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CreatTheCrow — bird thing wip
Published: 2010-03-25 23:55:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 440; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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its a wip tell me whats wrong with it please![link] as a ref
will be moved to scraps after the final is up
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The body structure is great, but the right wing looks kinda...off.
but besides that, it looks amazing! xD
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ok how so do you think the wing is off? and thank you
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Well, I'm no wing expert myself, so it's kind of hard to explain...It just doesn't look anatomically correct I guess.
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Ok can you tell me where it looks weird. Its ok I like other people opinions
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Ok, well I looked at the ref you used and it just seems like the right wing that you drew doesn't look like it's curving (for lack of a better word) like in the ref picture. It looks kinda stiff, which contrasts with how well you did on the left wing. But you know, that's just me. And if I offended you in any way, I apologize! ;.; But I don't know how else to describe it.
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no you didn't offend me at all thank you for the crit. I do really like them especially when I ask. Ok thank you I'll see what I can do to round it off more.
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=] oh, good! And you're welcome ^^
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I see nothing wrong with it! 
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