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Erithe — The Empty Hand -
Published: 2003-06-22 01:49:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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I am lonely. Really, terribly lonely. I don't exactly know how to fix it. It hit me suddenly tonight ... a sudden kind of pain. So I wrote it down. I haven't written any new poetry in a while. So, be gentle.Related content
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This poem is so goooood. I need to re-read it a few times when I'm not about to go sleep. I'll + and re-read tomorrow. Great work, I'd like to read more from you. (and Eri is my nickname too. hehe)
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you so beautifully phrased the emptiness in my heart.
you're not the only one that feels this way.
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I don't know why, but I sang this poem instead of just read it...
Needless to say, absolutely beautiful.
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That's really beautiful, It really put a picture of someone standing alone on a cliff by a sea in my head, and gives a sense of how the time is passing that day as the person is alone.
Ahhhh. ....I wonder when Josh will get home....lonely now....
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*sniffles* ish so beautiful and sad. I luffs j0000 *hugs*
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wow thats got great emotion! very well done. and also nice picture.
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