

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cluedog In reply to chrisnfy85 [2007-03-31 20:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique. I'm rather curious, which drawings need improvement in terms of the anatomy, and which ones (if any) have good anatomy?

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RobertLaszloKiss [2007-03-31 08:04:40 +0000 UTC]

that is hilarious!

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SusanaVieira [2007-03-31 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Its really funny how harry, even with a woman body remains very masculine, bu without looking like a transvesti or a homossexual, just very masculine. Loved the closeup on the eyes, and I'm sure he'll take good care of the baby

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cluedog In reply to SusanaVieira [2007-03-31 19:47:37 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your comment. Trying to impart some masculinity into Harry, even while he's a woman, is hard to do.

As for taking care of the child, he's able to do so in a way that most men can't (and in a way most women wish men could).

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SusanaVieira In reply to cluedog [2007-03-31 21:44:04 +0000 UTC]

absolutely, my thoughts exactly. I have a theory that almost our entire existance is based in running from death and trying to have both masculine and femine worlds in one body.

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cluedog In reply to SusanaVieira [2007-04-01 15:16:19 +0000 UTC]

I think it's rather sad that we get only one life to do things. I always thought it would be fascinating to experience life as the opposite gender, another race, or another country. So many places in the world, so many different time periods and unique experiences, and, really, we only get one. I guess that's why books, movies, television, art, and video games are so important, they allow us to experience other people's lives.

Whoops, I'm getting a bit philosophical here...

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SusanaVieira In reply to cluedog [2007-04-01 18:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Well actually I find that very interesting, I'm not a library mouse but I love to read, every now and then I take one or two books from my grandparents library, play every videogame i get my hands on and LOVE docummentaries... Maybe I'm different but to me my kingdom is my room and wisdom my pursuit. Of course I have a chunk of things to learn but I think I'm on the right way

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JessyChan [2007-03-31 01:57:31 +0000 UTC]

lol..woah

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rainy--day [2007-03-30 14:40:58 +0000 UTC]

look great! I like how do draw the hand

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cluedog In reply to rainy--day [2007-03-31 19:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the kind words.

Your gallery is awesome, by the way.

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Jaszcz [2007-03-30 13:30:49 +0000 UTC]

It's great too. Another style and you steel doing great job

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cluedog In reply to Jaszcz [2007-03-31 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment. These deviations take me quite a while to finish, so I'm grateful for your kind words.

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SoulSoDeep [2007-03-30 10:15:34 +0000 UTC]

great work man.
ur panels tell the story very well. no words needed. i like that

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cluedog In reply to SoulSoDeep [2007-03-31 19:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the generous statements!

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Ace-Angel [2007-03-30 09:45:55 +0000 UTC]

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sutinen [2007-03-30 09:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Great! First some real action pics and then the atmosphere is destroyed. The panel 2 looks awesome. The concentrated eye hypnotized me.

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cluedog In reply to sutinen [2007-03-31 19:41:07 +0000 UTC]

That page took me a couple of days, among my other drawings. I really hated having to draw the sniper rifle, which required a reference photo. I hate when I have to use references.

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sutinen In reply to cluedog [2007-03-31 19:45:18 +0000 UTC]

I hate it too. But sometimes itΒ΄s a must for the sake of the pic. And it doesnΒ΄t low the quality of the pic even if you use reference to some machine.

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NicWalshPhotography [2007-03-30 07:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.. I'm not really sold on the GFB concept.. guess I have to read more into it.

btw the detail you got on panel 4 (the closeup of the finger on the trigger) .. WOW!

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cluedog In reply to NicWalshPhotography [2007-03-30 09:07:50 +0000 UTC]

GFB is one of my more bizarre stories. It's still in the rough sketch stage, story-wise, and I hope to refine it over time.

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NicWalshPhotography In reply to cluedog [2007-03-30 10:48:12 +0000 UTC]

I will be watching.

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FatherStone [2007-03-30 07:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Bitter sweet irony... I like it!

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cluedog In reply to FatherStone [2007-03-30 07:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I just can't stay serious in anything I draw for any extensive amount of time.

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scalpod [2007-03-30 06:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Great contrast between panels 2 and 7!

Gender bending assassins AND aliens?!!!

I've become so intrigued by all your story ideas I really look forward to each new installment. Not only is your work visually amazing but the writing and underlying concepts are so strong and unique. You've definitely got the whole package (not a joke at Harry's expense, I swear).

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scalpod In reply to scalpod [2007-03-30 20:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for giving me these extra insights into the story. I remembered you saying society had been divided up this way but I'm not sure I'd heard the reason until now?

Oh, and I'm sure it can (and will) get A LOT weirder. In fact, I'm counting on it!

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cluedog In reply to scalpod [2007-03-30 09:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Thanks for the compliments. High praise, indeed.

Gender Fender Bender is still in the early stages of development. I like to create these drawings so I can sort of toss ideas out there and see if any stick.

Indeed, there are space aliens in the story. They're the ones who have segregated the two human sexes as a part of an intergalactic experiment on gender. To blend into the female half of society, Harry had his sex switched (against his will) so he could attempt to kill the lady seen in panel 2 (in the cross hairs). The baby seen on this page is actually Harrys, as if the story couldn't get any weirder.

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JadeGL [2007-03-30 05:17:32 +0000 UTC]

This one was incredible!
I loved her expression on the second panel, all business like!

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cluedog In reply to JadeGL [2007-03-30 08:53:59 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your generous words! Drawing the sniper rifle was a real chore, however (I even had to get a reference photo).

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jhames34 [2007-03-30 00:46:15 +0000 UTC]

how is he able to milk a child?!

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cluedog In reply to jhames34 [2007-03-30 08:39:47 +0000 UTC]

It's his kid (or so it shall be revealed)!

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jhames34 In reply to cluedog [2007-03-30 21:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Too late, it's revealed NOW

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cluedog In reply to jhames34 [2007-03-31 19:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Whoops!

Well, at least I could it's father a secret...heh...heh...or is it a father?

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jhames34 In reply to cluedog [2007-04-01 03:11:53 +0000 UTC]

oh God, you impregnated your own creation, didn't you?!! You incestuous FREAK!!
Is it incest? after all, you're the 'father' of all your creations...

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