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It could even be an adaptation, the last two pages were the most difficult to repair for the remake, since in addition to presenting the same problems that I've mentioned before, there were other types of difficulties in the conclusion, specially regarding the rhythm and information that no longer works for the direction we want to give to the rest of the story. It was necessary to change several points for this new version, as well as adding more fun ones like Mime's way to communicate when it comes to something serious or just when he doesn't have enough energy for pantomime. It seemed to me a somewhat loose and convenient solution how Master Monkey simply knew what Mime tells him, as if he were a telepath (which despite his high intuition, is not), so we opted for this new idea. It was quite fun to try and draw sign language with a character who has hooves for hands

We hope the revelation about the birds is a bit clearer this time as well, as it was really rushed on the original and I thought it would need a bit more explanation. And a name, why not?

I'll give a llama to anyone who can tell at least two of the three specific words (or letters) I tried to represent on the pannels 



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Comments: 7

simosark [2020-04-11 15:47:55 +0000 UTC]

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FennecSilvestre In reply to simosark [2020-04-15 19:26:03 +0000 UTC]

They are...though still not quite. There's still more to explore about ávimas, hopefully we have the chance to do so on later chapters.

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InEventuality [2020-04-11 05:39:47 +0000 UTC]

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FennecSilvestre In reply to InEventuality [2020-04-15 19:17:01 +0000 UTC]

Yep, it's both spanish and latin...or it could be just latin, as the word for bird (being "ave") is very similar in both languages.

And if this comic wasn't a remake, I would have made Mime's "dialogues" into symbols to represent his pantomime. It's too late now, but oh well, that gives me more ideas for future projects. Thank you for your comments <3

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InEventuality In reply to FennecSilvestre [2020-04-15 19:33:51 +0000 UTC]

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ConstellationDragoho [2020-04-11 00:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh... That’s so sad but so sweet!

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FennecSilvestre In reply to ConstellationDragoho [2020-04-15 19:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you

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