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Published: 2007-07-30 18:08:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Well, this is the big one! I'm classifying it as a possible work-in-progress because I haven't printed it yet, and when I print it, I may discover things that I absolutely must change...by the end of the week, I hope to have the final decided on, and I will then add the credits (the photos remaining are the castle background and the maple leaves; the girl has been painted from a model photo).

After working on this FOR-EV-ER, I thought that I was actually getting done. But then at 3 a.m. last night I made the sudden (and possibly horribly stupid) decision to add the tree/leaves on the right. That was not a part of my original conception at all (originally, I was going to light the lamp on the wall for contrast), and I'm worried that it detracts from the dark/contemplative tone. But at the same time, it seemed that too much of the focus was in the center, and I think I need something to draw the eye outward and up.

Please, please critique and give me your thoughts on this, I will definitely take them into consideration when I make my revisions!! There are some other things that I'm not sure if I'm happy with, but I don't know if it would jump out to someone else--please say, if so.

All in all, however, I think it is one of my better accomplishments, as people are very difficult for me to do. If this turns out good at all, I plan to plot the actual 8533x6400 size (download for that size) for my wall, as a compliment to my Magic Window piece.
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Comments: 8

QueEnOfNights [2007-08-02 18:33:45 +0000 UTC]

W~O~W o_______________o this is reaaly good *_*
i also like the background XD

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Eicats In reply to QueEnOfNights [2007-08-02 18:45:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! I do plan to make some changes, but I probably won't have time for awhile...

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Spasmatic-Squirrel [2007-07-30 19:58:10 +0000 UTC]

OMFG D: THAT. IS.SOOOO.GOOOD! 8D


Advanced critique, eh? xDD Um...one thing I see is that her eyelashes sorta disappear in the middle of her right eye. I know, perspective and stuff, but I think they should continue on a little more.

But it ROOOOOCKS. IS the bg a picture, or did thouest draw eet? 8DDD


*totally faves this awesome piece*

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Eicats In reply to Spasmatic-Squirrel [2007-07-30 21:24:19 +0000 UTC]

...and you don't think the tree looks weird? [I know I'm totally obsessing about the tree!]

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Eicats In reply to Spasmatic-Squirrel [2007-07-30 21:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you! And- first comment, yay!

Good point about the eyelashes. When I add a link to the original photo later, you'll see what I mean, but the original had a blurry view of lashes just on the end (I think because of the angle). But, I think if I taper them a bit more and stretch them farther, that will keep the side angle but will hopefully take care of the weirdness. Excellent suggestion!

After putting all that work into painting the girl, I debated painting the castle, but then I realized what a MAJOR pain that would be, and that I'd never do it justice! So, yes it is a photo; but with some levels and gradiation revisions.

Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate the help!

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Spasmatic-Squirrel In reply to Eicats [2007-07-30 23:11:58 +0000 UTC]

xDDDD Well, your welcome! Although this alread is drop-dead AWESOME D:

Well, either way, the castle is COOL >D

>w< Aww, I'm not that good at critiquing. But I tried xDD

And HEAVENs nO! xDD The tree is AWESOME! It's so COOl, it adds composition to the whole piece ^0^

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Eicats In reply to Spasmatic-Squirrel [2007-07-31 14:15:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your thoughts...maybe I'm just questioning the tree because it was added at the last minute.

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Spasmatic-Squirrel In reply to Eicats [2007-07-31 19:31:50 +0000 UTC]

xDD I do that ALL the time...but, yes, I really like it ^^

You are welcome ^^

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