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davidfoxfire — Scarlet PI--Strip 4
Published: 2004-10-17 04:07:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 4098; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 122
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Submitted for Oct 19thSome of us can already guess who's in that box.
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I just caught this, since I read this to end. The fact it's got "Trash - Do Not Open" is significant.
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I was thinking of all those pups & kits that I find in bags tossed into drain ditches and canals. I think Jim was thinking the same thing.
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He could have at least poked some airholes in the box.
"Oh, there's something alive in the box! I'm going to drag it all the way to my house without peeking in to see whether or not it's dangerous, and hope it doesn't suffocate on the way home."
Admittedly, though, this is very much an improvement over the first Foxfire comic.
YOU MUST ALSO LEARN HOW TO DRAW GOOD BUTTS! D:<
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The box looks a little flat...probably just a hint of shading on it would really improve it. You also drew in the buttocks a little funny, I'll be emailing you some reference stuff that I have probably tomorrow that might help you with that problem in the future. Besides that, it seems a bit odd that our protagonist would take a box home with a presumed living thing inside of it without knowing what it was, but then again, I don't know where he is in relation to his house, so it might be convenient for him to do so.
Otherwise, YES, some of us CAN guess who/whats in that box. Ah, good times are here again!
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I'll be adding those suggestions about the box, and hopefully Jim's @$$, in future pics. And I'll greatly appreciate the help you'll be able to send me. As for taking that box to Jim's hone, which was within walking distance. He didn't want whatever's in that box to get away very far, in case he needs to call Animal controll or something. It might not be the sanest idea in Jim's head. But it was something he would have done anyway in this situation.
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Alrighty, I just didn't know that he was so close to home. You should probably have had him mention that somewhere in frame that his house was nearby and that he didn't want whatever was in the box to get away. And who ever said protagonists were sane
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Well, that part about where he lives would have been in the next page.
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