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Although the impact of this page could have been much greater if it was divided by the half, I must say that I'm quite satisfied with the way I managed to solve the disastrous composition of the original. The 17 pannels are now 15, which although they are still quite a lot, at least the order from left to right (instead of top to bottom as it's convenient) is already much easier to distinguish this time. More reasons as to why I wasn't happy to have these pages online, unless they were a part of a remake. It has been very interesting to find out where I was wrong and what can I do now to try to repair it. It really makes it clear how important time and practice are when it comes to improving.
Aside from that, there wasn't much we could do for General Rhino, more than improving his dialogues on the previous page and move on.
It's a shame really...because now that we re-wrote and re-draw him, I was starting to like this character again
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Comments: 4
When you started to like an old character you made, but you remembered you killed him off.
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Well, apparently he only lived one page 
I like how you can still see Mime following the fourth panel. :3
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The General is dead! I repeat, the general is dead!
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