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davidfoxfire — Scarlet PI--Strip 1
Published: 2004-09-30 03:41:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 6635; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 116
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Is it me or does this make for a better start and character development, especially for Jim?Related content
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hello! decided i'd read PI from #1!
wow, your skill really improved.
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So did I. Look forward to reading it all the way through!
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Thinking of making an memorial to the Orlando victims
50 fictional LGBT characters I love
Hope you don't mind if I add Jim Goodlow/Scarlet to the list
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Why thank you. I was hoping that I would indeed show an improvement, at least from my fanfict years if now from the previous attempt at Scarlet's story.
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In the first panel, you drew the angle on the countertop a little severe, as well as the other objects around it. It looks at though he is leaning backwards a little bit.
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Question: What do you mean "does this make for a better start and character development than Jim?" Did you mean FOR Jim?
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'Precinct', 'guarantee', and 'for.' : Thank for letting me know. I'll make the correction.
As for the severe angle, it must be something to do with the perspective. I was trying to give the point of view that are close up and looking at Jim. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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Snowflake studios was hacked. Or so thats what I saw.
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Almost expected if some say.
At least we still have DA for now.
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Funny how someone is always ready to tell you when something of yours gets hacked, like they wanna see your reaction
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I like how quickly you reply. I see that you're starting to turn away from comics in favor of books and the like, I wish you the best of luck. I will miss seeing your comics as I'm a visual type of person. 
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I often get on here often to catch up on the deviants I'm watching. Thanks for the good words and I hope you become a reader of my novels. Oh, and Johnny B? I had a script done for him during April and I'll be working it into a book later on this year.
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Alot of closed accounts on this thread, I hope I am not next XD
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