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CuddlyHawk — Loss, Compassion... Regret
Published: 2011-10-29 15:36:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 3429; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 11
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On FanFiction.net, I've been writing an intense, angsty story about Simon getting abused
just to show how horrible it is and that we should all do our part to stop it.If you guys want to read it --> [link] but keep in mind that many people have said it made them emotional.
This isn't a pic for the actual story, but for the sequel that many, MANY people have been bugging me to do. (Yes, I am working on it, although I don't know how many people are going to actually like it)
Alvin Seville, Simon Seville, and Theodore Seville (c) Ross Bagdasarian
Story and art (c) CuddlyHawk
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hey, cuddly hawk. how are ya? P.S I'm Poseidon 01
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read it, though it made me very sad. Like the picture. I have more pictures of my own. Check 'em out
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Thanks
I will, for sure
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I cried. I really wasn't expecting what happened to happen so sad!! When do you believe the sequel will be here?
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*Sigh* I don't know when the sequel will be here, to tell you the truth. School has caught me really badly with homework and tests xP You know how it is. I might finish it and post it over Winter Break, though
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Ok, Thanks! I understand about homework and such, so you get that done, and post the it when you have the time to finish, I'm but to much in a hurry for it anyway. I'll just go read the first one again!
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Haha okay! 
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I really do, I think I myself might make a little drawing for it. ^^
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I think I'm going to have to read this story. I love this.
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Thank you
People said it made them emotional, so keep that in mind before you read it
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Yesss, I read it. It was sad, I was in tears. But overall it was good. ^^
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It is sad... but I'm glad you think it was good
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I read the fanfic and almost cried from it TT~TT how tragic...
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Yes, it was made to be tragic, to emphasize the severity of the crisis of child abuse.
At least Simon is in a better place now
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Yup...May he rest in peace with God
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God will make sure to take very good care of him
I actually have God make an appearance in my sequel, and depending on how you look at it, it could be a good thing or it could be a bad thing...
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Good thing! VERY good thing! Im a Christian so, yes its a good thing :3
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Yay! Okay then, yup it's a good thing then x3
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When I post the sequel, you can tell me if you think it's a good representation of God or not (I personally think it's not as... professional... as God might actually be, but hey! I needed to give him a personality).
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Pretty much his script goes:
"Simon Seville, I am God. You, though young, have given an exemplary show of kindness and innocence that I would not expect from such a young child,"
(Some other characters talk, then...)
"I know your mother already told you what is expected, so I'm not going to bore you with another explanation."
(More talking)
"Do you think you can do that, Simon?"
... Hmm, I dunno how accurate; that's from memory. Anywho, I think I could have used bigger words or something and given him more of a dominant script. That's what I meant when I said that it wasn't "professional" and that I gave him a personality
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He sounds like a normal father
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Yay! Then it's not too unprofessional, you think?
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Its fine :3 its ok!
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Yay then!
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Ooh! I love stories like that. I must go read it.
I'm also in the process of writing a story where Simon is "abused". Although in mine it's by a very messed up kidnapper. ^^
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Oh, nice! I'm definitely going to read it! (Haha, we'll be reading each other's stories at the same time!) Where are you going to publish it? Here or on FF.net?
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It's on FFN.net 
[link] Be warned, though, it's got very mature themes.
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Okay, I read it and posted a comment
Very, very well written!
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Aww poor Simon
I read your story, loved it, can't wait for the sequel
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Thank you
Do you have any suggestions for a title? I'm open to suggestions
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Wow, I love this pic, I love it how Alvin and angel Simon are comforting Theodore this pic is sweet.....
And I loved the story, I'll make sure to read and review the sequel x
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Thanx
Thank you for your comment; it's really kind of you to say that, and I hope you like the sequel
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Your welcome and I'll sure I will..
And my mistake
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Haha it's okay! Just so long as you enjoy it is all that counts
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