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Published: 2014-05-31 16:06:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1166; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 0
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Ashes to Oaks

What message entails pressure under cloud,
Grey Ash silhouettes sway before dusk shroud,
Their lanced dreams viridescent with sky hue,
Evade whispering blue of admin-stew,
Taken with flanked Oaks, freed to social thrall,
Dawn's firmament worn, now eve's azure shawl,
Adorns escapism's wall of silence,
Through the veil, a landscape free from violence,
Enough said, such solitude uniting,
This life that links battles we're all fighting.

The essence of walking away to find,
What confides our troubled tribe's frame of mind,
In times as these beneath consoling trees,
Solace plugs drafty gap, where hope it sees,
Winning a view without losing faith true,
Seeking fresh ground many eyes look up to,
Released from a feast that didn't invite,
From first light post recipient benight,
The path awaits with composition tuned,
Written by heart to heal our deepest wound.

Β©Daniel Brooks-Laurent

[AllΒ my work is strictly copyrighted, but contact me for any requests!]

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Comments: 14

Wanderlouve [2014-06-02 06:03:50 +0000 UTC]

A little bit disturbing, reminds me in some way of the collision scene from Melancholia movie by Lars von Trier.

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to Wanderlouve [2014-06-02 12:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I can see what you mean, and (only by chance) there is an element of that (movie) feeling!!!
The Sun can create such amazing effects can't it!

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Wanderlouve In reply to DanielBrooksLaurent [2014-06-03 05:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh indeed, it can. And well captured this amazing effects can last almost forever.

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DiPicture [2014-06-01 15:59:55 +0000 UTC]

I can only think of 2 words right now, Β wich are: amazing and beautiful!

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to DiPicture [2014-06-01 18:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your lovely words, this means a lot to me, and I appreciate your kindness, thanks again!

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PhotoshopGirl29 [2014-06-01 03:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to PhotoshopGirl29 [2014-06-01 07:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks indeed! It was a lovely sunset that day, sadly all since have been cloudy and dull!

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PhotoshopGirl29 In reply to DanielBrooksLaurent [2014-06-02 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

You are so very, very, very welcome!

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GreenElephantGirl [2014-05-31 23:33:02 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible.

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to GreenElephantGirl [2014-06-01 07:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm so grateful!

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BillyNikoll [2014-05-31 16:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to BillyNikoll [2014-05-31 16:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Very many thanks, much appreciated!

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Nakiz94 [2014-05-31 16:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot ! (: Β 

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to Nakiz94 [2014-05-31 16:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I am really grateful!

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