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Brave Sasha!
Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD
Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
Special thanks to , for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking beta readers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.
Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Congrats on the DD!
Anywho... I'm getting to like this gray-tan guy... he seems to have the whole situation wrapped around his finger.
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wow this is very deep just from one page. I may need to follow up ^^
Congradulations on your DD ^^
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Congrats on the DD!
see, obviously you know what you're doing
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It's lovely. I don't understand the story... but thats because it's the first one I've read. BUT I will go back and start from the begining.
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Sensational Work of Art 
Congratulations on your DD Feature
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This is seriously amazing! 
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.....this art is beyond beautiful and the story intriguing.....you've just found yourself another reader......=3
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Is it wrong that I'm happy he stood up for the Hyenas, stating they saved him? 
I'm curious to hear about how he knows Sasha as well.
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Ha it's good - both cheederians and hyenas are not bad - they are just in conflict and both with good reasons.
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that's right! And it seem's daddy can't quite sa no to his daughter's sweet face huh? I'm glad Yves is starting to show some defence for himself too.
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Ha yeah indeed - Nigras is hard but not cruel as his upcoming son Ferrus. That is a bloody bastard. Anyway Yves and self-defence is something that is a hard combination XD Anyway ya will see hehe
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you know i had a nightmare about Rose and Ferrus? I was reading it like it was a written novel....I think it was my anger that woak me up. x.x it was very bad.
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hopefully Ferrus is not of Rose' generation - he might be dead already. Oh wait Stian kills him. What was the nightmare? I dream about Yves and Sasha now a lot XD
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oh yeah I know Ferrus will be gone LONG before Rose is ever born. *phew* But you know who dream's are just 'weird'? In the dream I was reading a Cheederian book...like it was a 'written' novel...and He was...doing really terrible horrible things to her *shudders* in the book...I woke up with a start I think it was because i was so angry in the dream I was about to rip the book apart! 
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Yeah brave Sasha .... and what a stubborn Nigras. Hope Yves is more or less safe now. Thanks for the comic !
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NP! Ha Nigras is a 'boss' you don't have to mess with XD
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Great story so far and it's really beautifully drawn, I love their fur
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Thanks!! Good to hear! Promising for for the next chapters XD
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a horse sized mix between...
Can you define horse sized? Horses can be the size of a german shepherd as well as the size of a young elephant.
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scherpe opmerking overigens
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Ik vergeet telkens dat er ook andere mensen op dA zijn die nederlands spreken
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np - ik check ook niet van iedereen waar die vandaan komt - overigens is dat bij mij een beetje misleidend gezien k in Noorwegen woon. Dus dan zou je ergens verstopt uit men DA ID moeten opvissen dat ik Nederlands ben XD
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Hoe is het daar in Noorwegen? Koud?
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Echt fantastisch! Ik woon aan de rand van Trondheim, op ongeveer 550 km van de poolcircel. Gelukkig houdt de warme golfstroom het nog redelijk behagelijk (-10 tot 0 overdag in de winter en heel veel sneeuw) en daalt de temperatuur hier gelukkig niet tot -40 (zoals 2 uur met de trein verderop).
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En ben je soms nog aan het schaatsen? Ik wou dat hier weer ijs lag, maar dat duurt nog even.
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schaatsen op de straat haha - hier loopt men met spijkers onder de schoenen gezien het op schuinaflopende voetpaden anders onmogelijk lopen is. Maar nu dooit het hier flink - jammer. Ik heb zin in een pittige winter met veel sneeuw! Wie weet komt dr ook nog wel ijs in NL - afgelopen jaar toch bijna en elfsteden tocht.
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Ja, klopt. het ging net niet door. Volgens mij gingen de noorderrondritten hier wel door. De elfdorpentocht in ieder geval, daar heb ik aan mee gedaan.
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Je bent dus een actief schaatser? Gaaf. Ik zelf sta graag op ski's, zowel alpine als langlauf
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Niet zo fanatiek als mijn vader, maar als er ijs ligt probeer ik wel zo veel mogelijk te schaatsen. Skien is ook erg leuk, maar dat komt er niet van dit jaar, vanwege blessures in de familie...
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Mannetjes hebben n gemiddelde schofhoogte van 1,8 en vrouwtjes 1,7 m. Gigantisch, maar de metafysische energyflow verklaart een hoop evolutionaire achtergrond.
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