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Super-fastΒ page! Maybe I ll write aΒ more precise description later, now I have to go off before the thunderstorm roasts my motherboard!Page 13-14: fav.me/d7d55k1
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Thanks a lot 
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Heh sure I know what you mean. It helps a lot for motivations and i don't do those kind of comment a lot.
But i like the story here with Malefor's past.. But will there be Ignitus, Volteer, Cyril and Terrador also?
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Haha, same goes for me! I know that these comments are unbelieveable helpful, but well: I m a lazy person XD
Hm, I get asked that a lot actually. I don t think I can add them into this without it looking shoe-horned in. What disturbs me is one line by Ignitus from the first game: "The purple dragon that gets born only once every ten generations" (or something like that). I m still not all too sure how far apart Malefor and Spyro are - Malefor once stated that there were dozens of purple dragons, all destined to ressurect the destroyer. In my opinions there are only two possible outcomes: 1.: Malefor lied to make Spyro insecure over his fate/destiny or 2.: Malefor told the truth, what would make Ignitus and gang incredibly old if they were around when Malefor took over the first time. So all in all: It s all a matter of what I decide to be canon for that story XD
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ah I can be as well for drawing or writing my dragon's story X3
Yeah you're quite right for this analysis. So you should bring the old guardians instead of Ignitus, Volteer etc...
Oh but, about the Ancestors, have you thought about it too?
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Yeah, I ve got a new set of guardians designed for that matter. If I add in Ignitus and gang they will probably be around Malefor s age in the comic - maybe younger. As for the ancestors: Yes, I mplanning to include them in a bigger way (since they re kinda a big deal in the TLOS-universe), but I m still looking for the perfect way to pull it off. As mentioned, I don t like shoe-horning stuff in only because I see it a necessity to add it in. But yeah, it sure is a work in progress!
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alright then ^^ good luck
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Thank you! I could need it
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you're welcome ^^
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Red-dragon on the first panel looks totally awesome!
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Thanks a lot
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why can't the apes rejoin the union if they use diplomatic means?
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Mostly because I suck at describing diplomatic stuff - and on the other hand: I write this like it crosses my mind, what means I m not haveing a clear script and my ideas change pretty much every other day. Right now, I thought about giving the apes a few own goals which they are not interested in shareing with the dragons.
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so maybe you should remove that they also tried by diplomatic means.
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Yeah, that s probably a good idea!
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I hate these new skills.
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You mean that abilities to analyze and question a script?
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Yes, it just makes things more difficult and stressful.
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Well, that indeed makes fiction a lot harder to read. But I would use that skill to write extremely realistic stuff.
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but I have no interest in that. I like fantasy like stories.
Also it has a lot of restrictions and all kind of other things. If things were just more realistic it would be acceptable, but it's so much more than that.
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Wow, this makes it pretty hard, of course.
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yeah, that's why I hate it so much.
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Malefor is so stubborn lol XD
*next page*
Whoa he's actually feeling gilt....whoa this is deep
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More a mix of guilt and confusion! Nobody expects to everything go down on your first day at the woods XD
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For those who can't read the green words: "There was Avalar, who belonged to the cheeta -- "
Wait, WHAT!?!?!?! WHO?!?!Β It should be WHICH!!!!
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Well, there are nicer ways to say this. My english isn t perfect because it s my second language.
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1 ) the map panel ought to be a lot bigger !!! i could barely read anything !!!
2 ) it's amazing how something as cute as malefor turned out the way he did !!! just look at that pose in the 5th and 11th panels !!!
3 ) ah lysisa , just like a mother !!! never stops teasing her child !!! and she looks funny sitting like that in the 6th panel !!!
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Yup, already got feedback on the map, so I uploaded the map-file seperately ^^!
Ah, you know me! I love working with poses and facial expressions!
What can I say? I needed some character-interaction that is a bit more than sit-and-listen XD !
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noticed , and thanked you for it !!!
yes i do , yes i do !!! and the last panel reminds me of myself when i was little and my parents were arguing !!!
or ... senseless mary sue/gary stu action ( thinking about a special pronoun right now !!! )
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But I may change a few names on the map. My English was hibernating when I made the map XD!
Oh yeah! The mix between fear and guilt! That are my second favorite expressions to draw! (Favorite would be rage - It s fun to draw!)
Hahaha, I try to keep this to a minimum XD ! I could have drawn a full mental breakdown in that page, but (luckily) decided against it XD !
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hmm , come up with good ones then !!!
rage ?!!! not bad , but i prefer the psychotic evil look !!!
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Yup! I will try XD ! - But I m open for ideas!
Yep, rage is awesome to draw! - But psychotic looks are also very close by!
Well thank you
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maybe we could tell you our ideas ( me and Gu ) if you want them ?
that , and the dumbstruck look you only see on dogs !!!
welsies !!!
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Sure! Just go ahead^^!
Yup, but I can t really draw them XD !
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alright , let me know what kind of word you want , and i'm sure Gu knows more than enough weird words from ancient African languages to find something similar !!!
i'm sure you're just being modest .
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Oh, I m sure he can do fine
Okay, lets just say I m missing the practice!
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hmm , HE will do a good job , i'm just a messenger !!!
i'm sure you'll do fine if you ever decide to do so .
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Well, you still have the job to transfer the message without mstakes! And with Guidish, this can be though work!
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i'll tell him to write it down !!!
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The story gets more and more interesting...
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Thank you
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No problem. ^^
Then carry on.
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Haha, I will try XD!
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Don't worry, you'll succeed.
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Thank you
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No problem. ^^
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great job, the last picture says everything "this whole mess isn't my fault, is it ?!"Β
how much it takes to done this page ?Β
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Thanks a lot
Hm, two days. The first day was sketching, the outlines and flat colors. On day two I made the shading and the backgrounds. I was surprisingly fast XD !
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2 days ??!!
thats freaking fast
congratsΒ
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Yeah, I know XD ! Usually I need 2 weeks XD !
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