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As I mentioned on the previous page, I think this is the scene I'm less proud of from the first 4 chapters; not because of the drawings or the elements that make up the story, but because of the way those elements were connected. Camouflage is to Sneaky as explosives are to Ka-boom, that I can understand, and although I agree with the way we used camouflage on page 21, I don't think I can say the same about the explosives or what comes right after the last pannel (and I don't exactly mean next page, which is actually one of my favorites). I still remember that we had a lot of troubles writing this part 10 years ago, but since we didn't have the knowledge, nor the skills needed to solve those kinds of issues more effectively at that time, the final result was kind of...forced, at least in my opinion. Not awful, I suppose, although now I can't stop thinking about all those alternate paths we could never see back then.

Many things have happened since 2011, and we are much more aware of both our mistakes, and what can we do every time we have to face those fearsome plotholes. You will understand better what I mean by that later on.

Anyway, at least I can say that I like the drawings much better now, and that even if I don't agree much with the writing, at least I think the heart has always been in the right place.

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Description

★ Please do not edit, reproduce or redistribute★

*For those who already know the story, try not to comment spoilers please.

As I mentioned on the previous page, I think this is the scene I'm less proud of from the first 4 chapters; not because of the drawings or the elements that make up the story, but because of the way those elements were connected. Camouflage is to Sneaky as explosives are to Ka-boom, that I can understand, and although I agree with the way we used camouflage on page 21, I don't think I can say the same about the explosives or what comes right after the last pannel (and I don't exactly mean next page, which is actually one of my favorites). I still remember that we had a lot of troubles writing this part 10 years ago, but since we didn't have the knowledge, nor the skills needed to solve those kinds of issues more effectively at that time, the final result was kind of...forced, at least in my opinion. Not awful, I suppose, although now I can't stop thinking about all those alternate paths we could never see back then.

Many things have happened since 2011, and we are much more aware of both our mistakes, and what can we do every time we have to face those fearsome plotholes. You will understand better what I mean by that later on.

Anyway, at least I can say that I like the drawings much better now, and that even if I don't agree much with the writing, at least I think the heart has always been in the right place.

Previous page | Next page

For early access to new pages, art requests and exclusive Sweet Lullaby content, we invite you to visit our Patreon:

LullabyofaDeepForest

Artwork © / 2011 (2020 edition)
HTF © Mondo Media
Sweet Lullaby is created by and