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Published: 2007-04-07 01:39:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1753; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 31
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edit: I added some things, fixed some things, ect.Another pic for the art display thing.
Comments and crits please.
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Oooh, very pretty. C: I like this a lot. It's a 
Hmm... if you don't mind a crit, the one thing I'd change is that right arm of hers. It looks just a little bumpy around the elbow. Other then that, it's an amazing piece. You really did a great job.
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thats sooo cool.....it looks like she has 4 arms tho..........XD
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the arms + the billowy sleeves = 4 arms
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Good god thats amazing. How do you manage that? Your art is superb!
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I love her hair, it's just the left arm looks a little funny.
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Great job Raven. I again love the detail in the hair... And well because it says "Advance Critique Encouraged" I guess I'll try lol; though you never seem to need them! Hm, the only thing I may suggest is working on the anatomy of the arms. They seem just the slightest bit off. Also, given the light source, the shading of them may be a little inaccurate. I also might advise trying to give a bit more of a shape to her dress; it looks a little oddly placed around her waist and hips.
But besides that, it is wonderful! I could only wish that I could have such an amazing talent at your age. Keep up the great work 
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YOU AND YOUR AMAZING 14 YEAR OLD ABILITIES. D':
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