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Returning With a Fire

Falling-over the fire that burns you too,

From a sunset’s last glimmer, thoughts anew,

Calling so long - only now repenting,

With a fire glowing flames relenting,

That warms you and I before darkness spreads,

Dousing groans from evening gowns and their beds,

The boy within wakes the man without time,

Ageless are the sentiments that still climb,

This ever-lasting ladder well-trodden,

For those we’ve rung and who we’ve forgotten.

 

Man and boy of a shadow flickering,

One is the dream, one is still listening,

He’s got it! Yet waits comforting reply,

If there ever should be such a clear sky,

Give the heart a starry-eyed glimpse of it,

Youthful impressions never lie nor sit,

But re-activate summer’s twilight fade,

That Monday evening moment where we prayed,

For just one answer to a lifelong quest,

How does it feel for a plea to be blessed?

 

01 September, 2014
©2014 Daniel Brooks-Laurent

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Comments: 11

SunnySpring [2014-09-09 22:04:25 +0000 UTC]

How sunny road is that!   I would really like to walk along this way!

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to SunnySpring [2014-09-11 18:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you...I've been 'out of things' a bit this past month, but Nature always gives inspiration and lovely scenes...and, it is a great place to walk!!! You'd enjoy it~~~~^^

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SunnySpring In reply to DanielBrooksLaurent [2014-09-12 19:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Nature is a great cure
I would enjoy it for sure! ^^

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to SunnySpring [2014-10-03 11:50:20 +0000 UTC]

you would, certainly!^^ and yes, you're right, nature is a great cure!

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abyss1956 [2014-09-04 07:13:22 +0000 UTC]

It's so lovely!  I wish I could totally understand your poem! I just get the atmosphere, which is still beautiful to me  

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to abyss1956 [2014-09-11 18:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...I am always delighted reading your comments etc, it means a great deal to me...I'm sorry I have not been around much at all for over a month...I should be back a bit more now, all being well.

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abyss1956 In reply to DanielBrooksLaurent [2014-09-12 00:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Pleasure is mine and I'm looking forward to see you more often, too  Take good care of you 

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Gardynn7 [2014-09-03 21:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous, has such a welcoming warmth.

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to Gardynn7 [2014-09-11 18:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for a lovely comment and welcome words of warmth! I'm truly grateful indeed.

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sevvysgirl [2014-09-01 20:25:22 +0000 UTC]

This is utterly beautiful, Daniel - both words and photo.  That path looks as if it would be intriguing to follow ...

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DanielBrooksLaurent In reply to sevvysgirl [2014-09-11 18:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much indeed, and sorry for being so unbelievably slow to respond here...things were a little mournful recently, but I should be around a little bit more from now onwards.

Yes, that path is particularly nice, following the Wensum along the old railway line, it's excellent.

Hope you're fine and having nice weather too?

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