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Published: 2011-10-26 18:15:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2174; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 23
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Description Link was trying to pass unnoticed looking at the source of the noice, suddenly he felt something was wrong as everything around him was moving down...

"wait, wha--?!" Alarmed he noticed that it wasn't his surroundings moving downwards, it was himself who was floating, panic struck him as he heard a warm but empty voice behind him...

"Another intruder?"

Link was terrified, he didn't know what was going on.

"it would seem so Cal..." Lexy's annoyed voice from behind a book on his chair.

"did you think you could rob a book he--" Lexy's statement was cut as his ears perked up, Caldera looked down on the floating shinx in surprise

"...are.... you crying?" Lexy's confusion was clear as he layed his book to the side a little to look at the intruder, clearly a shinx with diferent color than normal, but for him to be crying because of being scared...

"great... a child..." Lexy sighed as he didn't know to deal with kids, and never intended to, Caldera looked troubled too, he was perfectly able to attack teen or grown up rogues, but a child was... just mean...

Link couldn't help to cry as he remembered the way other teams talked about the librarians, he felt helpless to be floating like that infront of the two threats that could burn him any second now... he wished so bad for Ryuu to be there to save him but his voice wouldn't come out...

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Part two from Team Light side mission to the library, Link gets found and lifted by a telekinesis by the librarians...

I told you discression wasn't his forte!

Part 1 [link] Part 2 [link] Part 3 [link] Part 4 [link] Part 5 [link] Part 6 [link] Part 7 [link] Part 8 [link] Part 9 [link] Part 10 [link] Part 11 [link]


TEAM APP! [link]

I swear they're rescue team!!
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Comments: 24

GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-03 09:46:00 +0000 UTC]

lol i like lexi's face: T.T'

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dcrisisbeta In reply to GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-03 13:12:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it too, it was simple yet, it caught the exact reaction ^w^

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-03 22:17:06 +0000 UTC]

But poor, poor Link... floating there helplessly crying, worrying they could burn him any second now...

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dcrisisbeta In reply to GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-04 01:27:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah, but even the meaniest, strongest badass pokemon out there would feel something's wrong on trying to hurt a kid...

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-04 09:55:48 +0000 UTC]

With the exeption of... let's say... groundon, latios, heatran, tornadus, landourus, thunderous, kyrunem, reshiram, zecrom, raquaza, giritina, kyogre, and all other large or mean legendaries.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-04 15:50:05 +0000 UTC]

=7= kinda, for what we can see in this group is that legendaries are not that... mean either OwO

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-05 00:48:14 +0000 UTC]

...still... some are...

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dcrisisbeta In reply to GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-06 00:22:04 +0000 UTC]

^w^U yep

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-06 01:56:35 +0000 UTC]

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Khrysteen [2011-10-26 19:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Your illustrations are gorgeous! And I have to say that I love how sparkly and adorable Link is! So cute! >w<

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Khrysteen [2011-10-27 00:54:56 +0000 UTC]

OwO thanks!

I thought that shiny pokemon must sparkle a lot, if not they wouldn't be 'shiny' OwO

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Khrysteen In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-10-27 01:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, no problem.

Well they don't sparkle in the show I don't think, but they sure do sparkle a lot in the video games. XD I'm glad Link sparkles, though. I can't imagine he'd look as cute without them.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Khrysteen [2011-10-27 13:57:59 +0000 UTC]

YAY! ^w^ then i'll make sure to keep him shiny for the shinyness of the shiny!

........yeah... he'll sparkle lots...

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LupinusBellator [2011-10-26 18:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Still looking good beta! Keep it up!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to LupinusBellator [2011-10-27 00:54:10 +0000 UTC]

=v= thanks, will do

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Pinksneasel [2011-10-26 18:49:30 +0000 UTC]

I can totally imagine a little shinx cub crying in front of Lexy and Cal. They are scary to little kids.XD

And I love your art, but your writting could use a little work. Maybe you can have someone proof read it and check it for mistakes since they won't even judge your writting if they spot too many mistakes in it.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Pinksneasel [2011-10-27 00:53:56 +0000 UTC]

=7= yeah... I have some trouble with writing... even in spanish..

Lets say sometimes my mind goes faster than my fingers can follow...

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Pinksneasel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-10-27 01:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Its best to type things up in Word and proofread your stuff before copying it into your description. I mess stuff up all the time, especially when I'm posting to someone. My other fics are good, but I still have a few mistakes and odd sentences here and there, which I've seen after reading it back over(too lazy to fix them though at the moment.XD)

If you read your stuff over, you should immediately go back and correct things you see wrong and ask yourse;f if if your wording makes sense. Think of it as if you were saying the lines in normal conversation. Does it sound right to you? On the flip side, think about whether or not you're using the right word for something, or an incorrect word that sounds similar to what you really want to say. I noticed that in this entry, when you used the word 'sighted' when I'm sure you meant 'sighed'. Be careful of these little mistakes and check your work often.

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Inghelene [2011-10-26 18:43:31 +0000 UTC]

What an unexpected turn of event.
I look forward for more.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Inghelene [2011-10-27 00:52:53 +0000 UTC]

OwO thanks, they're coming as soon as I finish them...

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Yaramazara [2011-10-26 18:19:22 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors and details in this! Poor Link D:

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Yaramazara [2011-10-27 00:52:32 +0000 UTC]

OwO thanks!

yeah, but I did say discression wasn't his forte...

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UnknownOO8 [2011-10-26 18:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Really nice work in that picture! Looking forward for more

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dcrisisbeta In reply to UnknownOO8 [2011-10-27 00:51:47 +0000 UTC]

=w= thanks, I'm doing them as fast as I can TTwTT

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