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And here is the next drawing in my archive. You may have seen this on deviant art. And you have. I decided to practice up again!The original concept belongs to His Butterfly M82A1. An absolutely Awesome piece!! Check it out if you haven't!! Totally awesome Deviant!!
Anyway. I just focused on the girl with the rifle here. I love it!! Just flatout awesome!
I know.. It's been such a long time since I've put one up.. arg..
Again, The concept does not belong to me. I just drew it up traditionally. Please tell me what you think!
Enjoy!^^
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Comments: 122
CoralineCaroline [2009-10-09 04:41:49 +0000 UTC]
ZOMFG loks so F***ing EPIC XDDDD
Nicely detailed with coloured penicls XDDD
awesome adaption to the digital piece from the original artist.~~~
keep up the great work~~~
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cmstpp In reply to CoralineCaroline [2009-10-10 02:32:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! It was excellent practice. I really enjoyed drawing it!^^
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CoralineCaroline In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-10 08:24:11 +0000 UTC]
No worries, so glad you you enjoyed drawing it~~
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kurokage311 [2009-10-09 01:22:37 +0000 UTC]
isn't that the sniper rifle that shoots a 50.caliber?
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cmstpp In reply to kurokage311 [2009-10-10 02:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes it does! It's a fantasy drawing. The rifle would probably knock her flat! But you have to imagine she's strong enough to fire it! XD
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kurokage311 In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-10 05:59:45 +0000 UTC]
then marines see her fire it and there like "holy crap" O_o
"I CANT EVEN FIRE IT" a sniper yells
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cmstpp In reply to kurokage311 [2009-10-11 19:26:07 +0000 UTC]
That's so awesome! Just drawing it up helped me out. I learned quite a bit from it!^^
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netrex In reply to kurokage311 [2009-10-09 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Yes. It certainly can't be fired in a position like that Not if you want to be standing when you've pressed the trigger
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kurokage311 In reply to netrex [2009-10-10 01:02:30 +0000 UTC]
it would be like one of those videos where someone shoots a gun and fly back!
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miyuki-yoshiharu In reply to ??? [2009-10-09 00:42:04 +0000 UTC]
this is so cool
everything is just wonderful
her expression, the rifle, the colours
almost like the real one
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cmstpp In reply to miyuki-yoshiharu [2009-10-11 19:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Well thanks to KYMG's devaition I was able to learn a lot of new techniques and anatomy tips. I certainly is cool!^^
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SchmaltzZany In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 23:38:51 +0000 UTC]
awesome i wish i could draw like taht
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cmstpp In reply to SchmaltzZany [2009-10-10 02:36:44 +0000 UTC]
It takes a little bit of practice. But anyone can do it with some patience and practice!^^
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kalisk8r In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 23:26:13 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of Gunslinger Girls
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DustyKnives In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 23:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I almost reported this as art theft. You did a GREAT job reproducing the image. Also, I'm not sure if you did or not, but let the original owner know that you used their concept so they don't see it and go "WHAT THE HELL?!"
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cmstpp In reply to DustyKnives [2009-10-08 23:28:29 +0000 UTC]
I sent the guy a message and everything!! I waited three weeks and no reply... So I am assuming he has no problem.. But if he does, I will certainly take it down... I don't want to, but I will. But thank you very much!^^
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DustyKnives In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-09 00:44:15 +0000 UTC]
Okay, good job. I'd hate to see this beautiful piece removed. I did the same thing with one of my older deviations. The guy just never replied, and I put in my description that if he ever did and wanted me to take it down, it would be gone immediately.
By the way, I took a stroll through your gallery. Amazing work!
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cmstpp In reply to DustyKnives [2009-10-09 21:18:16 +0000 UTC]
I will do the same. If it comes and he doesn't want it up I will take it down. I don't want any problems. Thank you very much!^^
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WraiththeRipper In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 22:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
I was going to write this in the cratique section but since I am not a premium member I can't >_<
So I like what you have done here, the only few things I could say that may help amplify the picture would be:
1. The front foot, may angle the foot so the ankle has a sharper turn and the leg contracts up faster on a sharper angle. This creates the illussion of faster stopping force and more pressure being placed on that foot. Of corse with a small build up of dirt on the more front area of the shoe also helps this. The reason I mention this is bc her skirt kinda flies up in the air like she was runing and stopped to fire on the fly, or could be caused with the shockwave from the actual shot of the gun. Either way I think it would show more thought in the posture.
If you think about it, a gun like that has a decent reciol especailly when in a possition like that. And so you would want to place more of your weight on the front foot to embrace yourself from falling over when the shot is taken.
2. the only thing that would make this go from a good picture to a bad ass picture on professional quality... (especailly since it was a remake of someone else's work) is if you did this in a 3/4 front view. This view would not only give far better composition but would also make the bullets hitting the ground stand out far better and you would have way more options to play with to put your own twist on it such as: perspective: do you want to scew it to give a more dramatic look? keep it realistic? or go crazy and do something like what a mouse might be seeing?
There are endless things you can do to take someone else's idea and make it from good to great. But its these small changes that really make the difference.
Just keep that in mind
PS I would love to see this in a 3/4 front view.. personally i think that would be awsome... you could even show off the shock wave partially in that view as well.
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cmstpp In reply to WraiththeRipper [2009-10-11 19:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for all the advice! I can see the mistake on the knee and you're very right. Thank you again. I will have to look into a 3/4 view.. That would be awesome indeed!!
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WraiththeRipper In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-11 21:44:02 +0000 UTC]
No problem! glad you are thankfull for the advice lol alot of ppl just look to get apraised here
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cmstpp In reply to WraiththeRipper [2009-10-11 21:46:46 +0000 UTC]
I love advice!! Anything to help me. I sometimes learn more from what people find and tell me than actually doing the drawing. I do get a lot of nice comments.. which I appreciate. But your comments are the ones I really look forward to!! So thank you!^^
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WraiththeRipper In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-11 22:23:58 +0000 UTC]
Glad I could help good luck with improving... should be quite good in a few more years... prolly be teaching me! lol
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cmstpp In reply to WraiththeRipper [2009-10-11 22:25:47 +0000 UTC]
Haha!! Thanks. I'm trying to learn as much as I can!^^
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Mangafreaky In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 21:16:30 +0000 UTC]
Great! Lines and shading are done so neatly. Espcially the details on the rifle itself is outstanding!
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cmstpp In reply to Mangafreaky [2009-10-11 19:30:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I think I'm getting better at the shading!^^
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Immorai In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 21:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Look how straight and neat the gun and barrel are... That is nice work.
Like the tips of her hair, too. You blended the blue and brown nicely.
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cmstpp In reply to Immorai [2009-10-11 19:33:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. With every drawing I learn something new I can put on paper.^^
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burningfrost888 [2009-10-08 20:38:03 +0000 UTC]
I remember featuring this in the same journal entry when I featured you last time.^^ Haha! XD
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cmstpp In reply to burningfrost888 [2009-10-11 19:35:26 +0000 UTC]
Ya. That's when I wanted to draw it!! And I did... and I've already been spotted on a mistake! Catch em!!^^ I need to learn more!
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burningfrost888 In reply to cmstpp [2009-10-13 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, sure, will do.^^ I'm just looking for a suitable time in a currently cramped schedule. XD I forgot to mention, nice rendering on the original Butterfly work.^^
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gaatar In reply to ??? [2009-10-08 20:30:48 +0000 UTC]
that's really good!
just a suggestion though, the knee that's up, would be facing a little more to the right, and not right at us^^
the rest looks great!
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cmstpp In reply to gaatar [2009-10-11 19:36:03 +0000 UTC]
Ya.. Thanks for catching that. I learn something new every day!^^
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Yukiba [2009-10-08 17:40:32 +0000 UTC]
wow! this is so beautiful!
i cant help but just stare at it.
Great job again ^^ as you always do~
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cmstpp In reply to Yukiba [2009-10-11 19:36:21 +0000 UTC]
It's a pretty neat drawing!^^ Thanks!
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cmstpp In reply to ExiaConquista [2009-10-08 20:30:02 +0000 UTC]
I love it! I thank the guy for coming up with this!^^
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