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You have to excuse Jennifer at this point.  Like an Autistic mind being perfectly normal to the Autistic him or herself, Jennifer is convinced that she's talking at normal speed.  She didn't know that she's so overclocked as hell.

The rest of the script, I thank Pory for.
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Comments: 8

Kartoon-Kompany [2014-07-03 12:18:18 +0000 UTC]

How often do you update? Do you do one page a month?

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davidfoxfire In reply to Kartoon-Kompany [2014-07-03 14:50:14 +0000 UTC]

I shoot for one page a week, actualy, although I'm not always as reliable than I should be.  I'm working on that.

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Kartoon-Kompany In reply to davidfoxfire [2014-07-03 15:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I say that because it seems like you are taking forever to tell this story.  Your style is really simple, that is why I was wondering why it takes so long to do something.  When I take a break from my story it is because of my job, but also because I get a writer's block,  which prevents the story from going on.  On my best days, I have been able to put out about 4 pages of my comic.  I usually want to get my story on paper before the thought leaves me.

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PorygonV [2014-07-01 15:53:03 +0000 UTC]

This would be a good way to finish the day, at least with Amber's group. If Alex and the GSPT are coming right up after this, perhaps it would be prudent to show the passage of time by showing where the GSPT hangs out with a night-time establishing shot, or making the transition with a panel of the city at dusk or sunset.

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davidfoxfire In reply to PorygonV [2014-07-01 16:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Good thinking.  I'll do that.  Thanks for the suggestion.

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Kartoon-Kompany [2014-06-30 21:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Is this action still happening in the SAME day they went to the pizza place? It seems there is no evidence of time in your comic. 

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davidfoxfire In reply to Kartoon-Kompany [2014-06-30 21:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this all happened in the same day.  I'll see if I can improve on the timeframe.

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Kartoon-Kompany In reply to davidfoxfire [2014-06-30 21:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes, to me it is VERY important to show time, because it helps to move the storyline along, and gives it more of a realistic feel to it when characters are finding time to eat, sleep, change clothes etc.   You have WAY too much happening in one day.

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