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Description Penny's life started just like every other coin's long life: having been melted, flattened, punched and inscribed, she was finally born into the world in 1971. Along with her 1,521,666,250 sisters, Penny was introduced to a new life of travels and adventures and hardships, beginning in the bottom of a Tesco cash drawer.

It was lonely there, certainly not one of the high points of her existence: none of the other pennies were particularly verbose and the majority of them were dull, rusted and squalid. However, as one of the newest coins on top of the heap, Penny didn't have to stay there long.

On her first day on the job, she found a new home in the hands of a four-year old boy: his hands were sticky and grubby and soon both of Penny's shiny faces were thick with a mixture of soil, saliva and sugar. It was almost a relief when he set her on the counter in his kitchen, but when the child's mother came into the room and beat him violently for taking ten pence from the coin tin, Penny wished she could somehow find a way back into the boy's chubby little hands, that she could somehow comfort him. It was a small crime - so small that Penny wasn't even sure it was a crime at all - but that didn't seem to matter. Soon, the child's vile and horrid excuse for a mother kicked her son to the ground with a disgusted grunt and turned to Penny, seizing her roughly and dropping her into the tin with the other coins. Just before being released into the tin, Penny got a glimpse of a small, bruised and trembling form lying beside the stove, his wide, blue eyes glistening with tears he was too afraid to shed.

That was the last she saw of the boy.

Time passed and soon Penny was used as a contribution to a block of cheddar cheese. Back into the cash drawer, she thought wearily as she fell on top of the pile of other pennies, landing with a series of clinks and chinks of shifting bronze and copper.

Penny lost track of time during her second cash drawer epoch and supposed that there would be many more like it. Eventually, she began moving again from drawer to hand to drawer to hand - with the odd stint in tins overflowing with hundreds of other pennies - and back to drawer again. It seemed this perpetual exchange would never end. Years passed and Penny became grubbier and her shine increasingly muted. Her time as a fresh, young coin was passed. Everyday she was dropped into drawers, purses, wallets and tins where more burnished and lustrous pennies flashed their sheens in her faces.

In the odd moments where the light shone right, she was able to catch the dates on the newer coins: 1983, 1992, 2000 - 2000! It was with a sense of pride that Penny realised she had reached the second millennium. She was one of the original coins, one of the first born. These many fledglings could never say the same. Still, it was with a heavy sadness that she allowed herself to be disregarded and rejected - "Mummy, I want the shiny one - that one's all rusty!" - until finally she became resolved to her fate of drawer, purse, drawer, purse, tin, purse, drawer.

One day, many years later, however, Penny found herself in the hands of someone unexpected. He was familiar, but it was only when she saw his son - with his wide, blue eyes - that she realised who it was.

The poor boy with the grubby hands.

He was much older now: his temples were streaked with strands of silver and his face was scored with fine wrinkles, but he looked much happier than when Penny had last seen him. It could be that the joy brought by his child had overthrown any sadness in him; perhaps he no longer spoke with his violent mother; or maybe he had forgiven her and they were now reconciled. In the end, though, the reason didn't really matter at all.

The man - not a boy any longer, Penny reminded herself - had chiselled her off the pavement with the aid of a key, where she'd been trapped by a repulsive piece of chewing gum for one whole year. He flipped her over to her 'tails' side and smiled to himself, slipping her into his jacket pocket.

That night, he handed her to his little boy.

"Here, son," he said in a low and resonant voice. "Drop it into the glass."

Intrigued, the little boy took Penny between his childish fingers and held her over a glass of Cola, hesitating for a few moments before dropping her in. Suddenly, a feeling of cleanliness and purity washed over Penny as the acid in the Cola stripped away the impurities of forty years of hand-to-hand exchange. Some time later, the child reached into the glass and pulled her out, staring at her with a studious assay before beaming up at his father.

"It's clean!"

The man smiled and ran Penny under cold water.

"This coin," he told his son, "is one of the first 1p coins ever created. I was only four years old when it was made - just like you."

That night, the man brought Penny into his study and over to a cabinet on the far corner, where many other coins from all countries had been cleaned and mounted on little racks. After giving Penny a little polish, he slotted her in next to a gleaming 2p coin.

There Penny remained for the next forty years until the man passed away and left his coin collection to his son, who in turn left it to his son. It seemed that Penny had finally found her purpose, and that the poor boy with the grubby hands had found his too.
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Fineliners In reply to ??? [2011-10-16 15:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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DailyLitDeviations In reply to Fineliners [2011-10-18 01:25:12 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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enchantedpeprika In reply to ??? [2011-10-02 02:43:50 +0000 UTC]

i love your crazy ideas. go lay in bed and think of more!

really awesome. who would of thought to write a story about a penny.... feels like a classic to me.

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Fineliners In reply to enchantedpeprika [2011-10-02 12:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Aaah, thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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KJ-Illustration In reply to ??? [2011-10-01 16:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Hi Your work has been featured in my September Feature: [link]

ps. Please (in the left-hand-corner) the article to spread the love and attention if you enjoyed it (:

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Fineliners In reply to KJ-Illustration [2011-10-01 21:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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KJ-Illustration In reply to ??? [2011-07-23 16:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh-I-so-loved-this-StΓ©phie~! That is one fantastic tale! I love your crazy mind, I truly do

!

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Fineliners In reply to KJ-Illustration [2011-07-25 19:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, I'm glad you loved it! I had lots of fun writing it. I tried to use simpler language than I usually would to give it the air of a traditional fable or fairytale - it seems to have worked okay!

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KJ-Illustration In reply to Fineliners [2011-07-26 20:01:58 +0000 UTC]

You did fantastic! I loved it so much
You are a great writer!

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Shannen483 In reply to ??? [2011-07-17 21:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh Steve. I can't help but laugh at the fact that you wrote this. It's brilliant though

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Fineliners In reply to Shannen483 [2011-07-21 17:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! Thank you!

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Shannen483 In reply to Fineliners [2011-07-28 10:18:53 +0000 UTC]

You are SO welcome, my dearest

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Rieal-Dragonsbane In reply to ??? [2011-07-16 22:31:18 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed reading this. It was such a sweet story. c:

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Fineliners In reply to Rieal-Dragonsbane [2011-07-16 22:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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inksoaked In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 23:24:25 +0000 UTC]

This was absolutely delightful!

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Fineliners In reply to inksoaked [2011-07-13 23:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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fyoot In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 22:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Aw, this was cute. I found myself actually caring about the penny by the end, which is a fair old achievement.

Well done.

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Fineliners In reply to fyoot [2011-07-13 22:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thank you!

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AnnamaeTezuka In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 18:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this was really awesome, a really interesting story and it kinda just made you smile at the end.

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Fineliners In reply to AnnamaeTezuka [2011-07-13 19:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thank you!

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AnnamaeTezuka In reply to Fineliners [2011-08-06 06:23:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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AnEnemySpy In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 18:24:19 +0000 UTC]

So is this british money? I've never really known how your system works.

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Fineliners In reply to AnEnemySpy [2011-07-13 19:41:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this is British money! I don't quite understand your monetary system either, ahaha. Thank you for the !

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AnEnemySpy In reply to Fineliners [2011-07-13 20:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Pence and Cents, are they similar, and what the heck is a shilling, or a crown? Are they more or less than a pound. Half-pennies, sixpence, how many coins do you need?

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Fineliners In reply to AnEnemySpy [2011-07-13 21:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Um, we don't use those anymore! That's very outdated. Most of those haven't been used since the 70s (some in the 80s, I think). I haven't a clue what their values are.

We use 1p coins (one penny), 2p coins (two pennies), 5p (five pennies), 10p, 20p, 50p, Β£1 coins (equivalent of 100 pennies), Β£2 coins (equivalent of 200 pennies), Β£5 notes (paper note worth 500 pennies), Β£10 notes (1000 pennies) and so on and so forth. I don't know what the highest amount you can get in notes is though.

Hope that helped!

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deep-red-rosie In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]

This is such a sweet story...

I had one of my "awww" moments reading this.

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Fineliners In reply to deep-red-rosie [2011-07-13 16:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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leonlioness In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 13:55:00 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome! really brought a smile to my face, i love this kind of surreal suspension of disbelief. I immediately want to send this on to everyone i know... some times work just makes you grin from ear to ear... thank you for that.

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Fineliners In reply to leonlioness [2011-07-13 15:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah I'm glad! Thank you so much for the comment.

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ScarabDynasty1 In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 11:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Personification at it's best. This was sweet and endearing and I'm glad for the happy ending, not to mention that little twist of history at the end there

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Fineliners In reply to ScarabDynasty1 [2011-07-13 15:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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ShineeSerenDipity In reply to ??? [2011-07-13 03:19:01 +0000 UTC]

this is one of the most original stories I've read on DA and I was pleasantly surprised at how great it was to read. Except now i feel bad about all the pennies I've tossed aside...

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Fineliners In reply to ShineeSerenDipity [2011-07-13 09:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! 'Deviants against the maltreatment of pennies'. Thank you for your lovely comment!

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ShineeSerenDipity In reply to Fineliners [2011-07-13 09:50:37 +0000 UTC]

no problem, you really did a great job

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