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Edit 3-23-2014: Disabling comments. I may revisit her character reference later on, but for now it's staying as is until I can figure something out. <3 Void is no longer my ponysona, btw, so you can shut the fuck up about that. ;DEdit 3-20-2015: Guys! This character reference is old! Please go here for her updated information: goo.gl/CTmHUh
To see the updates made to this character reference, see this journal: fav.me/d6fl9wq
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Ikr? xD I bet the only reason she's on tp is 'cause I have been talking shit about them here and there on deviantART- when people stood up for me and talked down tp for posting my things. Lol, it truthfully doesn't bug me anymore. c;
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I see potential in TP. If they explained what is wrong with certain Ocs, and gave suggestions on how to fix em, that would have been nice.
Seriouslly, make it slower than RD. A possible solution for this is that a certain strain of passive magic manifested in void, allowing him to create wormholes
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I agree with what you said about TP. If they backed up their claims, maybe someone would take them seriously.
I like that idea, btw. I'll keep it in mind. c;
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*Reads the bio*
Some bronies are trying to hard to gain popularity in this place.
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*shrug* Well, I was just starting out on deviantART when I made her- and I wanted to be accepted. I thought the best way to do that would be to make something cool that people would like. :3 So, that's what happened, here.
And it worked for a while. In fact, this sudden influx of "OHEMGEEEE SHES FASTER THAN RD SHE IS SO MARRRYYYY SUUUUUUUUUEEEEE" is the first hate I've ever gotten for her. XD
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Maybe you could change that part.
I mean, where is the need to make your Ponysona perform an unique move from someone else?
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Hello! I hope you don't take this as rude, but I was curious on what you mean in this comment. I'm just wondering how giving an OC a certain bio is trying to gain popularity? Again, I'm not trying to harass or anything, I'm just genuinely curious xD
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If you read the bio, appears the OC is more faster than RD, that's an automatic no no no.
Is an obvious Mary-sue trait, being better than a canon character.Β
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I meant how does that mean they want popularity though? I see the bio and I have my own personal thoughts on it but I'm curious about what it has to do with popualrity (though the artist is pretty popular). Sorry for bothering you. (By the way, if you don't mind me asking; do you have a certain way that you come up with griffin OC designs? I've wanted to make one but I'm not sure how to do so without making them have unnatural colors or look the same as any other griffin OC. You don't have to answer this if you don't want to though).
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Is really that hard to explain?
Bronies like ¨badass¨ crap for colorful ponies, and this pony have it.
And for the Griffons, use cold colors for the fur, keep white plumage but you can dye the tip of the feathers.
Something like this:
Β daisuler1994.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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Ah, I see what you mean. I guess I was just confused by the wording (I'm very easily confused, haha). And thanks for the tips. He has an adorable design.
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No problem, and thanks.
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TP must really hate you.
But I like the design just a little bit of changed needed
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May I ask your opinion on that, then? What do you think needs a change? :3
Thanks for the sentiment, btw. c:
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Do a little bit with the story
So all these people can shut up about the damn Flash Void
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xD No need, I'm creating a new ponysona anyway. fav.me/d7ba4k2
I actually had to censor alot of this journal before I posted it. I had really let my anger get ahold of me when I wrote it. o3o
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Anger fills the Rage
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I too will make this short.Β
"Instead of doing the Sonic Rainboom, Void's move is called the "Flash Void". A small vacuum of space will surround her just as she breaks the sound barrier, and from the ground, she looks like a shooting star. Just as she reaches speeds of 200 MPH, a wormhole will open to wherever Void was heading." Β Β Β <--- 200 MPH is about a level 5 hurricane, just so you know. Considering this is a ponysona, you might want to delete that because ponysonas represent YOU, not an OC pony in ponyville. Oc's and ponysonas are different.
To anypony whom she doesn't consider a friend, she is cold and hostile. To those whom she does, however, she's laid-back and funny. No matter what mood she's in, she'll always be hostile or sarcastic." Β Β <--- that right there is kind of playing against itself considering it states she is laid-back and funny withΒ friends. You can't be laid-back and funny as well as hostile andΒ sarcastic. It can't be done.
Those are just two of the points I wanted to get across. I know you didn't ask for a critique, but I hope it helps.
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It does help to a certain degree. Someone has already mentioned the 200 mph thing, so I wont touch on that, but I can explain the hostility thing.
In person, when I'm around friends, I'm often a mixture of laid back, funny, and sarcastic. However, I can change moods at the drop of a hat- and tend to do so often, so that might explain the hostility thing.
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Thank you for explaining it to me. Just the wording I guess confused me about the personality.Β
And thank you for not getting upset. The last person I critiqued (who wanted it) exploded and blocked me when I tried to explain it to her. I appreciate you answering all of the answers you're giving to people as well.
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Of course. Noone's been rude to me, so I see no need to be rude to them. We're all just trying to explain our points of view, really, and I can respect that. :3
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I did not make this, I'm just a random commenter, but I'd like to point out that you can be funny, laid back, hostile and sarcastic at the same time:
Funny and sarcastic can go hand in hand
You can be laid back most of the time with friends, but if someone says the wrong thing you get angry and hostile very fast
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I guess that is true. It must be the way she typed it, to me she is all of those things at the same time.Β
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Yeah, I guess she could do a better job explaining it
But after all, she is 15...
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Ahh, I didn't see her age.
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Anyway, this is a weird request but you seem pretty good at helping people out, can you give me suggestions with my Ponysona?
mylittlepeasant.deviantart.comβ¦
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Thanks Peasant! I have seen you around before and I am surprised you want me to give suggestions.
I have been working on characters since 2009, and I love to give good feedback to people.
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That's good
And you seem insightful, so I trust you to not just say "lul rainbow hair = bad, whole character is bad because of that one thing"
It's weird how people don't seem to understand that her hair is rainbow because I dye mine that way, and it's a ponysona... no matter how many times I state it -__-
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Thanks. I once tried to give a good, insightful critique to someone (who wanted a critique) and they told me to "get off their d*ck... but the person was a girl so it confused me to no end.Β
I think she was underaged the way she exploded.
Well, some ponysonas can be too Op'ed and that's what really gets me. It's kind of like a wish fulfillment character to make the person look cooler and totally awesome or a total doormat.Β
My ponysona was an alicorn for no dang reason. However I changed her into a pegasus because my star sign is an air sign (and I loved pegasi even before MLP). I think people get way too over the top with how they label Mary Sues as well.
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Very true
And who the hell requests critiques and then gets annoyed when you critique them
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Ugh, people...
Anyway, I'm thinking of changing my Ponysona to a mule, what do you think of that?
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She would look so cute! We need more mules and donkeys in the fandom.
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I think so too
Donkeys are my favorite animals
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I like them because they look like a horse but aren't as big. Horses' size kind of intmidate me (and the fact that I was on a run-away horse before).
Have you see zedonks? They are a mix of zebra and donky. They are super adorable! Sadly they are sterile so they can't have their own foals 
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I love Zedonks (although I prefer the term 'Zonkey')
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I like "Zonkey" as well for the term.
Oh my gosh, make a Zonkey OC! That would be awesome
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I've already got one
mylittlepeasant.deviantart.comβ¦
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Alright, to make this short, I'll only put what you should improve upon.
-The backstory was, with all due respect, a bit Mary Sue-ish. I don't technically think it's possible for a pony to go 200 MPH, because that's somewhere around the speed of a category five hurricane, and last time I checked, it took every pegasus in Ponyville to even make and control one. Also, the teeth.
I would be fine with just one of these, just narrowed down a bit to make it less focused on her:
-Lost mother to some disease,Β murder, or even suicide
-"Once, there was a village, in which dwelled a cruel-hearted sorceress, Galaxy Gaze (or something like that). She was often sought out as a mentor in magic and potion brewing, but often rejecting the ones who requested her help, giving them a horrible curse to mark their shame. At one point, a pony confronted her, trying to change her heart for the better. Sadly, she failed; she was given a dragon's heart." Something like that for the "dragon at heart thing".
-Can go at the speed of a category five hurricane/200 MPH with enough strength and focus. She uses this to teleport, but only to distances within 100 miles. Something to that point, but not just whenever she wants.
Notes: Keep in mind this is your ponysona, and if something tragic does/did happen, like your mom really died, that would be fine in my book. But remember the list of things, and try to only choose one of them or just make them a little less...OP, with all due respect.
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Poison Ivy, Void's mother, was an old OC of mine that I gave to Softfang. She was a master with herbs and natural remedies- in addition to complicated surgeries. She came between a mother manticore and her cubs while out foraging for fresh remedies and was left mangled within an inch of her life. A witchdoctor heard her cries for help and came to her rescue. When she couldn't pay their fee however, Void (her first born filly) was cursed to be a dragon at heart with a terrible temperament. That's my explanation for that. c:
As for the 200 mph thing. I don't know where I was going with that, tbh. It sounded like a cool attribute to me at the time.
I really appreciate how much thought you put into your opinions and explanation. I also admire that you were respectful and not at all pushy with your suggestions. That's more than I can say about several people who come to me yelling about my charas. xD *hugs* I will keep your words in mind.
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I liked her personality and design though! ;3
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Cobalt, those shitheads known as Terrible Ponies put this beauty on their blog...can I give you a sympathetic hug? And throw rocks in their direction while doing so?
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Yeah.. I'd appreciate that.
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It'd be my pleasure
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Age 15? Well, that explains everything...
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Well, i'm 16 now. But at the time I made her, I was just shooting for something cool and interesting.. And well, I wasn't thinking. *shrug* :3
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