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davidfoxfire — Script Demo: Johnny Briz by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-09-12 08:16:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1502; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description The second part of the Script samples, this one on the Briz himself.

Well, actually it's Amber interacting with Johnny, as he reveals his spiritual side, but I digress.

This will be part of the Ballad of Johnny Briz project: [link]
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PorygonV [2012-09-13 12:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Looking sharp on this one. Even perspective on the background. It just needs a little detail; if that's a bed next to the dresser, some blankets or sheets or the rounded corners of a mattress would go a long way to illustrate that.

On another topic, I do believe Disney is overly ruthless when it comes to their work appearing in non-Disney work (especially when money is involved). Might want to dress Johnny in a little more lawyer-friendly manner if that's a concern for you. If not, disregard this message.

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davidfoxfire In reply to PorygonV [2012-09-13 16:47:51 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that in mind when putting the little mattress on the main page.

As for Amber sacrificing a Mickey Mouse plush doll to hide Johnny's...ahem...it was the first thing that would come to Amber's--and for that matter mine's--time. Also, during the storyline, that part does get addressed as Amber and others find him more lawyer-friendly material.

Or I could just dump it all and just have Amber find a blue pair of shorts. (Although she would keep the white gloves--Disney can't sue for that unless they want to sue every other major studio in existence!)

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