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davidfoxfire — Scarlet PI Strip 103
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Published: 2007-04-08 04:50:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2465; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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With the newly kigged underclassman of Pippkin out of the way, I can finally get to the point where I can continue with an interesting part of the story. Any suggestions on what to take this? (Need to keep things within DA's guidelines, of course. No Hentai stuff)Also, that new scanner that's Vista approved is coming this way, so the quality of the strips will improve.
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The "she" Pippkin is telling the transformed thugs to deliver a message too, is that the boss they mentioned before?
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It seems to me that your artwork is improving with every strip!
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You could have them talk about :
1. how they deal with the fact that they are parasitic and can only live through their hosts.
2. the current situation where they are using hosts of the opposite sex from themselves/one straight host and one gay host.
3. history. they they had lives before the strip started, didn't they?
4. what to do when whoever's trying to get them stages another attack, and how to protect their frenmds and loved ones when it happens.
5. how to continue caring for the daughter of the rabbit's host. Certainly somebody -- school system, pediatrician, relatives -- is eventually going to notice that her mother has dropped off the face of the earth. Will they live openly, as the costume and the human, or will they continue to live as the only face of the host-parasite partnership? Somehow, I don't think any (believable) fictional doctor or social worker will just accept the claims of a large rabbitman.
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They are all valid points, especially point #5. That could give Pippkin enough reason to find a way to reverse the process, returning Penn to her daughter. Until that time, Melody's going to have a wild ride living with Scarlet and Pippkin. I'm sure she'll have a lot of questions to ask the two about what they were before what happened. She also has some questions about what might happen to herself as well, caught between reliving her time using Disneyland as Day Care thanks to her mother being a former Castmember, and whatever or not a couple of costumed characters can care for her. This big thing has, indeed, fallen into her lap.
As for the next attack, Pippkin would no doubt have a proactive approach. He could very well gotten the feeb's instructions and find out where they were supposed to take Scarlet and Pippkin at. This would lead up to the first major confrontation.
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