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Name: Monochromia
Nicknames: Monochrome, Chrome, Chromium, Drip, Mercutia (inspired by William Shakespeare's character, Mercutio, whose personality was also mercurial and unpredictable)
Type: Undead/Ghost Pegasus
Age: 7 (at death) is now closer to the age of 15 but her body remains unchanged
Gender: Mare
Relationship to Void: Virtual Stranger/Nightmare Occupant
Orientation: Straight
Special somepony: No one
Relations: Eclipsal Gem (friend/guardian) fav.me/d66prku comments.deviantart.com/1/4098…
Cutie Mark: None and will never have one
Abilities/Attributes:

  • Able to become invisible, only shows herself to whom she chooses
  • Can levitate things or herself, make objects or people drain of their color (an effect that's not permanent), and preform similar supernatural and paranormal acts.


Personality: Before her death, she was very trusting and gullable. She'd believe every lie you told her because she saw no evil in the world. She thought everything was perfect the way it was.

After being led into the Rainbow Factory by a good friend of hers, who assured her it would be safe and the factory had long since been abandoned, she's become untrusting and skittish rather than outgoing. She doesn't let anyone get very close to her due to this fact, but she's still lonely and sad that her friend would do such a thing.

Due to her shattered trust and childish innocence, she's very unpredictable and prone to screaming, crying, or becoming defensive at the drop of a hat. Doesn't like to hear lies, and when she hears one, she tends to set the truth straight (even if the truth is a damnable thing to hear).

Friendship/Loyalty: Although she doesn't have any friends anymore, she'd be more than willing to change her ways or learn to trust again if it meant another chance at having a friend.

Occupation: Haunt
Hometown: Everfree Forest
Current residence: Everfree Forest

Bio: Several years ago, in the Everfree Forest, Monochromia was born to a wealthy family who owned a small chain of stores. They lived in a Victorian era style house that loomed over the tree canopy.

Chrome went to school in Ponyville, however, and there she met her small group of friends. Quickly, she started to trust them, and within a few years of friendship, she was believing everything they said. They had heard of the Rainbow Factory, and seen it chugging smoke up in the sky in Cloudsdale, but never dared visit it. Dark rumors surrounded the building, saying something about it being mysteriously abandoned and the location of several mass murders. Soon enough, however, they had built up their courage enough to chance a trip to it, despite what was said about it.

So, on Nightmare Night one year, they flew up to Cloudsdale (all of them were pegasi) and crept inside. What they saw was bonechilling and unforgettable. There was Rainbow Dash, in the middle of the factory, supervising the disemboweling, chopping up, submersion, and dissolving, of various ponies. At the farthest top right corner of the factory, a machine shot the resulting liquid into the sky where it vaporized and became the rainbows that people so naively marveled over.

Screaming, two of three of Monochromia's friends attempted to run from the building. The commotion drew Rainbow Dash's attention, who flew over quickly, blocking the exit. "What do we have here," she purred, "Three particularly colorful fillies just dying to get a glimpse of my humble factory?" She laughed maniacally and quickly caged up two of Chome's three friends (and Chrome herself) in a small cage overlooking the factory. There, they were forced to look on as Rainbow disembowled, chopped up, submerged, and dissolved Chrome's remaining uncaged friend.

Then, when it came time to get another filly out of the cage, the filly fought Dash and got loose and flew down to the Cloudsdale Police Station to get help. Monochromia was next. She fought to the best of her ability, getting her ears and wings torn in the process, and ended up just getting tossed in the waters the way she was, without being mutilated, to avoid further fighting.

When the police arrived, Dash had fled the scene, and Monochromia was already dead in the Factory water. It took a little over a year to completely clean up and close down the factory, and around that time her body was found, very well preserved, near the bottom of the vat.

Blood and Organs: Rainbow Factory waters leaked into her system after prolonged exposure. The waters, once in her bloodstream, kept flowing even though her heart stopped and partially embalmed her and kept her from rotting. Due to the waters in her bloodstream, her blood is eternally flowing, will never dry up, and is slightly marbled with the colors of the ponies who previously died in it. Her blood, when in mortal form, stinks of rotten meat. When her skin and muscles melted from her body, her organs fell out and were discovered to be in such bad condition they were cremated. Oddly, however, when Monochromia chooses to scare people, she is often reported to be carrying, draped in, or sitting amongst piles of organs or ash. They are rumored to be the ones she lost.

Soul/Mortality: When she was removed from the Factory waters and was already buried, she realized she was still conscious. So she rose from the grave. Her soul is too tainted to go to heaven, but not quite enough to go to hell, so Monochromia roams Equestria in purgatory waiting for her judgement day, the day of eternal liberation. She's got unfinished business with Rainbow Factory Dash and won't dare rest until she's exterminated.

Mentality: Has the mentality/mental state of a depressed 15 year old.

Mouth and Saliva: Her teeth are sharp and jagged, due to her defensive nature, and her saliva is partially embued with Rainbow Factory waters.

Times of Activity: Monochromia is only active during certain times of the year, times when fear or happiness is particularly strong. Most commonly, she can be sighted around Christmastime and Halloween.


More information to come later. You are not allowed to use this character anywhere in any way, shape, or form without express written permission from me (unless you're making fanart).

Will proofread and correct errors later.
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I've always wanted a creepypasta character, and I thought that since Halloween was coming up, what better time to finally make one. <3 I know her backstory and such is kinda thrown together, so I promise I'll revise it sometime..

And since she's so complicated, in all likeliness I wouldn't draw her year-round. So, I decided to set two times of the year it's guaranteed I'd draw her. That way she don't go to waste. xP

To see the updates made to this character reference, see this journal: fav.me/d6fl9wq

Made using bases by *SelenaEde and *Softfang
Markings/Colors by ~TheSardine fav.me/d6rslph
Manestyle designed, as a collaborative effort, by =UnicornsOnFire and I.
Eclipsal Gem (c) ~DawnTheADHH1655
Background: www.wallconvert.com/wallpapers…
8 hours in Microsoft Paint and Gimp

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Comments: 439

CobaltTheFox In reply to ??? [2014-01-26 09:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *smiled timidly at her* It's nice to meet you..

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-26 13:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *she looked very sad, and didn't say anything else. She looked out the window and started to cry a little.* Brother...

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-26 18:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *at the sight of her tears, she laid her ears back and backed away slightly, unsure of how to react*

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-26 18:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *sniffle* I was hoping my brother would come save me from the Factory. I prayed for him to come. *she started crying a little more* But alas, he never showed up. I simply gave up when I realized my prayers and pleas were in vain.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-27 22:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *her ears perked* Wait, did you just say you've been to the factory???

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-27 22:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Sila: Mm-hmm. *nods* I was killed there.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-27 22:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *steps cautiously forward, her ears still held up and her eyes wide* So was I.. *she breathed* That was about eight years ago..

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-27 23:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *ears prick foward* Really? I was killed a little over a year ago.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-28 21:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *flicks her tail, leaving a sludge trail as the tip still dragged the ground* Yeah. These waters I drip.. They're from the factory..

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-28 21:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Sila: I kinda assumed that. I'm not dumb.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-30 23:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *cocks her head at her, frowning* I never said you were.

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-30 23:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Sila: I know. I'm just saying that it was kinda obvious, you know?

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-30 23:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *shrugs it off* You're right, I shouldn't have said anything.. Ponies are always sayin' I should speak up more, but whenever I do I get superfluous..

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-30 23:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *dry laugh* Yeah, me too...

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-30 23:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: ...I don't know what else to say.. *sheΒ levitated upwards, not flapping her wings, and settled alongside her Grandfather with a sigh*

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-30 23:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *bashful smile* You and I are very alike. You do realize that, right?

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-31 00:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *tilts her head, looking down at her* How so, other than the obvious?

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-31 01:02:01 +0000 UTC]

Sila: We both died at the Factory, we both want Rainbow to suffer for her crimes, we're both not the most sociable ponies around...shall I go on?

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-31 01:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *she nods* It's all true.. But, my question is why have you come here tonight? Are you staying around? HowΒ can I see you again and get to know you better?

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-31 01:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Sila: I have nowhere else to go. I wanted to find someone with a similar story to mine, so I wouldn't feel alone.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-31 12:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: You can stay here if you like.. *even though she wouldn't admit it, she was starting to like the idea of having company all the time* We could work together to get rid of Dash..

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-31 14:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Sila: Thanks for letting me stay here. I'm pretty sure our combined might will be enough to bring her down/

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-31 21:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: Oh, I've no doubt it will! *she beamed, drooling factory waters despite her better efforts*

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-31 22:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Sila: *Smiles back, showing bloodstained fox teeth in her mouth.*

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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-31 22:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Grandpa Moss: Oh good, everyone's friends with everyone.. Monochromia, why don't you show our guest to her room, so I can take a nap and get some peace and quiet. I've not been around this many ponies, that aren't our relatives,Β in at least a few decades..

Monochromia: *looks at him, tilting her head* Ok, gramps. *she flew through the ceiling of the labyrinth, assuming her guest could follow her*

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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-31 22:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Sila: Sorry for disturbing you, sir. *Floats up after Monochromia, catching up to her*

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UnicornsCreate In reply to ??? [2014-01-18 04:51:13 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty. <3

Although the story is heartbreaking. ;3;

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ScourgeXEveryoneOTP In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 13:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Wait

If the light in her eyes was drained in the factory, I don't think she'd have those eye shiny things.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to ScourgeXEveryoneOTP [2014-01-07 21:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Valid point, but the reason I included them is because:

1. It looks weird as hell without them, I'm sure

2. Just because the light was drained from her eyes doesn't mean light can't reflect off of them anymore

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The-Sunset-sunshine In reply to ??? [2014-01-06 08:23:37 +0000 UTC]

This must be looooong/

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CobaltTheFox In reply to The-Sunset-sunshine [2014-01-06 08:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Pardon? What must be long?

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The-Sunset-sunshine In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-06 08:41:24 +0000 UTC]

This Art. Must've took you ages?

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CobaltTheFox In reply to The-Sunset-sunshine [2014-01-06 09:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Heh. It did.

Β 

If I recall correctly, it took me over 4 hours.

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The-Sunset-sunshine In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-06 09:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Good enough! This will take me 4 days. I mean , look at the Details and the hair , I probably need extra coffee

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CobaltTheFox In reply to The-Sunset-sunshine [2014-01-06 09:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Shucks, you're exaggerating.

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The-Sunset-sunshine In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-06 09:59:00 +0000 UTC]

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to ??? [2014-01-02 19:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Winter Solstice: *Shivers in the cold autumn air, trotting further into the everfree forest. Looking first left, then right, she bumped into a rickety column that was attached to an old, Victorian-ey house. Being the naive pony she was, she opened the door and went inside. Shivering once again as a draft from an open window played with her deep blue mane, she looked around.* H-Hello? Anyone here? *At once she wished she could run back to Illusionary, but she wanted to be brave at the same time. Her slightly slitted pupils returned to the normal, pony shape to absorb more light. She could see clearly now. Nothing was there, really. No ponies as far as she could see.*

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-02 21:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *flickering slightly into view, she peers out from behind a wall several feet away. When she speaks, she can barely be heard, and she's emitting an ominous pale glow* H-hello..?

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-02 22:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Winter solstice: *Looks at Monochromia, horrified at what the pony had been through. She figured this was a ghost and it made perfect sense, and, still in shock, her eyes slitted again and the scales underneath her whitish-blue coat began to show. but she quickly calmed down and returned to a normal pegasus.* Oh.. hello, there! My name is Winter Solstice. I-I don't mean any harm to you, I promise.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 00:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *her voice still barely audible, and her entire body still flickering in and out of view, she stares at Winder Solstice with wide, scared eyes* What do you want from me..? *she backs away slowly, eventually making contact with a wall, momentarily, before her body passed right through it. Her ears are laid back and her wings are clutched tight to her body*

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-03 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Winter Solstice: I don't want anything... I got cross with Illusionary, My half-sister, and I ran out here by myself! I promise I would never do anything to hurt you. I know what you feel like. Lost with nobody to talk to... Right...? Well, I swear on my draconic-pony hybrid life that I will not hurt you, Nor take anything from you. If you could please just trust me. *reaches out to Monochromia with a shy smile.*

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *steps somewhat closer, her body still flickering and her ears still laid back. Her voice is still quiet.* That's asking a lot from me, considering what I've been through..

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-03 01:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Winter Solstice: I'm not good with sentimental stuff. ._. But I do mean it. I promise I won't hurt you. I may be a bit stubborn... Arrogant... Maybe a bit of a smart-alec... But I'm no killer. I learned piracy, not brutality.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 01:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *steps timidly closer, her tail dragging the ground* Noone can hurt me, I'm not mortal. *she smiles bashfully at Winter* I just don't like meeting new people.. anymore..Β Even if I can't be hurt..

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-03 01:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Winter: If you like, I can promise to not tell anyone you exist. I've kept many secrets worse than that for years on end.

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 02:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: Oh, it's too late for that. I've had many visitors coming to my house, trying to catch a glimpse of me, trying to prove to themselves that I exist.

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-03 02:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Winter Solstice: *Sits down, relievedΒ  that the conversation was getting a bit more casual.* I see. So... What's your name? You already know mine. *Nervously smiles, her fangs protruding a bit from her mouth.*

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 02:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *walks a little closer and sits down a few feet across from her* My name is Monochromia. I died when I was seven years old, and that was eight years ago. I'm 15, now, but I'll never change at this point. *she looked down at herself, taking in how small and fragile her body was before looking up again*

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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-03 02:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Winter: And I'm Winter Solstice, Obviously. I'mΒ  not sure how many years old I am, and I'm half dragon. *She flicked her wing and a feather floated off, revealing a dragon's scale.*

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CobaltTheFox In reply to XxDoomedSoulsXx [2014-01-03 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Monochromia: *stared in fascination at her scale and the feather which floated away* Wow, I've never met a hybrid before.. What can you do? *she sat up a bit straighter, suddenly very interested in what Winter had to say*

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