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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD
And I have to explain something; the white one is a male! He looks rather fine build and is relatively small, because he's a south European (Alpine) type, while the others are Russian cheederians; bigger and stronger build - also the females (like the green-eyed black one).
Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
Special thanks to , as beta-readers, my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes as models and of course all the people on DA for helpful tips!
Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Comments: 63
Vannjaren In reply to ??? [2012-10-20 13:56:08 +0000 UTC]
I can't help but feel so sorry for Sasha watching Yves in this situation - I love how you've drawn her facial expressions, she looks so guilty and ashamed, yet still upset at Yves' treatment. <3
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FelisGlacialis In reply to Vannjaren [2012-10-27 11:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah exactly! the expressions are slightly anthropomorphic, but I think that helps to make people liking a character and feel affinity with them ^^.
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Vannjaren In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-29 10:18:10 +0000 UTC]
Indeed - and they're not overly anthropomorphic, which is good - they still look like they could move their features to make such expressions since they aren't too exaggerated, and I agree, since it's easier to see what they're thinking or feeling. ;D
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FelisGlacialis In reply to Vannjaren [2012-10-29 13:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah indeed - I try to use mostly the expressions I see in my cats (especially the shape of the mouth) and exceggate4 them a bit - but I still try to deviate not too much of regular feline facial expessions - and thanksd to my very expressionful Oriental cats Ive some good examples 8D
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Vannjaren In reply to FelisGlacialis [2012-10-29 17:55:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, having cats would help a lot I'm sure, since you can study what sort of facial movements they can make. And yes, Nintu and Neo do seem quite expressive! ^^
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Sharaiza In reply to ??? [2012-10-20 13:39:32 +0000 UTC]
I missed these two last pages and now I am like "Wow" I didn't see this coming xD
I love this comic so much! ^^
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FelisGlacialis In reply to Sharaiza [2012-10-27 11:53:44 +0000 UTC]
Good! surprise - the story will be full of surprises, but I will often give some hints before XD - which you might only notice after a surprising event XD
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SueaNoi In reply to ??? [2012-10-20 12:54:20 +0000 UTC]
oh snap! He looks like he didn't know that.
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FelisGlacialis In reply to SueaNoi [2012-10-20 13:31:24 +0000 UTC]
He didnt want Nigras to know that XD...
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