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Published: 2016-05-14 17:14:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2883; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 12
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that background took me like a week, no joke *_* but I'm done just in time for Chester's birthday which is tomorrooowalso I think that this song goes well with it :>
just a moment between Oli and Chestah~
they often lie like this: Oli can't really 'sit' cause he has no butt so he just leans on Chester and they lay there and talk about gay stuff for hours
the only downside is that Oli has to get back in the water every so often to keep his skin moist.
more gays:
tfw you forget that your bf eats fish rawTheir lips met.
After a moment, Chester jerked back. His face was scrunched up. "D-did you just eat?"
"Oh... yeah. Sorry."
"Uh, don't be. That's just... a very strong flavour." He stuck his tongue out and wiped it with his finger. He made a glahhhh sound.
"I'll try to remember to not eat before you come over." Oliver looked both embarrassed and amused.
"Um, do you want a mint or something? I'm sorry, I just can't stand the taste of raw fish."
Oliver laughed. "If you have one."
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Comments: 24
ZeldaKawaii135 [2016-05-15 16:47:52 +0000 UTC]
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(I haven't made a critique in a while, forgive me if I'm rusty)
This piece is absolutely beautiful, everything about it was so perfectly thought out and well executed it leaves me almost speechess, the key word being "almost" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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The anatomy of a centaur is something a lot of people tend to get wrong, horses and humans are certainly some of the hardest creatures to draw, but it seems you mastered that skill, the same could be said for his lover, the way his back arches and seems to embrace the warmth of his equine friend is perfect.
The way the water shifts from a deep forest-green to a fiery orange seemed a bit off, I'd use a stronger gradient, but that's just my personal preference.
The design of the characters fits perfectly well with the scene, specially the centaur, their blonde hair and brown coat seem to compliment the scenery.
The reflection of the sun and the shading of the characters was extremely well done and possibly my second favorite element of the piece.
The warm color scheme really did it for me, and I'm not ashamed to say it's my favorite part! The vibrant and eye-catching oranges mixed with the elegant and subtle greens truly makes this pleasing to look at.
Tl;dr: Beautiful.
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dreameroftheblue In reply to ZeldaKawaii135 [2016-05-15 18:06:09 +0000 UTC]
oh wow, thank you so so much for this in-depth feedback! this means a lot to me and is super helpful; I really appreciate it 8w8
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ZeldaKawaii135 In reply to dreameroftheblue [2016-05-15 19:13:43 +0000 UTC]
No problem
I really like to break-down/critique artwork, specially from people I admire.
Your characters and designs were a big influence on my story and inspired me to keep writing
(I don't plan on uploading it, since it's really personal, but I do have characters who share similarities with Oli and Chester, their names are Ross and Erwyn)
So it an honor to critique it
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dreameroftheblue In reply to ZeldaKawaii135 [2016-05-16 11:02:53 +0000 UTC]
ohhhh maaaaaaNNN THAT MEANS A WHOLE LOT TO ME
I'm so glad I could influence your art and characters; that's like, the highest form of artistic love ever
lemme know if you ever post anything of them, I'd love to see! ;w;
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ZeldaKawaii135 In reply to dreameroftheblue [2016-05-16 23:50:49 +0000 UTC]
I might post some AUs or random pics(someday) but not the full story
I'm extremely afraid of people copying and pasting it, then changing some names and saying it's theirs ;^;
If I ever get enough courage to post it someday, I'll send ya a note
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dreameroftheblue In reply to Zaneko8 [2019-06-21 22:10:13 +0000 UTC]
thank!! I feel the art's a bit outdated but I'm glad peeps are still enjoying my old ones l3c
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Zaneko8 In reply to dreameroftheblue [2019-06-22 02:31:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm new here. All the art, old or not, is new to me! I pick at random and just enjoy your work
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dreameroftheblue In reply to Cowboys281 [2016-11-11 18:43:35 +0000 UTC]
me too!! they're so much fun to draw
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Cowboys281 In reply to dreameroftheblue [2016-11-14 04:08:34 +0000 UTC]
I bet. You do a great job.
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fralea [2016-09-09 17:37:25 +0000 UTC]
AAAAH CUTE! I love the idea of a centaur/mermaid couple *u*
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dreameroftheblue In reply to fralea [2016-09-09 19:01:06 +0000 UTC]
8D thank you oh so much!! I love them too .w.
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Voltaic-Soda [2016-05-15 08:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Feels so warm and loving ;u; and that background is absolutely gorgeous TwT
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dreameroftheblue In reply to Voltaic-Soda [2016-05-15 18:28:31 +0000 UTC]
THANKS
I'm especially proud of this one ;W;
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Voltaic-Soda In reply to dreameroftheblue [2016-05-16 07:50:24 +0000 UTC]
You should be ;w;
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remanlongtail [2016-05-14 21:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is beautiful! You can really see how much these two characters care for each other, they way they're posed. The background is quite nice, too. Well done!
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dreameroftheblue In reply to remanlongtail [2016-05-15 18:23:32 +0000 UTC]
thank youuu!! you're so kind 8w8
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dreameroftheblue In reply to gearhead-emc2 [2016-05-14 17:22:47 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW, RIGHT I love them soooooo <33
... wait I mean THANKS
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