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Name: Monochromia
Nicknames: Monochrome, Chrome, Chromium, Drip, Mercutia (inspired by William Shakespeare's character, Mercutio, whose personality was also mercurial and unpredictable)
Type: Undead/Ghost Pegasus
Age: 7 (at death) is now closer to the age of 15 but her body remains unchanged
Gender: Mare
Relationship to Void: Virtual Stranger/Nightmare Occupant
Orientation: Straight
Special somepony: No one
Relations: Eclipsal Gem (friend/guardian) fav.me/d66prku comments.deviantart.com/1/4098…
Cutie Mark: None and will never have one
Abilities/Attributes:
- Able to become invisible, only shows herself to whom she chooses
- Can levitate things or herself, make objects or people drain of their color (an effect that's not permanent), and preform similar supernatural and paranormal acts.
Personality: Before her death, she was very trusting and gullable. She'd believe every lie you told her because she saw no evil in the world. She thought everything was perfect the way it was.
After being led into the Rainbow Factory by a good friend of hers, who assured her it would be safe and the factory had long since been abandoned, she's become untrusting and skittish rather than outgoing. She doesn't let anyone get very close to her due to this fact, but she's still lonely and sad that her friend would do such a thing.
Due to her shattered trust and childish innocence, she's very unpredictable and prone to screaming, crying, or becoming defensive at the drop of a hat. Doesn't like to hear lies, and when she hears one, she tends to set the truth straight (even if the truth is a damnable thing to hear).
Friendship/Loyalty: Although she doesn't have any friends anymore, she'd be more than willing to change her ways or learn to trust again if it meant another chance at having a friend.
Occupation: Haunt
Hometown: Everfree Forest
Current residence: Everfree Forest
Bio: Several years ago, in the Everfree Forest, Monochromia was born to a wealthy family who owned a small chain of stores. They lived in a Victorian era style house that loomed over the tree canopy.
Chrome went to school in Ponyville, however, and there she met her small group of friends. Quickly, she started to trust them, and within a few years of friendship, she was believing everything they said. They had heard of the Rainbow Factory, and seen it chugging smoke up in the sky in Cloudsdale, but never dared visit it. Dark rumors surrounded the building, saying something about it being mysteriously abandoned and the location of several mass murders. Soon enough, however, they had built up their courage enough to chance a trip to it, despite what was said about it.
So, on Nightmare Night one year, they flew up to Cloudsdale (all of them were pegasi) and crept inside. What they saw was bonechilling and unforgettable. There was Rainbow Dash, in the middle of the factory, supervising the disemboweling, chopping up, submersion, and dissolving, of various ponies. At the farthest top right corner of the factory, a machine shot the resulting liquid into the sky where it vaporized and became the rainbows that people so naively marveled over.
Screaming, two of three of Monochromia's friends attempted to run from the building. The commotion drew Rainbow Dash's attention, who flew over quickly, blocking the exit. "What do we have here," she purred, "Three particularly colorful fillies just dying to get a glimpse of my humble factory?" She laughed maniacally and quickly caged up two of Chome's three friends (and Chrome herself) in a small cage overlooking the factory. There, they were forced to look on as Rainbow disembowled, chopped up, submerged, and dissolved Chrome's remaining uncaged friend.
Then, when it came time to get another filly out of the cage, the filly fought Dash and got loose and flew down to the Cloudsdale Police Station to get help. Monochromia was next. She fought to the best of her ability, getting her ears and wings torn in the process, and ended up just getting tossed in the waters the way she was, without being mutilated, to avoid further fighting.
When the police arrived, Dash had fled the scene, and Monochromia was already dead in the Factory water. It took a little over a year to completely clean up and close down the factory, and around that time her body was found, very well preserved, near the bottom of the vat.
Blood and Organs: Rainbow Factory waters leaked into her system after prolonged exposure. The waters, once in her bloodstream, kept flowing even though her heart stopped and partially embalmed her and kept her from rotting. Due to the waters in her bloodstream, her blood is eternally flowing, will never dry up, and is slightly marbled with the colors of the ponies who previously died in it. Her blood, when in mortal form, stinks of rotten meat. When her skin and muscles melted from her body, her organs fell out and were discovered to be in such bad condition they were cremated. Oddly, however, when Monochromia chooses to scare people, she is often reported to be carrying, draped in, or sitting amongst piles of organs or ash. They are rumored to be the ones she lost.
Soul/Mortality: When she was removed from the Factory waters and was already buried, she realized she was still conscious. So she rose from the grave. Her soul is too tainted to go to heaven, but not quite enough to go to hell, so Monochromia roams Equestria in purgatory waiting for her judgement day, the day of eternal liberation. She's got unfinished business with Rainbow Factory Dash and won't dare rest until she's exterminated.
Mentality: Has the mentality/mental state of a depressed 15 year old.
Mouth and Saliva: Her teeth are sharp and jagged, due to her defensive nature, and her saliva is partially embued with Rainbow Factory waters.
Times of Activity: Monochromia is only active during certain times of the year, times when fear or happiness is particularly strong. Most commonly, she can be sighted around Christmastime and Halloween.
More information to come later. You are not allowed to use this character anywhere in any way, shape, or form without express written permission from me (unless you're making fanart).
Will proofread and correct errors later.
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I've always wanted a creepypasta character, and I thought that since Halloween was coming up, what better time to finally make one. <3 I know her backstory and such is kinda thrown together, so I promise I'll revise it sometime..
And since she's so complicated, in all likeliness I wouldn't draw her year-round. So, I decided to set two times of the year it's guaranteed I'd draw her. That way she don't go to waste. xP
To see the updates made to this character reference, see this journal: fav.me/d6fl9wq
Made using bases by *SelenaEde and *Softfang
Markings/Colors by ~TheSardine fav.me/d6rslph
Manestyle designed, as a collaborative effort, by =UnicornsOnFire and I.
Eclipsal Gem (c) ~DawnTheADHH1655
Background: www.wallconvert.com/wallpapers…
8 hours in Microsoft Paint and Gimp
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Comments: 439
Splashia In reply to ??? [2014-03-21 03:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow your first non-offensive comment.
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TheDarkWut In reply to Splashia [2014-03-22 12:56:18 +0000 UTC]
This is more like the third or fourth non-offensive comment.
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Splashia In reply to TheDarkWut [2014-03-22 19:13:01 +0000 UTC]
Well I always see you posting crud on TP stuff. So it was a surprise that you said that, instead of saying "my eyez this sucks a$$ gtfo"
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TheDarkWut In reply to Splashia [2014-03-26 07:10:02 +0000 UTC]
I've praised other unnecessary TP submissions before, it's just a pretty rare circumstance. Most stuff on TP should be on TP, but there's the occasional dumbass who's like "OH THERES A PIXEL OF RAINBOW ON DIS, MARY SUE, MARY SUE".
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CobaltTheFox In reply to ??? [2014-03-20 18:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your support. :3
Honestly, I've not done very much with Chrome here in a good long while. I need to make a doll of her here pretty soon, to show TP I don't give a fuck what they say and will keep loving her no matter what. XD
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ChildofAura In reply to ??? [2014-03-20 06:05:40 +0000 UTC]
First Illusionary, and now Monochromia? And they say she's "Mary Sue-ish" because of the BACKGROUND?
There needs to be an official declaration that Terrible Ponies doesn't know how to open up a dictionary and look up the actual definition of Mary Sue.
Sorry this happened to another one of your characters, Cobalt. D:
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CobaltTheFox In reply to ChildofAura [2014-03-20 18:41:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your condolences, but really, there's no need. I find it pretty fucking hilarious that they'd keep bothering with me. xD I mean, seriously, every time one of my things gets put on their blog I always rack up followers/favs/comments. xD
It doesn't even take me by surprise anymore, to hear my things were posted there. X3
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ChildofAura In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-21 01:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Well, the publicity's always good. XD
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TheDarkWut In reply to ChildofAura [2014-03-20 09:42:15 +0000 UTC]
I literally sent them a dictionary definition of Mary Sue through the ask box and they haven't fucking posted it.
It happens way too much, that an OC is called a Mary Sue just because they think it means something they don't like.
Fuck's sake.
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ChildofAura In reply to TheDarkWut [2014-03-20 15:37:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm totally checking back now XD That'll ruffle their feathers quite a bit.
It really does, though; "I don't like neon, so neon equals mary sue!" "I don't like a tragic backstory, so tragic backstory equals mary sue!"
They're basically limiting people's creative abilities.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to ChildofAura [2014-03-20 18:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, they are! xD
Seriously, they need to let people do what they want with their charas. If they don't like it so much, they should just quit looking. xp
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ChildofAura In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-21 01:00:36 +0000 UTC]
Exactly. These characters don't physically harm anyone.
It really annoys me when they're like "OH NO MY EYES."
It's like their retinas are pussies.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to ChildofAura [2014-03-21 03:03:09 +0000 UTC]
Ikr. xD I'd think they'd be used to seeing such things at this point.
Besides, what does publicizing 'poor quality ocs' really prove? It doesn't do anything besides make them look like gigantic asshats to the rest of humanity. <:/
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ChildofAura In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-21 03:04:01 +0000 UTC]
Exactly.
Not even Soft Fang likes them, and she's one of DA's most popular pony doll makers.
That's where you know where you're fucking up.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to ChildofAura [2014-03-21 03:10:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Speaking of her, we're good friends. :3 We talked earlier today about TP and we both agreed they're a total joke. XD
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ChildofAura In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-21 03:54:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm not surprised that you two are friends; you're both really good at using bases and making OCs.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to Splashia [2014-03-18 21:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment. ^^
I used Gimp. :3
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Splashia In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-19 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]
That's pretty impressive Gimp work! I work with Adobe Flash CC and Toon Boom Studio 8.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to Splashia [2014-03-20 18:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Well, truthfully, I dolled her in MS Paint and then pasted layers into Gimp so I could do transparency. xP It's the only program I've got with support for that. xD
Thanks, though! ^w^
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Splashia In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-21 03:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow, doing that in MS Paint is even better
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DoodlingLil In reply to ??? [2014-03-18 20:47:58 +0000 UTC]
I don't see how this made it on terrible ponies, The filly looks adorable and the detail is amazing.
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TheDarkWut In reply to DoodlingLil [2014-03-20 09:43:42 +0000 UTC]
Like the person who submitted it to TP said "it's a cool idea".
Then they spewed some bullshit about it being a Mary Sue and now it's on TP.
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OlgaDaPugg In reply to DoodlingLil [2014-03-19 20:56:25 +0000 UTC]
True, that filly is adorable but the THOSE EYES O.O, I don't think that the scleras don't look that good on a filly... I know she was contaminated with the Rainbow Factory waters but It's just weird... :/
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CobaltTheFox In reply to DoodlingLil [2014-03-18 21:41:26 +0000 UTC]
I don't see, either. *shrug* ^^
Everyone else seems to love her.
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SymphonicLullabies In reply to DoodlingLil [2014-03-18 20:59:11 +0000 UTC]
terribleponies only said the design was a bit complicated and the backstory was a bit Mary Sue-ish. She didn't say she didn't like it at all.
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iPandacakes In reply to ??? [2014-03-01 20:02:55 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations!
Monochromia was nominated for "Pony OC of the Month - March"
The nomination was anonymous, and you will find out who nominated you at the end of the competition.
Please click here to go to the final voting call: ipandacakes.deviantart.com/jou…
You are not allowed to ask others for your vote or advirtise it.
To make this fair, watchers must vote for who THEY want. If you advirtise it, your watchers will want to vote for you; and that isn't entirely fair.
Good luck !
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CobaltTheFox In reply to iPandacakes [2014-03-03 19:32:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is becoming a regular thing, huh? xD
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iPandacakes In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-03-03 21:39:02 +0000 UTC]
apparently xD
people love you ; w ;
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RedLotusPony In reply to ??? [2014-02-25 17:20:15 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia is so cute and creepy. Her story is so sad too...
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weredragon666 In reply to ??? [2014-01-20 20:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: *he is drifting through the Everfree Forest one night, his transparent form glowing slightly in the dark. His mane was composed of blue spectral flames, since he died in a fire, and his eyes emitted thin plumes of silver-white smoke. His celestial markings, once a proud shining crimson, were now a humble pale lilac color. He drifted near Monochromia's home and stopped.* What's this sudden chill down my back?
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-20 22:37:11 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia: *peering from underneath a window sill at the newcomer, her entire body flickers in and out of view. Eventually, she sees him slow to a stop and she can't help but slowly dissolve through the floorboards in the hopes he won't see her*
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-20 22:40:11 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: *he drifts closer to Mono's home and floats through a wall, his mane shedding tiny cyan embers as he moved.* Hello?
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-21 02:31:10 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia: *deep beneath the house, she's talking with one of the family elders about the recent flood of visitors* I don't understand Grampa, it's like nopony 'round here has ever seen a ghost before.. It seems like every day I get a new visitor, when I used to not get any at all..
Grandfather Moss: *a long dead unicorn, all bones, with vines hanging from his neck, growing in his bones and sprouting out of his few patches of skin, and twining around his bony tail, he looks at her from his casket with a serious glint in his eye* They're talking about you. Rumors are spreading, saying you're gonna go bring about revenge for all those ponies taken by the Factory.. You really shouldn't have let that little piece of information slip, you know.
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-21 02:46:47 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: *he has also descended through the floor and is hiding in the same room that Mono and Grandpa Moss are in, his body completely transperant and his mane extinguished to avoid being seen. He listens in on what else they have to say.*
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-21 23:05:18 +0000 UTC]
Grandfather Moss: *peers down at her* I can't really say much else about this. I know that Dash deserves to pay up for what she had done to you, and those before you. So, at least your cause is noble.
Monochromia: *nods* I know.. I just don't want to actually kill anypony, no matter how much they deserve it..
Grandfather Moss: It's either you or somepony else that needs to do it, because until that happens you won't have the peace you need to move on. And neither will I, because I promised I'd stay here with you while you exacted your revenge. *his ear twitches* Also, you should know we're not alone right now..
Monochromia: What do you mean?
Grandfather Moss: There's someone else here, of course! *he shouts in Seishigami's direction* Come out, neither of us will hurt you.
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-21 23:20:01 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: *his mane pops back to life, like an automatic fireplace being turned on, then begins to steadily burn again. He slowly drifts out if the wall he was hiding in, taking the scent of burning flesh inside with him. He spoke with a soft, polite voice* Hello, fellow specters.
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-22 21:51:19 +0000 UTC]
Moss: *nods at him* Greetings. May we ask why you're here?
Monochromia: *cowers behind her grandfather, her entire body flickering in and out of sight and her nose wrinkled in disgust at the awful smell*
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-22 21:55:45 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: I am here because I wanted to see just how well young Monochromia was doing. Me being the god of spirits, I am able to watch over all spirits in Equestria at any given time. Monochromia here has especially piqued my interest. *he smiled at her.*
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-23 23:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia: *stepped out from behind Moss and stood in front of him, suddenly unafraid* Why have I sparked your interest? Is it something I've done? *she glanced down at her hooves sheepishly*
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-23 23:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Seishigami: I have brought someone with me who has a similar story to yours. I wondered that she might benifit from meeting a ghost like her. *he looked over his shoulder and callf softly.* Come along, now. Come along.
*another ghostly filly drifts into veiw. She appeared to be 7 or 8, and she was a kitsune. She had the long ears of her people, but three eternally bleeding stumps remained of her tails. She once had a horn, but her horn had been snapped. Her body was a very pale greyish-pink, and her eyes were black with silver rings in them. She stayed near Seishigami shyly.*
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-25 20:53:07 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia: *cocked her head at the newcomer and glanced at her warily, flattening her ears and backing away slightly* H-hello..
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-25 20:55:59 +0000 UTC]
Newcomer: *she slowly comes closer, but she still stays close to Seshei.* H-hi... *her voice was very very soft, almost too soft for Mono to hear.*
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CobaltTheFox In reply to weredragon666 [2014-01-25 20:59:41 +0000 UTC]
Monochromia: What's your name? *her voice is somewhat less quiet now that she's realized the newcomer isn't there to hurt her*
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weredragon666 In reply to CobaltTheFox [2014-01-25 21:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Newcomer: I'm Silatenin...but my brother called me Sila.
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