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davidfoxfire — Scarlet PI--Strip 5
Published: 2004-10-22 05:45:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 4101; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 112
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Dispite my busy work schedule, I managed to get Strip 5 finished in advance!By the way, on the word "harrible," I misspell intentionally. That's how Thom Felicia says it, and it probably what he'd say when he had to live in such a ratrap place as Jim Goodlow's apartment.
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Looking at this again, you got the apartment feel right
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I think Jim is worried about cops harassing him as the one who threw what ever animal it is inside that box
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Why would PETA bother him?
He's not running a puppy mill, is he?
And maybe the mailman went postal and killed all the others.
There are no mailmen.
There never were! O_O
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Almost there....open the box already!!!
Just kidding, anways, the suspense is killing me. Old friends are to be reunited once more.
On a technical note, I would have maybe emphasised mailman. As well, maybe it would be a better idea to give us an establishing shot as he enters his apartment, just so we get a quick glimpse into the world of Jim Goodlow. Maybe an idea for the next panel? You also seem to have drawn his head a little small in the second panel.
The flow of the story is really good though, it keeps the pace really well. I'm just DYING to know whats in that box! Open it! Open it!
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