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Published: 2011-02-15 01:50:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 26185; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 574
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First, thanks everybody for the comments on the scraps of "Miss Doomsday" I posted recently. I read everyone of them and take them quite seriously. I decided to finish up and put together the second page for the re-do of "Miss Doomsday" I'm working on. The page above is the finished result.Let me know which you prefer, the original ([link] ) or the new one above. Let me know which you prefer, as I'm rather torn between the two, accursed indecisive soul that I am.
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UPDATE (2/25/2011): I modified the original page a bit, fixing a grammatical error in panel 1, replacing the middle panel with a more dynamic panel, and modifying the legs on the 4th and 5h panels.
UPDATE (3/9/2012): I replaced panels 4 and 5 with a newer version, one that I feel is more expressive. I also modified the toes on her left foot. Special thanks to for his critical input with regards to the page.
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Thanks! I find myself trending more towards this newer version of "Miss Doomsday" but I'm quite the indecisive fellow. I'll have to wait and see after the new seven pages are finished before I can decide which version of the comic I'll go with. Curse my indecisiveness!
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Not indecisiveness...deliberation. ^_^
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Thanks! I think this version is much sexier than the previous one. Anne is one voluptuous gal.
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I rather like this one, btw do you take requests
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Thanks. Due to my busy schedule, I rarely take requests but what did you have in mind?
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cute little girl becomes sexy slutty prostitute
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I generally don't like doing sequences involving children, although there is one part of the upcoming One Piece sequence that does feature a little girl morphing into one of the more chesty One Piece characters. It's brief, though, which is why I took the commission.
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oh that sounds cool, anyway the decision is up to you entirly, if you dont like that idea I could present another. Oh and I love your Miss Doomsday series its awesome
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I love this page man, I don't think I could get sick of MD.
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Thanks, Larry! I'm going to start on page 4 soon but I've got to tie up a few commissions first.
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You are welcome Zac. That's really good news, can't wait to see page 4.
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That second panel in particular rocks. Love the ashtray on the cat!
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Thanks, Nate (and I'm honored by the fave, too)! Hope to see more of your comic work, soon.
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No worries mate. Definitely stay tuned for more comic work coming up!!
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awesome I like this one you have a gift man
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You mean "everything where I wanted it", not "wanted them".
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By jingo, you're right. I'll make sure to correct that grammatical error. Thanks for the heads up.
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I prefer the two top panels of this one. For the second row, I prefer the other because it brings more emphasis on the character while in the new one it seems a bit too. cold abd I mostly see a big room. I prefer the last third of this version, they fit better.
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This is awesome. I love the ashtray on the cat.
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I thought I prefer the new version, but now I think that the older one is more unique. It's not just the character but the whole composition.
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That one. I like the new look of Anne more (I would really suggest to make her not too thin though in the new version, the thicker looking thighs in the top right panel give her something extra, more special, less perfect but more feminine and realistic feel). Apart from that though, it's very very nice. I also prefer just the movements of her and the details with the cat way more in the lower three panels. She just seems to be cooler on those, with more attitude. BTW: The link shows page 1 of the older series and not the actual counterpart of that page.
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Thanks for your invaluable input and the correction (since fixed). Admittedly, I've drawn Anne a bit top heavy but I have been giving her a real world feel. I tried to impart that in the latest page I've created as well (page 3).
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This is great work. What do you use for your panels and text/ word bubbles?
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Thank you so much! I actually use Photoshop to create the panels and text. The word bubbles, however, are hand drawn.
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hehe, you loved so much the first panel from the previous version so you added it on the final version, nice!
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That's right. For some of the new pages I'm working on, I've been re-using panels from the earlier pages that I really liked.
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Love the Ink, truly. Besides, her contexture, the stetic in the room... and i'm a smoker too, so yes, i do like this page
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Thanks! I love drawing that punkish Anne, her cat Johnathon, and her messy room.
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Oyyy... the more I see, the more indecisive about the issue I am too... ah well, both can and will work... maybe flip a coin?
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I share your confusion.
I find myself oscillating between the two versions. I'm going to redraw the next five pages and then I'll decide. Maybe I'll even run a poll and see which version people prefer. Regardless, I won't be drawing up any new versions after this one.
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Hu, is that oscilating or vascilating... I can never remember what each ofthem really means... Dithering works though, I know that much...
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New one, I guess. Might be because of recent movie influences, but I'm not a big fan of too over-the-top foreshadowing beginnings.
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Thanks for your input. I do like the sexier Anne here. I'm going to redraw the other five pages and see what happens.
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Well I still have to say that I like this one the most. So I hope you use this a basis for future stuff.
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Thanks, Larry. I'm working on a new version of the third page, which should be finished and up by the end of the week.
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You are welcome Zac, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. I know it will be great.
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Oh MY GOD! Amazing! You have progressed so much(I mean you've always been amazing at your craft)
but I just love your style so much. I've missed your work.
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Thanks, Jessy! Marvelous to hear from you. I've been working hard on improving myself, always pushing myself for improvement. Drawing is a true passion for me.
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Thanks! I'm working on the new version of page three and hope to have it up this weekend.
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I really dig the panel layout you've got going here.
I want that cat...
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