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Demachic — Simple Poems
Published: 2011-05-13 22:01:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 75126; Favourites: 3569; Downloads: 171
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Poem about Simple Poems.
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While this is very cute and all, I have to disagree. Poetry with bad grammar and spelling errors? I'm sorry, but that's not 'charming'. That's just laziness.
A piece with a spelling error immediately takes away from the value, because it shows that the author doesn't even value the work enough to make it polished and worth reading.
So then why should the reader find anything in it that's worth valuing?
Also, is there any point at all the words that are circled, or are they simply circled because you felt like it?
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I believe the circled words are there to emphasis the meaning of the poem, which is basically the last line.
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It's a poem and thats all
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Its not about the polished and fixed its just meant to be private and from the heart. Its meant for people that the errors dont matter too.
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i think there's a difference between the fact that you might make mistakes, and the blatant disregard for the english language.
i know plenty of poems which are not polished and fixed, and don't have spelling errors.
personally, if you're going to communicate feelings via words, at least make sure that the words are correct.
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if its for yourself who gives a shit?
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i think the line is being taken too literally. i believe all Demachic was trying to convey is that if you put in an effort and let the poem come from your heart, it's okay if it's imperfect
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I think this is my favorite from what I've seen from you.
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I love your poems. They're so cute and inspiring~<3
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I love all of your poems! They are so cute and pretty and colorful. :3
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i adore your poems! they are so modern and NOT boring! they are really from the heart and the messages are inspired! you are a genius! ^^ 
btw, where do u make them,i mean, where do u draw the cartoons and circle the words? 
thanks :]
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You Aare amazing at writing poems! LOVE THEM! : D
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This was just too cute Cx
All of your poems are a great read. They're short, simple and totally endearing.
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Awww, this poem is inspiring. Now I feel like trying out writing poems.
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Don't know much about poetry, but I've been reading you poems and love them all so far. Thanks for sharing
PS. My very fist comment on DA
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In love this, it's really cute
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Wow what would I do without you
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Just so you know, I generally hate poetry as to me it seems like a song without a tune, but I do like this. I really, really do. Very simple and rather sweet. Good job!
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Can you check out my poems? I dont exactly have 3,000 favs like you and i was wondering if you could help?
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I love your poems but I always wonder why you color some words 
it looks pretty cute but is it just for visioning?
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Bravo. Again, this speaks to me.
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Thank you very much!
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awh It's sweet I really like this one ^^ keep it up~
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