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Edit 3-23-2014: Disabling comments. I may revisit her character reference later on, but for now it's staying as is until I can figure something out. <3 Void is no longer my ponysona, btw, so you can shut the fuck up about that. ;DEdit 3-20-2015: Guys! This character reference is old! Please go here for her updated information: goo.gl/CTmHUh
To see the updates made to this character reference, see this journal: fav.me/d6fl9wq
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Yeah, I had the same with Silence, I wanted her to be something creepy and red and black at first, then I noticed it's pretty damn overused.... and not scary in the slightliest. Good thing I changed my mind before making something of her in that shape and form.
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I'm particularly enjoying the choice of colors in her mane and tail.
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She looks nice, aside from the fact that she seems incredibly OPed.
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I appreciate the sentiment. :3
Keep in mind when I made her I was just starting out on deviantART, and I wasn't terribly well acquainted with MLP either. xp *shrug*
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I do have to say that I agree with some of the people that are comment, though. A ponysona is a persona, which is, by definition, "the aspect of someone's character that is presented to or perceived by others". If you're incredibly fast, then perhaps this pony applies to you. However, she seems more like an OC, or Original Character, in my opinion. Which isn't bad, it just means she's a cool OC as opposed to an unrealistic ponysona.
I'd also like to suggest that you turn down her speed. Peregrine falcons are known for their speed, and they're the fastest birds on the planet, but they can ONLY reach 200 mph when they're in a steep dive.Β
That aside, I think she looks pretty cool.
And don't feel bad about getting so many critiques. Making OCs and personas is a trail-and-error process, the key thing is not making them too overdone, and not mixing up a persona with an ordinary OC. It's certainly never too late to adjust your persona's/OC's traits, and if you realize something's out of place, don't be afraid to fix it.
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Well, she's like a self-insert of sorts- an OC that's taking my place in the pony world, but isn't supposed to represent me. That's what I was getting at, when I made her. c:
I will keep your tips in mind though. I do appreciate the advice. :3
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Are you actually fast in real life?
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Well, daresay I am faster than most people I know (other than the one's who are in track)- when pitted against them.
But I chose that as her talent, at the time, 'cause I was unsatisfied with my art. I'm not anymore, though. :3
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I have no problem with her EXCEPT the face that she is faster than Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow Dash is CANNONLY the fastes flyer in Equestria.Β
Other than that she is AMAZING!
I dont know why, but she was on TerriblePonies. Ugh
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Yeah, alot of people have been complaining about her speed. But, she's not the only oc out there who so happens to be faster than RD.
and It's not like it matters, anyway. She's never gonna be canon. xD
Thanks, though!
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Hello there, I just saw this comment and its on something that i've been wondering for awhile so I thought I'd ask someone about it.
(I apologize in advance for any mistakes, as its 12, and i'm very tired. |D)
What is the big deal about being fast than Rainbow? I mean, cannonly shes fastest. What does that matter? By saying shes the fastest pony ever, thats pretty much a Mary Sue trait. (Which I am not saying Dash is a Mary Sue, i'm just pointing that out. ^^")
Everyone is going to have someone who surpasses them in something, and cannon characters like Twilight and Rainbow are no exception to that. I suppose that makes me wonder is all. I apologize for bothering you with this. |D
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If Rainbow Dash being the fastest flyer in Equestria is kinda Mary Sue, than the ponysona's speed would be Mary Sue too.
((i understand -v-))
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I'm not saying Dash is though. I'm saying with no competition she would be considered one.
I apologize, that comment was horribly worded. |D
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Pega-Sue rules #1: Every pega-sue easily is faster than Rainbow Dash
Pega-Sue rules #1-1: Therefore every pega-sue can perform its own ripoff of a supposedly rare Guile move, but is much rarer and much faster than that shitty Sonic Rainboom.
Pega-Sue rules #1-2: If #1-1 doesn't present, the pega-sue can perform two or more Sonic Rainbooms at once, or in a row.
Exception: If said OC is no-, or just a littleΒ fasterΒ than Rainbow Dash (they can make each other run for their money), and nor #1-1 neither #1-2 are present, we don't talk about a pega-sue.
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Yes, because one trait alone makes something a Mary Sue. Very well done.Β
Here, check these videos out, learn something. It seems you really, really need it.
silverromance.deviantart.com/jβ¦
Β My entire point is, Cannon characters aren't these almighty things that ocs/fcs cant live up to. This isn't even cannon for heavens sake, so whats the big deal? Oh no, something can do something better than a cannon character. Even Rainbow Dash has to have some competition, or according to TerriblePonies 'views' she is a Mary Sue.Β
Β You cant only apply things to Fan Characters, because not only is it not right, its just stupid. Like in real life, if something is alright for one person, or in this case character be it cannon or otherwise, then its alright for another. Rainbow Dash's skills don't apply only to her, Spike even said Pegasus like Rainbow Dash can pull off the Sonic Rainboom.Β
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Β If you don't get what that means, it means that we can make the inference Ponies can indeed go as fast as, if not faster, than Rainbow Dash, and do the Sonic Rainboom. Just because someone's character can do things better than a cannon character, doesn't mean they are a Mary Sue. Void here has flaws, just like other ponies. That only makes her imperfect, which means if the definition is a perfect character, Void cannot be a Mary Sue.
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Yeah, now that I look at it, a Mary Sue joke wasn't the most appropriate in this case, I admit it.
No, it doesn't make her a sue, it's just a ridiculously clichΓ© concept, and I don't really remember you writing anywhere she beats Dash to ground.
So yeah, apologies for the shit joke.
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She was on TP for that specific reason.
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OHSHEONTPMEANSSHEISBADDD!
[JK i freaking love your ocs.]
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Thanks. x3 I really don't get why Terrible Ponies bothers with me anymore, tbh. :3
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op
she be on terrible pones
prepare .>.
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Yeah, I noticed. xD
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DAT HAIR
DAT AWESOME, WONDERFUL HAIR
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Aww, thank you. x3
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I love your sona so much, Cobalt. She is amazing.
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Sombara: *the black and white kitsune mare is standing on top of a big statue near where Void is. An invisible barrier of magic surrounds the area so that Void can't get away. Once the barrier is up, Sombara begins to sing* So you think you've got friends in high places with the power to put us on the run?
Nikiju: *the rainbow kitsune appears atop another statue and continues the song* Well forgive us these smiles on our faces. You'll know what power is when we are done. *she wraps her tails around herself and vanishes in a puff of rainbow smoke.*
Both: *appear behind Void* Hon...
(Note: Both Sombara and Nikiju have nine tails.)
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Void: .3. What in the Sam Hell is going on here..
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Sombara: You're playing with the big mares now. *the two of them began to circle around Void like cats.*
Nikiju: Playing with the big mares now.
Sombara: *spoken* Oh, that's pretty. *sung* Every spell and gesture-
Nikiju: -tells you who's the best.
Both: You're playing with the big mares now!
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Void: *raises a hoof, unsure whether to be alarmed, amused, or outright confused. Her expression betrays her puzzlement*
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Sombara: Ignore your apprehension.
Nikiju: Watch a true magician-
Both: -give an exhibition how you're playing with the big mares now! *witch-like cackling*
*their necklaces began to glow as the two danced intracatly in circles around Void. The glow got brighter until Void was forced to cover her eyes with one wing. When she could look again, two dragons, one with silvery-grey scales with black stripes and the other with rainbow scales, had replaced the kitsune ponies*
Dragons: You're playing with the big mares now!
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Void: *now upset, and alarmed, her eyes are gradient now rather than solid in color and faded markings show underneath her eyes* Quit screwing with me! What do you guys want!?
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Both: *they start to sing louder, faster and sounded angrier* By the might of Jusabi, before us you will kneel! Kneel to our superior power!
Nikiju: You put up a front!
Sombara: You put up a fight!
Nikiju: And just to show we feel no spite-
Sombara: -you can be our acolyte!
Both: But first, hon, it's time to bow. BOW DOWN!!!! *the two dragons bowed as if they were in front of Nightmare Moon*
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Void: *eyes completely slitted now, and markings now completely in sight and glowing fiercely* I bow to no one. I don't care who you are. Kill me, see if I care. You won't get me to bow before you. *sheΒ spits on the ground in front of them, narrowly missing their claws*Β
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Both: *start to sing "You're playing with the big mares!" over and over again as they started to get taller. They spread their large wings and forced Void into a corner, their slitted eyes glowing viciously and emitting black or white smoke. The voices got more and more intense and Void's sanity was being drained quite quickly as they sang*
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Void: *forces herself to look away from their flashing and glowing eyes and she stares intently at the ground as a dragon tail and a pair of webbed wings sprout from her body. She whispers under her breath,* Fuck off.. *suddenly, while they're concentrating on corralling her and on their singing, she spies an opening in the corner of their circle and she narrowly squeezes through the gap as fast as she can and she runs off, leaping into the air and taking flight. She doesn't wait to see if they're following her as she flies at breakneck speed towards the Everfree Forest*
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Both: *they are flying after her, still singing. Their voices were buzzing in Void's skull like a hive of angry hornets.* YOU'RE PLAYING WITH THE BIG MARES NOW!!!!!! *as they screamed the last word, Void felt like she had been struck in the chest with a huge concrete block. Her head felt like she had nails pounded through her skull and she felt quite weak all of a sudden.*
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Void: *plummets to the ground, her body growing to about 1.5x the size of Twilight's library and her muzzle extends. When she opens her mouth to scream, no sound comes out, only a thick black smoke and a few sparks. Her body lands on the ground in a crumpled mess, crushing several trees beneath her tremendous girth, and she lays there almost completely in defeat. She collects herself as best she can, standing up shakily, and she shouts as loud as she dares at the two dragons* If this is how you gain followers, it's no fuckin' wonder you don't ever get people bowing down to you. *she snorts smoke in their faces, towering high above them as she rears onto her hind legs, she roars in their faces, sparks flying everywhere from her maw* LEAVE ME ALONEEEEEEE!!!
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Sombara: *spoken, now that their song is finished* Well then, if you're not willing to listen to us-
Nikiju: -then perhaps you would be willing to listen to our master. *she looked up to the night sky and raised her brush tipped tail to a constellation. After poking some dots in the sky with the ink on her tail tip, the constellation glowed, revealing a proud fox with 13 tails.*
Both: ALMIGHTY JUSABI, COME FORTH TO OUR REALM!!!!!!
Image: *eyes flash as the outline comes to life and jumps down from the sky. The thirteen tailed fox landed before Abyss, as he was twice as big as she was, his tails flared out and his body dropped down in a battle stance*
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Abyss: *completely unperturbed, she too takes a battle stance. Smoke billows from her nostrils as she pounces upon the image, which completely disintegrates under her claws. Ignoring the temporary apparition, she turns her attention to the two dragon kitsunes and she charges after them, smoke billowing from her maw, which is now glowing with an uncontrolled inner fire.*
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Jusabi: *he reappears in front of Abyss. He was real this time, and his lightning embued sword hovered over his back, as if it were being weilded by a pair of invisible arms. He unleashed a vicious flurry of slashes and jabs, all of them inflicting serious damage on the dragon. When she fell, Jusabi stood over her and used one of his massive white paws to crush her head, not enough to kill her, just to put her in very intense pain.*
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Abyss: *splutters and chokes* I will never bow down to any power that will force people to follow it this way. Ever.
I don't know what I did to deserve this, but I don't care anymore. Just..
KILL ME.Β Don't hold back. *tears of pain and defeat bead along her eyes, as her own blood flowed around her broken body*
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Jusabi: I never wanted anyone to be forced to follow me! *he glares at the two nearby dragons, whom he quickly swats out of the air with his massive tails* I am sorry that they troubled you, Void. I shall see to it that it will not happen again. *he let her up and used his godly powers to heal her wounds* Now go. I will not fight you any more this night.
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Abyss: *now free, she flies away as fast as she can, leaving a trail of tears and smoke behind her as she performs the flash void and teleports thousands of miles away*
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Jusabi: *watches her leave, then turns to punish his two corrupt followers.*
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o.O the birthday is a day before mine....
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