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still working on this one, so feel free to critique.Zabuza Momochi from Naruto.
My sig is in the grass and is very tiny.
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Comments: 300
the-mole-lives In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 17:21:33 +0000 UTC]
well, maybe he would have rather responded himself? i know i wouldnt want anyone answering for me. but i've never heard of the character before. if he's structured anything like the fatal fury or street fighter characters then yeah, he'll be all legs.
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Mahoye In reply to the-mole-lives [2004-11-21 18:09:38 +0000 UTC]
yes i shall say sorry to danimation2001 right now "sorry!!!"
i jus love promoting naruto <<<< u must try to see it somehow
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the-mole-lives In reply to Mahoye [2004-11-21 18:28:44 +0000 UTC]
no hard feelings man. I'm assuming it's an Anime? i've never heard of it.
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ayonakari [2004-11-21 14:14:52 +0000 UTC]
omg~~like the color choice~~!!!!!!
ofcourse i like him too^__^coool guy in naruto~~fav*
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AmandaRobbins In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 14:13:26 +0000 UTC]
Wowwww. No critiques on the coloring. I think the proportions are off on his body, though I am not the best expert at foreshortening or male anatomy. I think his legs might be a bit too long, and I think his left hand/arm has some issues with the foreshortening. I think that fist may be too small since it is supposed to be closer to the viewer. Otherwise it's awesome. Even as is it's awesome.
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SleepingLionHeart711 In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 14:05:46 +0000 UTC]
I'm in love with the background. I love the golden leaves behind the trees! And that sword rocks! nice job
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dkiearth In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]
wow man very good work,
but i think,he has very tall legs.
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spider-wal In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:58:56 +0000 UTC]
i found that there is a person in one of the BG trees. Who is it ?
I totally LOVE you man... you are always coming up with awesome works.
[-Spider-]
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Bea-Gonzalez In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Zabuzaaaaaaaaaa! *__________* cool cool...
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ebba In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:44:43 +0000 UTC]
wow, its awesome, love the texture on the sword, its really cool! and his pose too ^^
and love the coloring and shading! and zabusa is just an awesome character too
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b33lz3bub In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:39:44 +0000 UTC]
the coloring on this is fucking fantastic, man. i seriously have nothing to crit here. and ive been meaning to get into watching that cartoon for awhile. goddamned
awesome fanart, bro. those hot skin tones really brighten this up, and im just drooling over how you colored the shadows / highlights on his pants
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justmary In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:29:20 +0000 UTC]
finally there is a drawing with him!! He's my fave! awesome! fav!
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giorrie In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:26:54 +0000 UTC]
the shading on the pants is really jawdropping too bad the blade isn't as sexy coloured as you usually colour metal objects.
BTW Mi Loves Thes Haku In The Back
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darkintruder In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:25:07 +0000 UTC]
really not much to critique, everyone has hit anything I could notice and then some in all of the previous comments. beautiful background i must say.
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pickassoreborn In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:20:02 +0000 UTC]
Very nice use of colours! *envious*
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Mahoye In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:11:06 +0000 UTC]
thats really really good..
i cant see anything to crit .
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a-nino In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 12:07:07 +0000 UTC]
This is sooooo coool! I really like Zabusa and Haku. I very much like how you placed Haku in the background. Very cool concept and i definitely see this as a poster
One thing though, it might just be me but just a suggestion, you think it would be possible to add more trees behind the trees and make them further back so that it would feel more like a deep forest? I dunno, it just seems like they're at the edge/end of the forest.
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wolfgangh [2004-11-21 12:02:13 +0000 UTC]
thats cool, the cammo stuff on his arms and legs seems a little flat though. Other then that its just mind blowing. The folds on his pants are fantastic.
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mojaam In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:59:31 +0000 UTC]
I think I spotted your sig , it's at the very bottom. Nice coloring as always. Wonderful fanart to such a great anime.
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NinjaWookiee In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Bwahaha, skinny guy with a giant sword....that just never gets old. This is actually really well done though so I won't nag at you for being cliche I love the texture on the sword and how your lighting enhances it. It's too bad other parts of the picture don't have that same level of texture to them. The grass is there and the trees almost are, but just a bit more texture would really pump this up, imo. That's not too big a deal though, more a personal preference thing. The one real crit I would give you on this would be to either give his boots a more defined shape or go back and paint some more shadows/highlights in there. Currently they look more like blobs of orange and black splotches than boots. I only know what they are because of where they are on the figure. Your snow is really impressive. That's sucha hard thing to pull off well, but you nailed it here. It's a really nice picture overall, way to go
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ZeroCartin In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:24:31 +0000 UTC]
God damn you Dan! You and ur mad coloring skills!! ARRGH!! Thats just fabulous man, really. Love the colors and general mood of the picture, this is rocking! Keep it up! XD
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mistakendestiny In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:23:47 +0000 UTC]
hehe, that dude standing in the tree is cool. the leopard style thingees on his arms and legs...i supposed you gonna render them a little beta? heh. otherwise it's pretty cool. perhaps blur the background a little and add some mist to give a great sense of depth. that would make it so much more dynamic...an' it would just hit ya, ya know?
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TheNass In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Really nice man! And I thought my coloring was pretty good *cough cough*. Keep them coming ;o)
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theCHAMBA In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 11:17:36 +0000 UTC]
maybe the hand closest to us should be al lil' bigger.. althogh that could've been mentioend already...
but tight piece mate
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Shoryuu [2004-11-21 11:15:16 +0000 UTC]
That is awesome, very well done. I like Zabuza's Pose, and the detail of the tree's is great. I also like how you stuck haku in the back there. Yeah, and i noticed your sig in the grass... at least i think its your sig
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jarofjuice [2004-11-21 11:12:22 +0000 UTC]
This looks really warm
I like the pose very much, quite warrior like and Zab looks great too. I like the addition of the snow and Zab's boots have a weird but good looking texture too. The sword looks fantastic, especially the hole near the tip.
I just have a small gripe about the vertical strips of his, um, pants, but it is minor and negligible anyway. Great work
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Peter-v-Nguyen [2004-11-21 10:43:25 +0000 UTC]
geezlouise man ... how do you get grass and metal textures like that and great pose...and i love haku in the back....
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whisperoutloud In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:36:15 +0000 UTC]
looks very good thus far, nice little touch with the (I'm guessing it's Haku) shadowy figure in the treetops, I do think that the blade of the sword, taking in the foreshortening even, compared to the handle seems a bit short
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danimation2001 In reply to whisperoutloud [2004-11-21 10:43:07 +0000 UTC]
oh, ok. So do you think I should short'n the handle and maybe that will make it work?
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whisperoutloud In reply to danimation2001 [2004-11-21 10:48:04 +0000 UTC]
yeah, after I posted I saw you had replied to that in an earlier comment and at the risk of bleeding off the page it's best not to extend the blade itself....also shortening the handle could work but with moving arms and everything that too seems like an awful amount of editing
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trecho In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:35:24 +0000 UTC]
you should change the title to "spot the haku" i mean good job
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danimation2001 In reply to trecho [2004-11-21 10:41:06 +0000 UTC]
heh, yes looks like some people have spotted him out. gj.
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FabianMonk [2004-11-21 10:34:43 +0000 UTC]
Them's some mighty big trees.
I was about to say that his lower legs still need some work when I read that this isn't done yet... the only thing I found kind of weird was the way that big tree on the left is shaded, it makes it look like it's slightly tipping forward.
Other than that: A-class.
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Autaux In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:33:35 +0000 UTC]
fantastic work dude... only things i can see would be: grass is too flat tonally... the fallen tree could have some highlights on the bark at the top (where the lights shining) adn the boots arent finished obviously but otherwise a great pieve of work ;D keep it up
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OnePieceOfSHiTaKE [2004-11-21 10:32:24 +0000 UTC]
holy shit!!!! that awesome!!!! zabusa's the best!
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wastedsacrifice [2004-11-21 10:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap, this is beautiful! I epecially love the background!!! I love the use of highlights and shadows. The only problem I have with it is that his pants look a bit wonky. The folds at the right knee are a little over done and on his left leg, it just looks wavy. I can't really explain what I mean. I wouldn't have really noticed it except that it says you really want critique, so I studied the pic. ^^
But I totally love this peice and am now off to look at the rest of your gallery. YAY!
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Nivak [2004-11-21 10:31:28 +0000 UTC]
Well it's just great. the only thing is Zabuzas weapon. Despite the perspective it looks a little too short. But it can only be my imagination
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danimation2001 In reply to Nivak [2004-11-21 10:33:38 +0000 UTC]
I was actually worried about that. see it's drawn to the edge of the page, and I'm affraid that If I made it longer it would bleed off the page of 11 by 17.
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Nivak In reply to danimation2001 [2004-11-21 10:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Don't mind that. The picture is great. I love the coloring of it
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Dorling In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Don't know Naruto, but I love this. The Forest setting, the character and the sword are all done in a way that strikes coolness in my face. Brilliant!
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cheeks-74 In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:30:42 +0000 UTC]
just noticed the figure in the tree... nice touch!
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Kaleesh-of-Kalee In reply to cheeks-74 [2007-11-06 01:35:20 +0000 UTC]
Hey, it's haku!!! Cool
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kidrocky7 In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:30:16 +0000 UTC]
wow great job on capturing zabuza. the background is outstanding alog with the coloring. great detail as always man.
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cheeks-74 In reply to ??? [2004-11-21 10:29:26 +0000 UTC]
dan... the depth in this is incredible! yhose colors are always wowing me.. and the drawing is fabulous!
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