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Published: 2009-09-02 11:18:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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He's lying on his bed. The door is locked. He stares, unblinking, at the ceiling. His limbs feel heavy, cumbersome, lethargic. Straining, he tries to move an arm that is no longer his. No response. Desperately, he attempts motion, struggling to motivate flesh turned to lead.And then the voices start. They whisper to him from his peripherals, whispering dark, unspoken secrets of the fathoms of his heart. He screams, through lips that don't part.
And then he woke up.
He's lying on his bed. The door is locked. Mouth dry from his nightmare, he pants, inhaling deeply. There is smoke in the air. He looks down. There is fire, at the foot of the bed. Panicked, he struggles to rise, fights to get up; but his hands are chained, by blood and iron.
The flames lick at his feet, and his skin peels back like cellophane. He screams, through the heat and smog.
And then he woke up.
He's lying on his bed. The door is locked. Sweating and hot from his nightmare, he opens his window. Too late, he realizes there is no air outside. The water stampedes through the threshold, rushing in with reckless abandon, pummeling him and throwing him backwards. He battles against the current, wading through the rising liquids, fumbling for the doorknob. Grasping it, he twists.
It rattles, unyielding, against his wet palm. He screams, as the water takes him, and it becomes a gargle.
And then he woke up.
He's lying on his bed. Terrified from his nightmare, alone, in his room, he sobs himself back to sleep.
The door is locked.
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Comments: 14
blitzykitzstar [2009-09-12 13:06:00 +0000 UTC]
*shivers* thats so creepeh *-*
...*poke* you're gonna give me nightmares now T_T
whyyy?? *shakes you* why implant such rare terrible images in my head, sir? why must you be so cruel? how can you not spare the innocence of a young child's hopes and dreams?
...*coughs awkwardly* yes i finished ranting. all calm (:
and seriously duuuude~ great words (:
AND COME BACK FROM CAMP STAT. i have no one to text D:
tu me manques~
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evilrandomguyblah In reply to blitzykitzstar [2009-09-16 11:13:59 +0000 UTC]
Innocence, once lost, can never be regained. I'm really happy with this one. Thanks.
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animeanonymous [2009-09-05 07:01:59 +0000 UTC]
Ooohh!! Send chills down my spine!!!
It's go~od!!
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Ziblink [2009-09-05 00:26:48 +0000 UTC]
Can't say I've dreamed much. Sounds like an awesome room.
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KimKimsGalore [2009-09-02 23:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Seems never-ending, almost as frightening as the other story~ It seems that when he wakes up he just keeps plunging into another nightmare.
You've had these dreams? >__>
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evilrandomguyblah In reply to KimKimsGalore [2009-09-05 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes, these are all my dreams.
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CreativeClara [2009-09-02 22:45:14 +0000 UTC]
that was really fascinating o__o i mean, how it keeps going and you think he's finally going to wake up but he keeps getting deeper and deeper. good job, and those are really scary dreams that you've had :c
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evilrandomguyblah In reply to CreativeClara [2009-09-05 00:37:23 +0000 UTC]
It's a vicious cycle.
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aberiddia [2009-09-02 17:08:21 +0000 UTC]
I like how the dreams are somewhat in layers. = w =
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