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Ebonycloud-Graphics — TNC Chapter 4 Part 2 by-nc-nd

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Description Sorry for changing the style from the last picture, but I will probably do that often. I am a fickle person X3 Believe me, Pheo looked horrible in the style I was using before... Anyway, I used Jedi Pheo's design... Dont judge me! D8< Just kidding ;D Gave Swanie an update as well ^^ Enjoy! Sorry for any grammar/spelling errors!


The group moved along the streets, no one saying a word except Ryan. The tom insistently called back to the rest of the group telling them about each and every street they walked on. Phoenixstep didn’t focus on the strange tom’s words however. He kept his mind on thoughts of his dreams. He didn’t remember much other than the gut feeling that he couldn’t trust Wolfpatch. He also knew that he had to talk to Swanfeather, however the subject of the questions eluded him.

Ahead of him, Ryan walked side by side with Wolfpatch, pestering the large blue-gray tom with his ramblings. Just behind him walked Ghostclaw and Tigerlily. The two were almost never out of each other’s sights, and when they were it was never for a long length of time. Phoenixstep felt envy at having someone, anyone from their past lives with whom he could trust and relax. Yet he was alone in this group. Not only because he was the only Riverclan survivor, but because he was the only medicine cat as well. The circumstances for his apprenticeship always seemed like a blur to him.

Phoenixstep had never really felt like he was medicine cat material. Sure, he knew the herbs and treatments but he never truly wanted to be who he was. Neither had his father, Redfang. He thought back to that night, his terrified scream, his father’s claws glinting in the lightning. He had never been more frightened in his life, not even after his whole clan had died.

“Phoenixstep, why are you slowing down?” Swanfeather’s voice sounded behind him. The ginger tom looked back to see that she was nearly next to him now. She had taken the last spot of the small group by bringing up the rear. Phoenixstep had fallen behind because his thoughts had carried him away from reality.

“Uh,” the medicine cat started lamely, “I… I was just thinking. What do you care?” He lifted a brow at her, feeling foolish for falling behind. The gold and white she cat narrowed her eyes at him but said nothing. A harsh sigh passed from Phoenixstep’s mouth, “Look, I didn’t mean to snap. Just got my mind on a lot lately.”

“Don’t we all?” Swanfeather quipped.

“I suppose,” Phoenixstep replied. A silence stretched between the two for a while. How was he going to bring up his question for her? What really was the question he was supposed to ask? Phoenixstep couldn’t remember.

Swanfeather sensed the medicine cat tensing beside her. She cast a quick glance in his direction, “Are you alright?” When he didn’t immediately reply she asked another question, “Have you really not had any dreams from Starclan lately?”

Phoenixstep’s eyes flashed toward hers. Their gazes locked but Phoenixstep couldn’t answer right away. Swanfeather was the only one that really knew about the prophecy that he had received. He didn’t know why he had only told her, but when he had walked in to Thunderclan he had gotten the same feeling then that he did now. He couldn’t tell Wolfpatch their destiny, and he didn’t know why. It was nice, however, that only one other cat knew of the prophecy. Keeping a tight lid upon what lay before them seemed like the right thing to do. Plus, Swanfeather really wasn’t on good terms with anyone else. Who would really want to talk to her anyway?

“Well,” Phoenixstep started in reply to Swanfeather’s question, “I don’t really know… I think I may have had a really important dream last night but I can’t remember what I was supposed to learn from it.”

Swanfeather tilted her head to the side, “Was Starclan unclear in their directions?”

Phoenixstep gave her a sarcastic look, “This is Starclan we’re talking about. When are they ever clear?”

A chuckle escaped Swanfeather’s lips, “You’re right, how could I forget?” She looked forward with a small grin on her face, “My sister used to have the same sort of problem.”

A twinge in Phoenixstep’s stomach made him pay close attention to the she-cat’s words.

“She used to come back from the Moonpool and say, ‘I don’t understand why Starclan has to be so cryptic all the time. If they want something done, they should just say what it is and have done with it,’” said the gold and white she cat as they moved on. “Of course, she wouldn’t tell me what they said…”

Something clicked inside Phoenixstep’s mind. He couldn’t stop the question as it forced its way from his mouth, “Viperpaw?”

Swanfeather stopped dead in her tracks. Her green eyes grew wide and shock appeared on her face, “How do you know that name?”

Phoenixstep was struck dumb. He couldn’t explain how he knew it, he just did.

Swanfeather pushed her face dangerously close to his. Her voice dropped in to threatening tones, “How do you know that name?”

Phoenixstep bristled at the she-cat, “I can’t explain it. Who is she?”

Swanfeather narrowed her eyes, “She was the sister I talked about. She died when she was about seven moons old.” The she cat turned away, pain and grief replacing her anger. Phoenixstep lowered his hackles in response. He had not realized that Viperpaw was such a touchy subject.

Softly, Phoenixstep asked, “What happened to her?”

Swanfeather didn’t immediately respond, instead she took a few steps away from the medicine cat. With a glazed look in her eye, she turned and stared deeply in to Phoenixstep’s dark eyes, “Don’t ask me that question right now… Maybe someday I will be willing to tell you, but not now.” With that she turned and padded away to catch up with the rest of the group.

Ryan had led the others across two other Thunderpaths before Phoenixstep and Swanfeather had resumed their march. Trying to catch up, the Shadowclan and Riverclan cats dashed across each street. As they crossed the final Thunerpath that distanced them from the group, Ryan was walking out in to the middle of another. Happily, he flicked his tail back and forth with no problem.

It made Phoenixstep uneasy at how carelessly the brown tom strode across the black surface of each street. There was no telling if a two-leg monster was going to come racing out behind a hidden corner. Yet the city cat didn’t seem worried in the least. The ginger medicine cat couldn’t help the horrible gut feeling that now too over him. There was danger in this place, too much for this small band to deal with. The group of survivors was not going to come out of this without some sort of sorrow to accompany them for the rest of their lives.

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Comments: 77

berrystar857 [2012-12-17 09:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Pheonixstep looks very manly now lol

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SaturnnReturn In reply to berrystar857 [2014-02-19 02:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Thats Ryan xD

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lili85245 [2012-10-24 18:24:40 +0000 UTC]

='( Snif ! Une BD si magnifique, je ne pourrais plus la suivre ='(

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kittens497 In reply to lili85245 [2015-05-30 01:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Oui

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lili85245 In reply to kittens497 [2015-05-30 08:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Merci de m'avoir rappelé l'existence de cette BD **
Maintenant qu j'maîtrise enfin l'anglais, j'ai plus aucune raison d'me plaindre **

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raggletagglesev [2012-09-09 04:19:27 +0000 UTC]

DUN'T PAIR THEM!!!!!!! ;A;

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leaderwolf5808 [2012-08-11 01:47:58 +0000 UTC]

I like this style of drawing much better, keep up the good work ^^

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to leaderwolf5808 [2012-08-13 02:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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bd21hp [2012-06-12 22:57:33 +0000 UTC]

me likes

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WolfFire369 [2012-05-04 17:07:42 +0000 UTC]

I think I like PhoenixStep's old hair better... love the new markings though, it brings out more personality

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bbran830 [2012-03-28 01:27:58 +0000 UTC]

they should talk in the comic cuase now i dont feel like weirding alot of words it make me sick some how O.o

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TigriskyGirl13 In reply to bbran830 [2018-02-13 18:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Ikr

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kasitex [2012-03-04 07:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Okay, i like the new art style, but i'd rather have the comic format with the new art style. Sorry, i just like it better.

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SwiftBreeze201899 In reply to kasitex [2012-07-05 17:25:58 +0000 UTC]

me too

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warriorcats1998 [2011-12-18 23:36:27 +0000 UTC]

D: i wish it was till in comic form so badly. ono no offence ik its good but its more confusing this way and im less interested. yes i read books all the time im a book nerd but i love me a good comic. im finding myself skipping through this to try and find the exiting part.

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to warriorcats1998 [2011-12-19 02:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Actually, if you keep going you'll see that I've actually gone back to comic format in Chapter 5 ^^

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warriorcats1998 In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-19 13:05:08 +0000 UTC]

awh sweet thanks. sorry i was not in a good mood yesterday. had a horrid headache saw a bunch if words and my brain screamed lolol.

now my headache is gone i can focus on reading it. :3 your pretty good at writting stories. but who is the blue gray one? is that wolfie?

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to warriorcats1998 [2011-12-19 16:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Hey its no problem. You weren't really rude. You should have seen some of the things other people have said to me when I started the written format. Jerks... Anyway, pretty sure it is Wolfpatch. I was screwing around with their designs because I could XD

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warriorcats1998 In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-12-19 18:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Lmao cause you could LIKE A BOSS

even if i wasent really rude i kind of was =I
lmao i need to finish up reading it awesome. i dunno why tiger got crazeh eyes when she got angry yet P: and imma read cause now im in a good mood and i dont feel sick. um .. after i finish cleaning my room -shot- you should see the junk i pulled out from under my bed lolol andmylittlesisterhasbeenthrowingfoodundermybedandipulledsomethinggreenandnastyoutidontevenknow...

oh btw i saw you inproved alot from the time you started the comic as you went along good job

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Denece-the-sylcoe [2011-12-09 03:05:27 +0000 UTC]

this is horribly confusing.

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MVPeebs [2011-11-13 02:46:33 +0000 UTC]

"Late comment" (reading through story again) but is it just me or does Swanfeather look more pretty with her new design

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Shadowpaw76 [2011-09-07 12:45:58 +0000 UTC]

*gasp!* new art style!!! Me likey

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Twilightmyyst [2011-09-05 11:14:00 +0000 UTC]

lol, my name is Ryan xP

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CatGal131 [2011-08-31 23:21:58 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!

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Mystyflower [2011-08-17 03:50:15 +0000 UTC]

EPICNESS!!! im all 4 a certain couple o3o XDDD

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yewtail-yewstar [2011-08-04 21:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Are you not adding text to the drawings any longer? I think it's better that way, more like a comic. C:

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to yewtail-yewstar [2011-08-04 22:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Nope, the comic takes to long and I really don't want to waste that much time on a simple fan fiction ^^

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yewtail-yewstar In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-10-02 01:06:28 +0000 UTC]

meh.

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CatGal131 In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-08-31 23:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Good thinking, and the drawings are still top-rate!

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skywing102 [2011-07-28 09:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Phoenixxswany <3

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Featherwind21 [2011-07-27 03:25:25 +0000 UTC]

I love your new way of drawing the comic, but I WILL MISS the old way, I that way!

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AKrosetail [2011-07-24 12:29:44 +0000 UTC]

i love how you drew swanfeather! it looks really good!

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easy22 [2011-07-23 15:48:57 +0000 UTC]

KEEP THE NEW PHEO DESINE!!!! IT LOOKS AWSOME!!!!!

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Evelyn-Cross [2011-07-23 03:59:39 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I think you should add whiskers, but that's up to you as the artist. Very nice chapter/part. For whatever reason I like Phoenix and Swanie together better than Tigerlily maybe because I feel they don't clash..as much personality-wise but eh..just me. xD And wow, the new designs and style looks wonderful. Great job! Can't wait for the next part!

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Ebonycloud-Graphics In reply to Evelyn-Cross [2011-07-23 05:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input bud! I will consider putting whiskers on the characters so long as it doesn't make them look worse ;D As for couples, I don't really have any planned at the moment so I don't know who will end up with who ^^ Its all up to fate XD

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Evelyn-Cross In reply to Ebonycloud-Graphics [2011-07-23 06:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Aha, no problem. I don't know what you mean by "making them look worse" as they already look amazing. Haha, alright I kind of thought you had it already planned out but at least they have a chance. Woooooo fate!

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Winterclaw [2011-07-23 01:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Jedi Pheonixstep FTW!!! X3 I love how you updated their designs! Will you do it for the others too?

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AmutheKitten [2011-07-23 00:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Aww no more normal comics? I love your comics!

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Sassywolfgirl [2011-07-22 23:38:14 +0000 UTC]

more more more!

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CreekfrostWarrior [2011-07-22 20:01:24 +0000 UTC]

I like Swanfeather's new design, Phoenixstep though, if you keep him like this he will be hard for me to draw just kidding, I would draw him anyway.

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Mayamoose [2011-07-22 19:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Hey you should do the whole thing like this beginning to end.

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Fernsway [2011-07-22 18:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Theyre so FUFFY!!!

cool :3

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neutralchao59 [2011-07-22 17:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. This chapter is really good. The picture is awesome as well!

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WishingLamp [2011-07-22 17:10:35 +0000 UTC]

I support Pheonixstep X Swanfeather!!!!

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X-WindDance-X [2011-07-22 16:19:09 +0000 UTC]

O: Even better than the last! ^^ It's getting goooood!

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iceheart98 [2011-07-22 15:57:00 +0000 UTC]

I love Swanfeather so much.!! <3
I always did from the start x3

Haha, I hope Pheonixstep and Swanfeather become friends.! 8D
Or maybe more then friends
Haha.

Brilliant picture by the way.!
I like this idea better then the comic.
And the pages will be out much sooner.!!! c:

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Toxiclilly [2011-07-22 15:41:02 +0000 UTC]

I like the more cat like style! ^-^

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gdpr-17038290 [2011-07-22 14:41:20 +0000 UTC]

This is great and I love the way Phoenixstep looks His (hair) is awesome

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Amet-Color [2011-07-22 14:07:30 +0000 UTC]

I love Pheonixstep's new design, he looks a lot older, and more serious. Great chapter by the way.

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Yolly-anda [2011-07-22 13:49:33 +0000 UTC]

I love Swanfeather so much <33 we get to know more about her, yeessssss!

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