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Published: 2017-05-15 00:53:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 945; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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"I will protect my family..."***
Sybil has no mask since she doesn't physically fight, but I will say that while Ira leads the family, Sybil is the heart of it. She may not react much and she certainly is so very weak, but she genuinely cares about her family. She and Ira are two sides of the same coin: Ira is the aggressive, all consuming, offense, Sybil is the icy, unyielding defense. They also seem to understand each other all too well. No one messes with Sybil.
This one took a while and I didn't really use a whole lot of messy lines here like with Wrath. But I think this one came out all right and still gives the cold look I was going for. Definitely a good 'Ice Queen' vibe to go with Ira's 'Hot Blooded monster' vibe.
Time to work on the next one! A long with everything else I have to do, oof.
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Thank you so much for the tips! I do agree that her glowing eye needs to be shifted a bit and I can try to blur the drones in the background to give Sybil more focus. I'm glad that she definitely reminds you of Sloth and now I need to get going on the next four sins asap!!
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Ah, you're very welcome!
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It would be that in some strange way there was an idea going for us: something that was DEPRESSING.
We had an idea going for us indeed... what a lovely critique you are to see--it is because you are extremely great at drawing indeed.
I don't have much to say, honestly. You have potential to be an amazing artist, darling! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
I just want you to know that in some strange way it would be that there was something benign--there was something oh so benign.........!: the fact that you got all five stars but just one--TECHNIQUE.
Listen closely--it was a high score so please do not worry fair damsel. I want you to know that it was that you just need to improve your prose in drawing lines, of course.
I see that you were aiming for a MACABRE ABSTRACT STYLE... something like TIM BURTON.
.....Very well! Very impressive indeed.
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Thank you for the critique! I'll get better at lines some day!
Some day...
But thank you so much!
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I think that you can get really good at drawing lines very soon indeed as long as you listen to me:
Just make sure that you feel the strokes that you draw. Indeed.
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Hehe thanks for the tip
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You are so WELCOME, sweetheart!
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Hehehe well feedback is good and yours was constructive! I really appreciate it and it's always nice to be nice
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Omg! Cool! 
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Was she like this because of an accident, or because of her own choosing? I feel like she really isn't the type to commit sloth unless she was forced into this state. She really could use some food; her cheeks need inflating! Also, googly-eyed cameras, cameras, EVERYWHERE! She must be very lonely; how sad. To me, she's Futaba (Persona 5) crossed with Gundam Tanaka (Danganronpa). I know those robots are also packing missiles, but because of how you stylized them with the highlights, they look kind of cute and adorable! Just make sure this woman can get her daily exercise.
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I love the thought you put behind it, but also the eerie feeling you achieved with the black and white, and her slightly ghostish blue eyes
Absolutely time to work on the next one, I believe you will make a lot of more cool things!
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Hehe thanks! The next one coming up is good ole Lust and he's gonna be fun!
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XD I have already seen him, sounds cool!
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The expression is spot on. She looks cold. The simple bold lines show allot of style and the slight use of photoshop makes the foreground "pop." The level of detail is just "right." To much detail, lines, shading, etc., and the viewer may get lost in what the artist is trying to convey. Too little detail and the picture could look bland and not well thought out. This pic walks that thin line very well. You can see the detail in the lines of the pic. The hand drawn feel of the image is what give the pic its "feel" vs the straighter lines one may get from a photoshop or a sketch program. Overall nice image that is well balance and that expression is what really makes this work.
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Hehe thanks! I'm also glad you like her expression and I'm really happy to hear that I was effective in conveying the right level detail! The lines are tough so I happy that overall this image is a success!
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If I can say a word, this is an interesting and aggressive use of black and white. Shades and lines are used so well that the bbare amount of them still contributes to a great realistic effect
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Thank you so much! I am making a whole series of these aggressive inked pieces for each sin (Lust is next ) so I hope to continue this. I love inked artwork and graphic novel style art so while these take a while for me, I still love doing it.
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Oooh, I like series! I don't know why, but I like the idea of them. And I too know, time can be long, but results more often than not make up for the wait
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Agreed! Seven Sins are just so fun to draw too! Hopefully Lust comes out good
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I'll wait then: good work!
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Good solid lines. To judge it based on your style I would suggest working on the hair a little bit, that is what really seems out of place. The robots need a bit of shading to give them some depth too, especially the one on the back left hand corner. It seems a bit too flat.
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Thanks for the comment! I can see where some more shading on the backs would be needed. Her hair is tough; I designed her to have super straight hair so it is admittedly out of my comfort zone. However I'm glad you like the lines
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This is absolutely stunning! If I had to note one thing that appeared off, the head is a bit long and the chin is rather pointed. Of course, this might just be your style, and if it is, I'm very sorry if I offended you in any way. This is really incredible and I look forward to seeing your work in the future.
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No worries! She is suppose to look pretty thin, but I can see how the face would be a little on the long side. Something to tweak next time I draw her!
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Again, I want to make it clear that I'm impressed and definitely couldn't do better. Thank you for being mature about my comment
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You are very complimentary so no worries! Thank you for taking the time to give your thoughts. I appreciate the feedback and don't worry any offense
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Well then.... I see that you finished this and you did a very good job indeed. Would you like me to critique this amazing drawing?
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Oh of course! Please do
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Oh, I love the attitude she has here. Cold, angry, focused. She'd be intimidating even without the armed drones.
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She can be! One of the rare times she is angry
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Oho I love the concept! XD
I always feel that Ice Queen would be more frightening than a hot-blooded person.
I like how she looks so thin (the straight hair adds to that), yet her expression is cold and ruthless. The shadows really accentuate that. And I like her eyes especially... I don't even see her eyeballs. O.O
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Ohhh I'm glad you like her! She is honestly the 2nd most 'good' Sin but she has her limits and can be ruthless. I'm so happy she is frightening in her own right and straight hair is hard for me so I am pleased that worked out so well too
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Hahaha oh my she's one of the "good"-est! XD
She's definitely frightening.
Oh lol that's interesting! I know a lot of artists find straight hair much easier to do than curly hair.
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Sadly she is. Gluttony is the nicest and Sloth is apathetic. Which makes her and Gluttony more moral than the five. She is also terrifying when push comes to shove.
Wavy hair is easy, curly hair is ...ehhh okay, straight hair, especially flat straight is a bit hard. I want to do WILD things with hair sometimes and I can't go wild with slick straight hair like Sloth. Which is fair since she is suppose to be a counterpoint to Ira anyways (whose hair is CRAZY).
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Lolol I see! XD
Ahh that makes sense~ They're really opposites!
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Yet they oddly get along. Hoping for the next chapter of the series shows a little of that too.
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Haha as they say, opposites attract!
Ahh I still need to read the first chapter of the series! >< It's in my notification list, so I'll read after my work clears up.
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Not a problem! I just have two chapters out currently, so no rush at all! Thank you and good luck with all the work!
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Dude, her expression is looking great! Sybil's fierceness is so beliavable here!
Tho, I think I miss the heavier blacks?
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I wanted to keep her lines a little more clean to contrast more so with Ira. I do think that the impact is lessened somewhat with this one so I may revisit this one.
Glad you can tell her fierceness! It takes a lot to piss Sybil off. I think someone may have hurt Orsin and that is a horrible idea...
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I was going to suggest you make somekind of screen behind her, something maybe half broken or glitchy. heck, you know coding, so you could even write some easter eggs on that. Anyway, spmething to overlap with the robots, and make a strong back light. So everything around is black, but the light creates a halo aroudn Sybil. And the robots can be lit up in a much paler blue than her eyes, and they throw the foreground light, and so, a bit more of her eye area would be shadowed so the color shine would be just as in focus as Ira's piece.
I'm sorry, I think I'm maddling way too much
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I think I got what you're saying. I'm not sure I'll go all that far but I do have an updated version to post based on your feedback that feels a lot more complete and in tune with the Wrath image
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OOh, it looks very good! You did a great work meeting midway there. I think it now looks just right
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Hehe thank you!! Your feedback has been so helpful with many of my recent works! Thank you so much!
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You're most welcome, Coda! Same goes to you!
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