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Name: Monochromia
Nicknames: Monochrome, Chrome, Chromium, Drip, Mercutia (inspired by William Shakespeare's character, Mercutio, whose personality was also mercurial and unpredictable)
Type: Undead/Ghost Pegasus
Age: 7 (at death) is now closer to the age of 15 but her body remains unchanged
Gender: Mare
Relationship to Void: Virtual Stranger/Nightmare Occupant
Orientation: Straight
Special somepony: No one
Relations: Eclipsal Gem (friend/guardian) fav.me/d66prku comments.deviantart.com/1/4098β¦
Cutie Mark: None and will never have one
Abilities/Attributes:
- Able to become invisible, only shows herself to whom she chooses
- Can levitate things or herself, make objects or people drain of their color (an effect that's not permanent), and preform similar supernatural and paranormal acts.
Personality: Before her death, she was very trusting and gullable. She'd believe every lie you told her because she saw no evil in the world. She thought everything was perfect the way it was.
After being led into the Rainbow Factory by a good friend of hers, who assured her it would be safe and the factory had long since been abandoned, she's become untrusting and skittish rather than outgoing. She doesn't let anyone get very close to her due to this fact, but she's still lonely and sad that her friend would do such a thing.
Due to her shattered trust and childish innocence, she's very unpredictable and prone to screaming, crying, or becoming defensive at the drop of a hat. Doesn't like to hear lies, and when she hears one, she tends to set the truth straight (even if the truth is a damnable thing to hear).
Friendship/Loyalty: Although she doesn't have any friends anymore, she'd be more than willing to change her ways or learn to trust again if it meant another chance at having a friend.
Occupation: Haunt
Hometown: Everfree Forest
Current residence: Everfree Forest
Bio: Several years ago, in the Everfree Forest, Monochromia was born to a wealthy family who owned a small chain of stores. They lived in a Victorian era style house that loomed over the tree canopy.
Chrome went to school in Ponyville, however, and there she met her small group of friends. Quickly, she started to trust them, and within a few years of friendship, she was believing everything they said. They had heard of the Rainbow Factory, and seen it chugging smoke up in the sky in Cloudsdale, but never dared visit it. Dark rumors surrounded the building, saying something about it being mysteriously abandoned and the location of several mass murders. Soon enough, however, they had built up their courage enough to chance a trip to it, despite what was said about it.
So, on Nightmare Night one year, they flew up to Cloudsdale (all of them were pegasi) and crept inside. What they saw was bonechilling and unforgettable. There was Rainbow Dash, in the middle of the factory, supervising the disemboweling, chopping up, submersion, and dissolving, of various ponies. At the farthest top right corner of the factory, a machine shot the resulting liquid into the sky where it vaporized and became the rainbows that people so naively marveled over.
Screaming, two of three of Monochromia's friends attempted to run from the building. The commotion drew Rainbow Dash's attention, who flew over quickly, blocking the exit. "What do we have here," she purred, "Three particularly colorful fillies just dying to get a glimpse of my humble factory?" She laughed maniacally and quickly caged up two of Chome's three friends (and Chrome herself) in a small cage overlooking the factory. There, they were forced to look on as Rainbow disembowled, chopped up, submerged, and dissolved Chrome's remaining uncaged friend.
Then, when it came time to get another filly out of the cage, the filly fought Dash and got loose and flew down to the Cloudsdale Police Station to get help. Monochromia was next. She fought to the best of her ability, getting her ears and wings torn in the process, and ended up just getting tossed in the waters the way she was, without being mutilated, to avoid further fighting.
When the police arrived, Dash had fled the scene, and Monochromia was already dead in the Factory water. It took a little over a year to completely clean up and close down the factory, and around that time her body was found, very well preserved, near the bottom of the vat.
Blood and Organs: Rainbow Factory waters leaked into her system after prolonged exposure. The waters, once in her bloodstream, kept flowing even though her heart stopped and partially embalmed her and kept her from rotting. Due to the waters in her bloodstream, her blood is eternally flowing, will never dry up, and is slightly marbled with the colors of the ponies who previously died in it. Her blood, when in mortal form, stinks of rotten meat. When her skin and muscles melted from her body, her organs fell out and were discovered to be in such bad condition they were cremated. Oddly, however, when Monochromia chooses to scare people, she is often reported to be carrying, draped in, or sitting amongst piles of organs or ash. They are rumored to be the ones she lost.
Soul/Mortality: When she was removed from the Factory waters and was already buried, she realized she was still conscious. So she rose from the grave. Her soul is too tainted to go to heaven, but not quite enough to go to hell, so Monochromia roams Equestria in purgatory waiting for her judgement day, the day of eternal liberation. She's got unfinished business with Rainbow Factory Dash and won't dare rest until she's exterminated.
Mentality: Has the mentality/mental state of a depressed 15 year old.
Mouth and Saliva: Her teeth are sharp and jagged, due to her defensive nature, and her saliva is partially embued with Rainbow Factory waters.
Times of Activity: Monochromia is only active during certain times of the year, times when fear or happiness is particularly strong. Most commonly, she can be sighted around Christmastime and Halloween.
More information to come later. You are not allowed to use this character anywhere in any way, shape, or form without express written permission from me (unless you're making fanart).
Will proofread and correct errors later.
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I've always wanted a creepypasta character, and I thought that since Halloween was coming up, what better time to finally make one. <3 I know her backstory and such is kinda thrown together, so I promise I'll revise it sometime..
And since she's so complicated, in all likeliness I wouldn't draw her year-round. So, I decided to set two times of the year it's guaranteed I'd draw her. That way she don't go to waste. xP
To see the updates made to this character reference, see this journal: fav.me/d6fl9wq
Made using bases by *SelenaEde and *Softfang
Markings/Colors by ~TheSardine fav.me/d6rslph
Manestyle designed, as a collaborative effort, by =UnicornsOnFire and I.
Eclipsal Gem (c) ~DawnTheADHH1655
Background: www.wallconvert.com/wallpapersβ¦
8 hours in Microsoft Paint and Gimp
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Comments: 439
CobaltTheFox In reply to ??? [2020-03-27 12:52:11 +0000 UTC]
Of course! Iβd love more fanart for this girl. :v
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KingSawyer [2015-01-24 12:37:22 +0000 UTC]
would you ever consider selling or trading her? <33 sorry to ask ; w ;''
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CobaltTheFox In reply to KingSawyer [2015-01-24 18:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.. I'd be far more willing to design something similar in exchange for something else.
Why, what is it that you have in mind?~ >w>
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KingSawyer In reply to CobaltTheFox [2015-01-24 18:47:43 +0000 UTC]
ooh yess
what would you want? I don't know exactly what I'd want xD
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CobaltTheFox In reply to KingSawyer [2015-01-24 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Well hang on a second, you're the one approaching me with this suggestion, why don't you spell out what it is that you had in mind? xD
Once we get that squared away, we can talk about my half of the agreement. (Don't worry, once we get to that point I won't make it too complicated. xD)
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KingSawyer In reply to CobaltTheFox [2015-01-24 18:53:19 +0000 UTC]
okay aha
I am not too good with custom info so sorry if its a bit different / not to decisive ; v ;''
Β maybe a pony with shredded ears and wings, and Monochromia's eyes maybe? with purple turning into orange hair, like this?? these purple and orange colours maybee
Β
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CobaltTheFox In reply to KingSawyer [2015-01-24 19:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Ok so basically you want me to spookify this character and turn them into a pony in the process? xD Add shredded ears and wings, and the whites of their eyes are black but their irises are purple or orange?
I can do that.
Also, I can't think of any designs I want at the moment, so I'd be willing to do this for points, if that's alright with you.
I can use a base (of my choice) by SelenaEde , if that's what you'd like (this route will cost a good 100 points).
Or I'd be willing to draw a chibi of your character, following rules posted in this journal [LIMITED TIME ONLY] Chibi Commissions [OPEN] )- and this route will cost 200 points.
Which would you prefer? Is your character male or female, and are they full grown or are they young?
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yogscastlionstar [2014-12-04 16:54:19 +0000 UTC]
why was this on TP? Shes not really a Mary Sue in ways......Cool idea and stuff )
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grayluki [2014-11-07 04:41:40 +0000 UTC]
How did you do this in MS Paint? That's amazing ;-; How can you do the hair though? The parts where it changes ti another color? Do you use a tablet?Β
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CobaltTheFox In reply to grayluki [2014-11-08 16:55:03 +0000 UTC]
No I don't actually. My pony dolls are made completely with a mouse.
I had a manual gradient tutorial up just a little while ago, but I got rid of it because it looked really bad. I may make a new one sometime soon.
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grayluki In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-11-08 17:19:40 +0000 UTC]
That's amazing! I know how to do gradients with two colors, but I mean the parts where her mane changes. Is that a gradient? It doesn't gradually change, it just changes. But I meant the little lines and marks that are in between the two colors.Β
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CobaltTheFox In reply to grayluki [2014-11-08 18:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's kinda a gradient of sorts. I'm not sure what to call it. xD
I just scribble with the pencil tool and clean it up with the airbrush tool. x3 It's quite simple really.
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grayluki In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-11-08 20:11:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay, thanks! I'll be sure to try it out Β
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DragonDragoo [2014-08-23 09:40:21 +0000 UTC]
Man, this looks like it took you forever to draw! So much detail, and drawn in MS Paint, I believe?
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CobaltTheFox In reply to DragonDragoo [2014-08-23 18:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Yup. MS Paint for the pony herself, and GIMP for transparency and watermarking. ^^
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DragonDragoo In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-08-23 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah, yeah I could recognize it. I use to use it.
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TheRealRiiver [2014-07-07 16:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Jeez, why's this gorgeous thing on TP? She looks awesome!
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CobaltTheFox In reply to TheRealRiiver [2014-07-08 20:34:43 +0000 UTC]
Because jealousy.
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YokoSenpiie [2014-07-06 13:22:21 +0000 UTC]
she is so cuteeee..... and scary?
im sorry for her
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PhantomOfDestiny [2014-07-03 13:21:51 +0000 UTC]
That's quite the scary little pony OC.Β
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m18garnek [2014-04-19 21:14:30 +0000 UTC]
I like her soo much!
sorry for my bad English ;~;
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CobaltTheFox In reply to m18garnek [2014-04-19 22:31:13 +0000 UTC]
It's alright. I understood you. :3
Thanks!
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CocoTehRiolu [2014-03-25 04:26:58 +0000 UTC]
I first think this was a "terrible pony" but then i actually READ it and i thought it was pretty cool. She IS a creepypasta character, so she has to have to this vibe of mary sue-ish characteristics. No offense though.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to CocoTehRiolu [2014-03-25 11:59:12 +0000 UTC]
Ikr, that's what I was shooting for when I made her. xD Thanks for giving her a chance. :3
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CocoTehRiolu In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-25 15:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Want to rp? You can be Monochromia. I'll be cringe mint; cocotehriolu.deviantart.com/ar⦠(filly form and probably one of my terrible OC's.)
You start if you want .
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CobaltTheFox In reply to CocoTehRiolu [2014-03-25 21:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Umm. I'm not sure if you're being legit or not. o3o
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MageOfBlood13 [2014-03-21 20:54:53 +0000 UTC]
"Rainbow Factory Waters"... Spectra. I'm pretty sure what you mean is spectra. There is a canon word for it.
And in the beginning you said Nightmare Night, and later you say Halloween. Just something for your later revisions.
I like the undead pony thing though ^u^ And the Rainbow Factory backstory for her death.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to MageOfBlood13 [2014-03-23 04:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for pointing that out! I totally overlooked the canon term for it mostly 'cause I didn't know it existed. I will keep that in mind for later.
As for Nightmare Night and Halloween, they're synonymous. I just sometimes use one in place of the other without meaning to. xD
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CobaltTheFox In reply to MageOfBlood13 [2014-03-24 20:55:41 +0000 UTC]
Good t'know I'm not alone in that regard. c:
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slowtown In reply to Dash-of-L0YALTY [2014-03-21 00:58:36 +0000 UTC]
because of the backstory
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CobaltTheFox In reply to Dash-of-L0YALTY [2014-03-20 19:28:49 +0000 UTC]
Me either. But it doesn't really bother me at this point. xD
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Dash-of-L0YALTY In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-20 19:31:35 +0000 UTC]
At least she wasn't really bashed on. xD
They even said it's a cool idea.
At least it doesn't bother you. xP
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CobaltTheFox In reply to Dash-of-L0YALTY [2014-03-20 19:35:22 +0000 UTC]
It would be silly to let it bother me at this point. So many of my charas have been posted over there, it has no effect on me anymore. xD
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Dash-of-L0YALTY In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-20 19:37:01 +0000 UTC]
Ah, alrighty. xD
I've never been on TP before, so, yeah.
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TheDarkWut [2014-03-20 10:05:19 +0000 UTC]
Whoever submitted this to TP is a complete fucktard. srs.
For a start, NOTHING ABOUT THIS IS MARY SUE.
Does it represent the creator? No.
Is it overpowered/idealized in any way? No.
Mary Sue does not mean what you think it means.
And second of all, like the submitter said, this is actually pretty cool. Her mane drips the color it used to have? God damn, that's cool.
Though "Able to become invisible, only shows herself to whom she chooses" is a little "eh", this is pretty damn good.
I salute.
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