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Looking beyond
Published: 2004-12-02 07:54:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 16011; Favourites: 825; Downloads: 3230
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Description
The darkness that is your life...
are the shadows the veil your sight.
The sun that finds no way in,
has you living in the abscence of light.
It's odd to wonder how this all began,
odd how you feel so forsaken.
You pray every night the light can find its way,
but the rage is consuming you from within,
and her memory haunts you every day.
it drives you so hard to hide behind the pain
She lingers on your mind
it's the hate that never seems to fade...
You love her,
You hate her,
'...I can't live without her...'
Screams are so loud but she can't hear.
You've pushed her so far away.
Why does it have to be this way?
Your ability to love is so, so far gone,
It's so easy to be afraid,
and hide away from your fears.
Maybe it's time to look beyond,
push away the hate,
and once again embrace her golden light
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Comments: 129
Heh I bookmarked this work once in elfwood, How old is this one now 
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You really have talent. My drawing sucks compared to yours. I love it!!!
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Nice how you have the glow of the mirror thingy on the frame around it. looks great. one bit of critique, is you seem to have an unaccounted for light source. there seems to be some yellowish light on the bricks, but i cant see where its coming from. Well thats all i can suggest in the way of critique. its very nice.
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You, my hopefully future friend, are awesome. I love this, especially the colors and how you arranged the elements of the picture. +fav, must watch...
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amazing detail with a subtle colouring that really adds atmosphere, an impressive piece.
LJ.
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I like the dragon details and expression, but not the girl's face. Anyway, those are some lovely textures and colours.
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great work... 
for some reason these swirls around dragon's head and background remind me of fractals I'm currently working on...
I wonder if.......
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That is absolutely AWESOME!
^_^
I love it...its cool and pretty and blue...
I'm done now
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AWESOME!!
it's a great piece of art, my friend!!
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How could anybody find anything to be critical about this deviation?
Absolutely striking!!!
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Thats beautifull!! i love the detail. and the poem is inspireing. must Fave!!
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it's beautiful and hypnotic...*favs* I love it
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This is quite breathtaking. The colours are vivid and intense. Great work, very inspiring
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Holy my goodness gracious that's an amazing piece. You should try adding subtle hints of golden light maybe just casting it's light on one key element in the picture as if the light source were a spot light.
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Looks fantastic! This must have taken forever to do.
I'd give you a critical comment but I can't think of anything that could be improved.
Must look at gallery...
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wow! would ya look at that! look at those colours and all the patterns and details!!! IT all meshes together perfectly!
nice work
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This is absolutely breath-taking. 
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