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DanielBrooksLaurent — Waiting! (Room of Improvement)
Published: 2014-05-02 15:16:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1038; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 0
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Waiting! (Room of Improvement)The wait begun under fate's clouded front,
Seated, the room of supposed chill,
Starting-point of release to free the ill,
Treasures borne now well-being starts the hunt.
Your honour and inner will appointed,
Patient and Winter pale back to life springs,
Through pings of tentative hope which it brings,
From sunbeams reaching-out healing pointed.
With an echo not a shout belief speaks,
Reflecting clear answers not questions blue,
Queue no more as it is you that comes through -
That familiar door free from past creaks.
Welcome-in a past before last despatch,
Prescribe yourself a melody or two,
Tonic on the horizon now in view,
Afternoon lea of tonal hue to match.
No surrender let orenda be blessed,
Within your spirit override all fate,
Extinguishing hate that's never too late,
For this triumphant life passes the test!
02 May, 2014
©Daniel Brooks-Laurent
- Orenda is the invocation of the power of human will to change the world around us. With the ability to oppose the forces of fate or destiny it may enable a person to alter their path or destiny completely.
- This poem was written in a medical waiting room - I do hope it can give some humble inspiration to others.
- (My work is shared as a means of dealing with my own worsening health difficulties, and to be of benefit to others, in overcoming dark days, and is therefore all copyrighted as it takes a great deal of effort, so please respect this point: however, if you wish to use or for requests, simply contact me. Thank you, and please enjoy!)
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Comments: 14
This is so beautiful.. I could stare at it for ages, and it won't get boring!
Love it!
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment which I really appreciate greatly, it's so nice of you.
I'm very happy you enjoyed this one.
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Tout en délicatesse avec cette légère brume et la belle lumière. Love it!
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Merci...heureuse que cela te plaise.
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Thank you so very much~~!
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A beautiful gift form a beautiful person!! Great photo!
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Thanks so much!
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Thank you for your lovely comment, fave and I'm so happy you like it - thanks so much again!
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Thank you! I really, really appreciate your comment very much.
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