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CuddlyHawk β Loss, Compassion... Regret
Published: 2011-10-29 15:36:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 3424; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 11
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On FanFiction.net, I've been writing an intense, angsty story about Simon getting abused
just to show how horrible it is and that we should all do our part to stop it.If you guys want to read it --> [link] but keep in mind that many people have said it made them emotional.
This isn't a pic for the actual story, but for the sequel that many, MANY people have been bugging me to do. (Yes, I am working on it, although I don't know how many people are going to actually like it)
Alvin Seville, Simon Seville, and Theodore Seville (c) Ross Bagdasarian
Story and art (c) CuddlyHawk
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OhGodThatsSoOld...
Hehe I know, right? I drew it a while ago to go along with a story I had written where Simon was abused and ended up getting killed because of it. Edgy, dark stuffs
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I read the story, and it was indeed very sad.Β
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Good, I meant for it to be a tearjerker ^^
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You did a great job, though. ^^ And I love the artwork as well!
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Absolutely! 
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I read your story like an hour ago and I think I found a song that goes with it. Right here > [link]
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Yeah, I can see that song working for my story
Thanks for reading
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the part that i think really fits is
"Try to hear my voice
You can leave, now it's your choice
Maybe if I fall asleep, I won't breathe right
Maybe if I leave tonight, I won't come back
I said it before, I won't say it again
Love is a game to you, it's not pretend
Maybe if I fall asleep, I won't breathe right
Can nobody hear me?
I've got a lot that's on my mind
I cannot breathe
Can you hear it, too?"
your welcome.
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Those parts i think fit with when he was in the bathroom and near the end.
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Have I mentioned that I love your icon? 
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Thanks.
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read this story. thought it was nice. but i cant resist doing my thing.
(Because Noah is a Mage and he used to be dead himself, he can sense Simon's return to the physical realm.
Noah: Simon, I know you're here. and I know why. I can also sense you're pissed.
Simon's voice: Why the Hell do i have to take this test when you didn't?
Noah: Because, brother, as a Green Lantern I have saved countless lives, therefore, i passed that test ages ago. and i'd avoid saying the H word as an angel. here, it's just a cuss word. in Heaven, it's wht summons the Devil. that's how WWII started
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waitwaitwaiwaitWAIT... You "thought it was nice"?!?!?!?!?! What happened to me being a b**** for killing Simon and all the other stuff about how bad of a person I am? 
Haha and everything gets better when Noah fixes it, right?
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Yeah. Plus, I said that stuff way back when I was bad at controlling my rage. Plus I didn't read the whole story back then either.
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Haha well I'm glad you learned how to control it now
Oh, so after reading the whole thing it turned out alright for you?
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Yeah, Simon got to Heaven, and the boys moved on.........kinda. But Noah would have made it a bit better
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Yuppies
Haha of course
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I've also seen a story where Simon was kidnapped under strange circumstances, and it underwent this entire plot that wound up with him nearly committing suicide. Yeah, this is why my stories usually turn the tables and make Alvin the one getting his ass kicked.
Besides, I.. erm... like... Simon too much to hurt him.
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There's no shame in liking someone too much to hurt them. Simon is my favorite munk so i never layΒ scratch on him. Noah,my OC on the other hand, i got him killed twice. But i resurrected him. due to popular demand.
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Wow. Β For me, Alvin varies by the story. Β Sometimes he's an ass throughout and we all practically disown him, and sometimes I let in that supposed 'heart of gold' quality he had in the TV shows. Β It all depends in the scenario.
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same here. Most of the time, the A stands for Asshole. But, every once in a while, he shines as the caring, loving brother the other Chipmunks desperately need. Speaking of, mind if I use Austin in an upcoming story?
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Really? Interesting. I need to read that one. What's it called?
I think I DO hurt him because I like him... it's a weird thing I do, I guess 
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It's really strange, actually. I couldn't believe it when I saw- or should I say read?- Simon of all munks taking a smoke. Here's chapter one; it's on fanfiction.net: [link] It's quite a shocker; I think if my OC had been in there he may have committed suicide early on.
I assure you that despite the dark nature of the story, it's astoundingly well written.
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Coolio, thanks for the link, I'll check it out real soon and get back to you!
Lol on FFN, you get a lot of weird stories. Some are good, some are bad. Eventually I learned how to read it the way I wanted to read it, instead of how they wrote it, for example. But it's hard to explain
And that does sound a little creepy... But cool and new at the same time... or maybe I'm just being sadistic...
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Oh you have no idea what you're in for... consider yourself warned.
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OMG I'M READING IT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT TO DEATH!
It's unique, different, NOTHING you'd expect, and I'm already halfway done!
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I wanted to shoot myself reading that story.
But the again you don't have a crush on the main character, so...
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Aw, that must have sucked!
Haha I kinda do, but I like it when he gets hurt
My opinion, but meh, who cares about what CuddlyHawk thinks?
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i do. your insight is important to me.
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lol Noah this thread was dead for so long, I had to go back and try to find out what the heck i was talking about!
hehe thanks, your opinion is important to me too
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I see what you think of it. Me, I'm just a shrimp dead scared of anything horror-like.
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Haha aw, don't worry, a lot of people are that way
...but they aren't shrimps...
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I read this fanfic, and I cried... That's so good and sad.
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Poor Simon. I'm still not happy that he's dead, but that's why I write stories. To help me with my anger.
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Haha yeah, that's why I write too
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Yus, it really does
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