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Published: 2019-04-13 20:52:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 473; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description Name: Karmir Ach’k’erov (or just Karmir)
Alias/Nickname: Red Eye
Species: Untamed Cyclops 
Age: 63
Height/Weight: 7'8, 480lbs
Gender: Male
Reason for entering: With the power of immortality, Karmir would re-enter as a gladiator so he could get his revenge on the people that put him against the wyvern and basilisk, even if immortality wont return him to his previous size.
Strengths: Has a small amount of armor for protection, One arm is much larger than the other and can inflict serious damage, very strong head that can slash and bite if needed, uses large objects to throw for long range.
Abilities: Does not posses any natural abilities other than his brute strength, added armor and anything big he can use as a weapon. Though it is possible that his ability that he lost when he was bitten "blood rage" is still inside him somehow, this ability slowly activates if he is exposed to damage over a long period of time, if this ability can infact occur still than its best to not extend the battle as it will make him stronger.
Weaknesses: Huge and weighed down with his extra fur and armor makes him quite slow, if his eye is damaged he is completely blind,Very top heavy and clumsy and with just hooves as feet he can be toppled over very easily and can be hard for him to stop when running, about as smart as Patrick Star but scarier, can overheat very quickly and become tired because of his size, weight and extra fur.
Personality:Hot headed, smash first ask questions later, greedy, easily manipulated and caught off guard, Takes his pride very seriously though he has become very self conscious ever since he has been shrunken down as he is now too small to be with other cyclops but is still too different and large to be with humans.
History: Karmir used to be a giant 50ft untamed cyclops that was used in gladiator combat being one of the strongest champions as it was well known that untamed cyclops was one of the strongest creatures even among dragons, hydras and many others. In a match against a basilisk and a wyvern, Karmir was overwhelmed by both of them and was struck in the arm by the basilisk which used an unknown venom that managed to shrink him down by almost 90% and reverted him into almost a normal cyclops loosing his natural armor and his special ability, "blood rage". The battle was canceled and he managed to escape during the recontainment of the other creatures, now he has found himself wondering the wilderness trying to find a way back to his normal self. 
Likes:Meat of any kind including man, a nice big cave to rest in.
Dislikes: visitors, thinking for longer than 30 seconds.
Other: secretly really wants a companion but knows it will never happen since everyone tries to run away or stab him with a pitchfork.


Also this character is for the  www.deviantart.com/labyrinth-o…
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Comments: 2

kiwipeach [2019-04-16 00:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Hello! Karmir needs a few edits before he's ready for the labyrinth! 

Reason for entering: There is no mention of how the vial of immortality will help him. Please explain how this is supposed to help him accomplish that goal. 

Weaknesses:
-Cutting off an arm does not count as a weakness. We compare weaknesses to an average human, and the average human would be weakened by losing an arm. Even if it is his special arm.

-We're going to ask that the wording "about as smart as an average football jockey." is changed so it's not targeting a person's interests. I know it's a common trope, but it'd still be nice to have something like 'dumb as a box of rocks' instead.

With the suggested edits, that leaves 5 strengths/abilities versus 3 weaknesses. We will need Karmir balanced out, by either adding weaknesses or removing strengths.

Personality: Please add at least a sentence to get an idea of personality aside from one-word descriptors. 


Let me know if you have questions or concerns!

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DodoRupter666 In reply to kiwipeach [2019-04-16 00:59:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the feedback, yeah I really need to fix the reason for entering bit and give better weaknesses I'll get right to changing them!

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