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Description And the last part.


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My final thoughts and comments about this story: [link]





Creations by others inspired by this series:
- [link] a fanfic by *TF141Soldier
- [link] a fanfic by ~Kilama
- [link] a fanfic by ~LightNazoYagami
- [link] fanfic by *CeeNova
- [link] art by =Hylian-guardian
- [link] a fanfic by ~NinjaBrony43009
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Comments: 557

CindersDesigns [2011-12-02 18:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome story, and the art was amazing. I just love the using of colors and shades to show emotion and story. Well done!

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dragonpony In reply to ??? [2011-12-02 02:29:26 +0000 UTC]

wow, these comics are so intense and amazing! This last part must have been torture for discord. Just, wow.

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Funkybear In reply to ??? [2011-12-01 20:57:16 +0000 UTC]

wow, i nearly cried at the end, because it perfectly fits with the beginning and - ah i dont know, this is just beautiful :')

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Delphi-is-Script In reply to ??? [2011-11-29 20:36:44 +0000 UTC]

T.T Lovely

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pyrotec911 [2011-11-23 04:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Amazing comic, truly it is.
I can believe Discord's overconfidence towards the two princesses, he took down their entire race, what more could only two of them do.

Though, one thing I've wondered about is the Elements of Harmony.
Did Celestia and Luna create them?
Were they an artifact in the care of the alicorns? And if so, why didn't they use it before they were wiped out?
So many questions...

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CosmicUnicorn In reply to pyrotec911 [2011-11-23 23:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Personally... I think that the "Elements of Harmony" were not created... but rather, they just always existed.

Celestia and Luna learned how to channel The Elements' power/force through magic, directing and wielding it towards a concentrated purpose (stopping Discord). I also don't think that there is a physical form of the Elements... only representations/artifacts intended to aid in the casting of the magic, as well as being objects of cultural/artistic significance (meant to remind everypony about the importance of the Elements).
When Twilight used the Elements with her friends, she only needed her realization/understanding of the Elements to call upon their power, not the physical symbol of them (Which Nightmare Moon smashed). It is the spirit of the Elements that is their core power (not the idea of them).

"You think you can destroy The Elements of Harmony just like that? Well, you're wrong, because the spirits of The Elements of Harmony are right here!
...I felt it the very moment I realized how happy I was to hear you, to see you, how much I cared about you. The spark ignited inside me when I realized that you all -- are my friends. You see, Night Mare Moon, when those Elements are ignited by the... the spark, that resides in the heart of us all--it creates the sixth element: the element of... Magic!"

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ichnichdu [2011-11-21 20:30:57 +0000 UTC]

That last "panel"... just WOW

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chickenflippers [2011-11-21 03:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Never letting me stop... not even EVEN for an instant. it seems there is an extra even in that sentence, unless i am mistaken. Great series by the way, i hope to see more from you

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cajobif [2011-11-21 02:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work.

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RainDH In reply to ??? [2011-11-21 00:34:53 +0000 UTC]

This is FANTASTIC.

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Mew-LightSpirit In reply to ??? [2011-11-20 03:02:53 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT it simply gorgeous! The colors and style is beutiful

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TF141Soldier [2011-11-19 06:39:31 +0000 UTC]

OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH

thank you SOOOOO much for featuring meeeeeeee! It means so much to me!

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Ether-Orchyd In reply to ??? [2011-11-13 12:15:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this!! The graphics were great and the story is awesome!

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clownbard In reply to ??? [2011-11-13 03:22:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG I LOVE IT!its so amazing and so differant from any other discord comic I HAVE EVER SEEN.And I must say your art is beutiful and the story is touching and I can't really use words to describe how absaloutly amazing it is and I find that it covers discords background perfectly.Its amazing what you were able to do with only 2 episodes of him.You are an amazing artist and story writer and should consider publishing to Eqd (only if it hasn't alredy been featured).Keep up the good work! (sorry for such a long comment...)

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SilverDragon171 In reply to ??? [2011-11-11 08:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Truly amazing back-story and art concerning Discord. I really enjoyed his part in Season 2 and this story just made me enjoy him even more.

A broken heart can heal misshapen, deformed, and twisted as they say.

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Katcooldraw [2011-11-11 00:33:54 +0000 UTC]

This was just fantastic!
Everything about this is amazing
:icontwilightclap:

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peabeajay [2011-11-10 07:41:17 +0000 UTC]

AUGH! YOU JUST HAD TO GO ALL DOCTOR WHO ON ME! You go through all this trouble to make us dislike him and then you have this amazing ending in which we fell SORRY for him.




I absolutely love you.


But seriously, are you sure you're not Steven Moffet?

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Seraph-sama [2011-11-09 00:49:05 +0000 UTC]

epic

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Sheimii [2011-11-08 00:40:43 +0000 UTC]

I've read this series of comics before, it's so beautifully illustrated. I really like the story you came up with. The ending was great. I've faved all of the pages and I really don't know what else to say..

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Rubyredclaw [2011-11-06 04:31:02 +0000 UTC]

I usually don't like the rougher styles of art, but this..... This was beautiful. I can't explain how much I love this.


What she did to him was terrible. What he became returned the favor.

What he caused was a nightmare. Then they awakened the world.

His final judgement was for an eternity. An eternity will pass and he will return to their world to bring chaos again.

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VocaloidIchigo In reply to ??? [2011-10-30 21:43:33 +0000 UTC]

I saw these posted on tumblr a while ago, but I didn't notice till now going over them again that there was sub text barely visible in it too. made it creepier, yet sadder too :c

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anlovesupreme In reply to ??? [2011-10-30 04:10:20 +0000 UTC]

That last part just made me shiver. I don't think I could have ever sympathized with Discord in the slightest. Thank you so much for proving me wrong.

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gelgoogkg In reply to ??? [2011-10-29 14:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Poor guy. Young Celestia was a real C in this story. Pretty refreshing.

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Peora In reply to ??? [2011-10-29 01:32:38 +0000 UTC]

'never letting me stop, not even even for an instant'?

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CosmicUnicorn In reply to Peora [2011-10-29 03:14:19 +0000 UTC]

That sentence is working off of the 'chasing' sentence before it... so, never letting him stop running/flying away, no instant to stop to rest -exhausting him.

I admit, it is an awkward sentence.

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Peora In reply to CosmicUnicorn [2011-10-29 19:56:04 +0000 UTC]

I dun get it.

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iTiffanyBlue In reply to ??? [2011-10-27 19:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful comic. I feel so bad for Discord but he turned everything into chaos. So he kinda deserved it.
Maybe if Celestia didn't act the way she did to him in the beginning, things would've been different. ;_;

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AvianAmerican In reply to iTiffanyBlue [2011-10-29 01:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Chaos is not 'bad,' not the way the show depicted it. There's nothing wrong with allowing a little random in your life, finding the humor in everything. Sadly, Discord did take it a bit too far - I believe he is 'Chaotic Evil,' as they say. and Evil, in all its forms, must be stopped.
But Chaos does not have to be stopped. Chaos may be reveled in, if only for the appreciation it gives one for Order.

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Senthai [2011-10-26 05:45:09 +0000 UTC]

And so it comes full circle. With Celestia it begins, and with Celestia it ends.

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gl1211 [2011-10-26 02:14:57 +0000 UTC]

dark...great art style...good story... dam you win on such a high level!!!!!

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MadManInTheBox [2011-10-25 10:25:08 +0000 UTC]

i LOVE LOVE LOVE how you put "ghost words"very faint words under or behind the original text adding more meaning if you can read them.

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DZ469 [2011-10-25 02:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Simply amazing

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Xzaon [2011-10-24 03:48:54 +0000 UTC]

This is so Epic!!!

I <3 it

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Kurozora-Konoi [2011-10-23 20:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Such a terrible story T_T
But by the same time it's beautiful. You did a fantastic storytelling and drawing work. It's amazing

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Suzikoo In reply to ??? [2011-10-23 02:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

If you listen to The Fall of the Lunar Republic (Solemn Century Edition) by Derpidety you get a smidge of amazing background music to add to this amazing series.

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Elemental-Raven [2011-10-23 01:36:30 +0000 UTC]

THIS. WAS. AMAZING. XD Really Good. And I Like How The Way It's Drawn Adds To The Feeling Of It.

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Rippershadow6116 In reply to ??? [2011-10-22 00:11:21 +0000 UTC]

nice. reminds me of Batman: Arkham Asylum (the original comic book, not the game), though that does fit...

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KlarkKentThe3rd In reply to ??? [2011-10-21 18:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow...

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TF141Soldier [2011-10-20 21:16:12 +0000 UTC]

I gotta say, this is quite a philosophical take on a rather epic storyline that hundreds may interpret.

There could have been hundreds of other stories, but none of them could have quite had the edge this had: the whole story shows the idea of thought-procession: instead of the story just being told from a different perspective, the one who turned into a sociopath is the very one to tell the story - had Celestia told the story, it would more than likely but a lot more stern but somehow lighter-hearted. To combine the actions and thoughts of Discord into one story is brilliant: he's a very thoughtful and yet uncontrollable person - makes all kinds of impossibilities.

A lot of fans would probably think that chocolate rain clouds and dancing buffalo isn't that bad: but the second episode of Season Two was simply an approach: after all, Discord did say they were the first changes. To have a back story about Discord turning the entire world into a life-consuming wasteland is a much darker approach than the almost comical version that Faust presented.

It's a rather amazing story, quite possibly the greatest Pony fan comic / story ever made. It's detailed, well drawn, the dialogue is epic and the storyline is engrossing. This entire comic speaks all kinds of emotions: rejection, hatred, comedy, insanity, redemption, and retribution. Very, very amazing.

Faust would be proud indeed.

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CosmicUnicorn In reply to TF141Soldier [2011-10-21 00:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, your comments mean a lot to me.

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TF141Soldier In reply to CosmicUnicorn [2011-10-21 19:21:51 +0000 UTC]

I actually got a reply from you? Awesome!

But, yeah, this should totally become an official story for the show. Though it might lose its magic - literally. This is dark, very mono-dimensional and in the good sense of it. It would give an entirely different perspective to MLP.

And I totally view Discord with a lot more sympathy and a lot more stern.

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Northspeed [2011-10-18 16:25:46 +0000 UTC]

I've read the entire comic, and I must say it's amazing. All the pages was well done and very beautiful in their own ways. I really enjoyed reading it.

As for this page, I think it's a good ending for the comic. I love the part on this page with Celestia and Luna using the Elements of Harmony, it looks really pretty. Also like how the last part kind of binds the end together with the first page. Clever indeed
Long story short: Great job

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anon7311 [2011-10-18 15:44:35 +0000 UTC]

If I may submit a request would you be so kind as to make one of luna being banished.

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funkycow111 In reply to ??? [2011-10-18 00:52:57 +0000 UTC]

MANLY TEARS WERE SHED.

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elBreko In reply to ??? [2011-10-17 09:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah shit.. You just made me sad. *Wipes of a tear*

Best fanmade I've read. Like.. Ever.

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DEVIOUS-DISCORD-RP In reply to ??? [2011-10-16 17:37:38 +0000 UTC]

DISCORD: TALK ABOUT BAD MEMORIES.

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PrincessSunelestia In reply to ??? [2011-10-16 00:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Huh? i had no idea?

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Fantasyfreak18 In reply to ??? [2011-10-15 14:08:40 +0000 UTC]

You have just taken an evil for evil's sake cartoon villain and made him my favorite character ever created. I tip my hat to you.

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alexwarlorn [2011-10-14 10:05:07 +0000 UTC]

The one thing here, though I can see that you were pressed for time, is that it might have been interesting to see Discord plant the seeds for petty jealously inside Luna's head before he completely turned to stone. That being said, this remains completely epic and self contained.

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Inami-minoru [2011-10-13 13:31:56 +0000 UTC]

DAAAAWWW

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