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DangerCurl β 007 - Down In Front, part 6
Published: 2014-03-27 07:04:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 15428; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 37
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Mary reached up, confirming her terrible fear. Where once there had been a long thick rope of soft tresses, now limply hung a jagged remnant. Her hair! How could she possibly have been unaware as someone chopped it all off? Who could have done such a thing?!She felt nauseated, she felt naked. One of her classmates flicked on the lights, and more eyes fell upon her. Some girls shrieked, realizing both how horrible this must be for Mary, at the same time relieved that they had not been the intended target of the unseen scissor-happy culprit. Other students jeered, pointing at the victim of an epic prankster. Some made an effort to talk to her, but all the noise in the room ran together as so much buzzing in Mary's ears as her frenzied thoughts took over her other senses.
Mary stood, wobbling; terrified, angry, devastated all at once, she ran from the room and down the hall. This couldn't be happening! She needed to hide, she needed a mirror, she needed to vomit. Her legs sought out the nearest girls' room...
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As a boy, I...
...can't disagree.
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How could no one have noticed this with all that work he had to do to get it off, but the other kids notice it now?Β
Good thing the description asks the question for us, lol!
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Ha, yeah, I got to have the bigger story to explain a lot of the crazy stuff I'll do
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I like doing crazy stuff like this too, except if I did this, I'd break the 4TH wall and acknowledge that what I just did for story purposes made incomplete sense, 
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You could try cutting Crimsons hair engirish.deviantart.com/art/Fi⦠but to quote Bane, "It would be extremely painful..........for you"
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I have to say, the art is great, but you write very well too!Β you've captured the swooning terror and disorientation of Mary's trauma very well!
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That means a lot, thanks! I'm trying hard to make this a good story as well as something fun to look at.
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ooooooooooh so sad for MaryΒ 
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well yes maybeΒ lol
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if not we will find a way
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" Fist full of hair " Lets form a bond to rescure Mary's hair
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I am with you to the end.
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Let's charge, who want to join us ...
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YEAH AMERICA! F*** YEAH! XD sorry I had to do that but I agree with you hundred percent all the way.
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Alright Welcome on board.
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All aboard the braid train!!! XD
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... next stop Ponytail City :3
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Oh and hey if you actually like Long hair then go on ahead and check out some of my work! a good story to start with should be "Dates are also fruits!" You ought to like the story and you will also like my characters as well! I hope you do check it out!
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I must admit i am a long hair lover i really like very long hair. And yeah i will read your story
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Same here, to be honest I'm knocking ally I actually have a phobia around scissors just because of that reason... No joke, it's a phobia I have... All my old girlfriends got their hair cut short and kind of the main reason why I don't like it... They looked beautiful before but now they just look like MileyΒ Cyrus on crack. XD
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I could say this about myself, most of my old girlfriends looked awesome wiht long hair but most of them cut it short over the time again and again, i could never convienience them to let there hair grow instead. Man i could shout about that.
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Well luckily I do have one that will right now but she still thinking but I promised her it would be great...
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I always find girls with long hair getting it cut short incredibly depressing 
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Same thing for me man I totally agree, also I hope you like some of my work as well because it has no haircuting at all! XD
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The next we can think of something better than the hair puns.... -.- XD
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yeah better keep it up than cut if off
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no let's not cut things short! HA! Besides! I haven't even said salon! (like so long?! GET IT!?)
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The thing has to be keep up until we can follow the trail on the ground.
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Okay please kill me now this is annoying... XD
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Alright take my fistfull of hair,( sorry i had to do it )i will stop it. I promis but first i had to pick it up, and put it back in order. :3
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Okay I actually to be honest I don't get that one. XD (Thank God...)
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Alright i brush it aside for later.
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I. Will. Hurt. You. XD
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Break it up, you guys
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NOTHING IS FUNNY UNLESS IF YOU HAVE PUNS! AGHHHH! I don't know I'm just being random...
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I know! If Mary doesn't kill him, it seems my followers will
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Pretty much like a mobster gang, except pretty much I'm the leader! XD
"Your saying that Rapunzel got hair hair cut off?! I WANT WHO EVER DID IT THAT I SEE THEIR HEAD ON A SILVERPLATTER BY MY DOORSTEP!" XD
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Is the "Kill that braid chopping bastard" line long?
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not to play devil's advocate, but it wasn't entirely todd's fault, he was being mind-controlled by that demon-thing you can see in part four
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Ah, yeah. Forgot about that thing.
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As I said this is why we need a priest in this somehow to get rid of this hair cutting douche bag, demon guy! XD
THE POWERΒ OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU! XD
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well ,he still shouldn't get off the hook entirely, though. Β Who knows, maybe the demon thing is planning to killhim after he delivers the hair, and mary will have to use her newly-acquired powers (when we get to that), to save him
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Aw.... Man I really do hope things work out for her... I'm crossing my fingers the entire way! XD
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It won't be sudden, but you know I just can't leave Mary in this state. Man, I gotta stop giving spoilers!
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