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FinelinersJourney of a Coin. by-nc-nd
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Description Penny's life started just like every other coin's long life: having been melted, flattened, punched and inscribed, she was finally born into the world in 1971. Along with her 1,521,666,250 sisters, Penny was introduced to a new life of travels and adventures and hardships, beginning in the bottom of a Tesco cash drawer.

It was lonely there, certainly not one of the high points of her existence: none of the other pennies were particularly verbose and the majority of them were dull, rusted and squalid. However, as one of the newest coins on top of the heap, Penny didn't have to stay there long.

On her first day on the job, she found a new home in the hands of a four-year old boy: his hands were sticky and grubby and soon both of Penny's shiny faces were thick with a mixture of soil, saliva and sugar. It was almost a relief when he set her on the counter in his kitchen, but when the child's mother came into the room and beat him violently for taking ten pence from the coin tin, Penny wished she could somehow find a way back into the boy's chubby little hands, that she could somehow comfort him. It was a small crime - so small that Penny wasn't even sure it was a crime at all - but that didn't seem to matter. Soon, the child's vile and horrid excuse for a mother kicked her son to the ground with a disgusted grunt and turned to Penny, seizing her roughly and dropping her into the tin with the other coins. Just before being released into the tin, Penny got a glimpse of a small, bruised and trembling form lying beside the stove, his wide, blue eyes glistening with tears he was too afraid to shed.

That was the last she saw of the boy.

Time passed and soon Penny was used as a contribution to a block of cheddar cheese. Back into the cash drawer, she thought wearily as she fell on top of the pile of other pennies, landing with a series of clinks and chinks of shifting bronze and copper.

Penny lost track of time during her second cash drawer epoch and supposed that there would be many more like it. Eventually, she began moving again from drawer to hand to drawer to hand - with the odd stint in tins overflowing with hundreds of other pennies - and back to drawer again. It seemed this perpetual exchange would never end. Years passed and Penny became grubbier and her shine increasingly muted. Her time as a fresh, young coin was passed. Everyday she was dropped into drawers, purses, wallets and tins where more burnished and lustrous pennies flashed their sheens in her faces.

In the odd moments where the light shone right, she was able to catch the dates on the newer coins: 1983, 1992, 2000 - 2000! It was with a sense of pride that Penny realised she had reached the second millennium. She was one of the original coins, one of the first born. These many fledglings could never say the same. Still, it was with a heavy sadness that she allowed herself to be disregarded and rejected - "Mummy, I want the shiny one - that one's all rusty!" - until finally she became resolved to her fate of drawer, purse, drawer, purse, tin, purse, drawer.

One day, many years later, however, Penny found herself in the hands of someone unexpected. He was familiar, but it was only when she saw his son - with his wide, blue eyes - that she realised who it was.

The poor boy with the grubby hands.

He was much older now: his temples were streaked with strands of silver and his face was scored with fine wrinkles, but he looked much happier than when Penny had last seen him. It could be that the joy brought by his child had overthrown any sadness in him; perhaps he no longer spoke with his violent mother; or maybe he had forgiven her and they were now reconciled. In the end, though, the reason didn't really matter at all.

The man - not a boy any longer, Penny reminded herself - had chiselled her off the pavement with the aid of a key, where she'd been trapped by a repulsive piece of chewing gum for one whole year. He flipped her over to her 'tails' side and smiled to himself, slipping her into his jacket pocket.

That night, he handed her to his little boy.

"Here, son," he said in a low and resonant voice. "Drop it into the glass."

Intrigued, the little boy took Penny between his childish fingers and held her over a glass of Cola, hesitating for a few moments before dropping her in. Suddenly, a feeling of cleanliness and purity washed over Penny as the acid in the Cola stripped away the impurities of forty years of hand-to-hand exchange. Some time later, the child reached into the glass and pulled her out, staring at her with a studious assay before beaming up at his father.

"It's clean!"

The man smiled and ran Penny under cold water.

"This coin," he told his son, "is one of the first 1p coins ever created. I was only four years old when it was made - just like you."

That night, the man brought Penny into his study and over to a cabinet on the far corner, where many other coins from all countries had been cleaned and mounted on little racks. After giving Penny a little polish, he slotted her in next to a gleaming 2p coin.

There Penny remained for the next forty years until the man passed away and left his coin collection to his son, who in turn left it to his son. It seemed that Penny had finally found her purpose, and that the poor boy with the grubby hands had found his too.
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Comments: 185

Kyshone In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 01:48:52 +0000 UTC]

I hope that you do! You have the skill right there in the tips of your fingers, literally. Hope to see your name pop up next time I go to Barnes and Noble.

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Fineliners In reply to Kyshone [2011-11-25 01:54:50 +0000 UTC]

That would be amazing, ahaha!

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Kyshone In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 01:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Then you best keep it up. I expect great things from you.

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FeyrieStrange In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 18:38:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't normally fav journals, but I think this is an acception.

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Fineliners In reply to FeyrieStrange [2011-11-25 01:40:12 +0000 UTC]

It's not a journal, ahaha! But thank you.

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FeyrieStrange In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-27 18:09:36 +0000 UTC]

I see what happened! I my friend *told* me it was and I believed her! She tricked me...-_- Ah well, still!

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Marianita-Pinkland In reply to FeyrieStrange [2011-11-23 19:14:24 +0000 UTC]

This is not a journal, is a story

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FeyrieStrange In reply to Marianita-Pinkland [2011-11-23 19:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but it is *in* your journal.

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Marianita-Pinkland In reply to FeyrieStrange [2011-11-23 19:32:37 +0000 UTC]

It is on Daily Devations D:
I DON'T UNDERSTAAAAND you confuse me :c

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FeyrieStrange In reply to Marianita-Pinkland [2011-11-23 19:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! I am a confusing person.

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Marianita-Pinkland In reply to Marianita-Pinkland [2011-11-23 19:15:00 +0000 UTC]

*

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Lit-Twitter In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 18:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. [link]

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Fineliners In reply to Lit-Twitter [2011-11-25 01:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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TheRamblingWordsmith In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 17:50:55 +0000 UTC]

I had always thought that if coins or money had lives, that they would be interesting ones, having to be passed from person to person, and learning so much about each one on the way.
What I hadn't thought, is that someone would have that idea, and then turn it into something beautiful, and something with a message behind it as well.
Congratulations on your DD, it is indeed, well deserved.

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Fineliners In reply to TheRamblingWordsmith [2011-11-25 01:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you so much!

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Tavia-chan In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 17:25:11 +0000 UTC]

There is something oddly nostalgic about this small short story. And, that something makes this such a wonderful read! The simple language and observations make it feel whimsical and heartfelt. This short piece is definitely DD worthy, and I congratulate you. Well done!

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Fineliners In reply to Tavia-chan [2011-11-25 01:42:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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Tavia-chan In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 04:36:38 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! ^^

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animefreakhacker897 In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 17:22:36 +0000 UTC]

I've often had this thought before. It made me glad to see I wasn't the only one. :> Well written!

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Fineliners In reply to animefreakhacker897 [2011-11-25 01:42:41 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't resist it, ahaha. Thank you!

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animefreakhacker897 In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 01:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Of course! And a very merry congratulations on your DD! (I was SO tempted to put 'coin'gratulations.)

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Fineliners In reply to animefreakhacker897 [2011-11-25 01:55:12 +0000 UTC]

You should have! Ahaha. Thanks again.

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animefreakhacker897 In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 03:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Coingratulations.
Anytime!

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konekonekonaito In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 17:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Ok this is simply too sweet. To see the world from a penny's perspective (I didn't even think to consider such a thing lol) is truly eye opening.

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Fineliners In reply to konekonekonaito [2011-11-25 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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konekonekonaito In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 04:34:41 +0000 UTC]

^^ anytime dear

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darkallegiance666 In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 17:08:58 +0000 UTC]

I read a short story very like this one a long time ago.

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Fineliners In reply to darkallegiance666 [2011-11-25 01:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Really? Awesome.

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SmexicanYoshi In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 16:34:44 +0000 UTC]

I wish more deviants would take the time to read this excellent story...congrats on the DD!

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Fineliners In reply to SmexicanYoshi [2011-11-25 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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copperandsparks In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 16:12:52 +0000 UTC]

this is sooooo cute!!!!

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Fineliners In reply to copperandsparks [2011-11-25 01:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thanks!

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copperandsparks In reply to Fineliners [2011-11-25 03:35:11 +0000 UTC]

no prob!!!! hehehehe

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ximsol182 In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 15:53:59 +0000 UTC]

I red a similar story with a dollar (a peruvian dolar to be exactly) that in the end of the story turned out to be fake. But there is something emotional and original about this.

I had no idea that 1p coins existed

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Fineliners In reply to ximsol182 [2011-11-25 01:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Coins sure do make for interesting stories! Thank you.

(and yep, they exist! In the UK, anyway)

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stridernfs2 In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 15:22:38 +0000 UTC]

awesome story >w<

and now that I know pennies have feelingss and that they can be cleaned with coke I'm going to clean EVERY PENNY I FIND

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Fineliners In reply to stridernfs2 [2011-11-25 01:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Everybody should be concerned with the welfare of pennies! Ahaha. Thank you.

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stridernfs2 In reply to Fineliners [2011-12-01 01:34:33 +0000 UTC]

welcome :3

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mapelie In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 14:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This reminded me of school years all over again! Back then we little kids used to write these essays about the stories of things or objects and their journey from the beginning to the end. Often we came up with all sorts of crazy stories about bicycles, balls, kites and even flowers. However I never found someone who wrote about coins. So this is pretty new. Congrats for the DD!

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Fineliners In reply to mapelie [2011-11-25 01:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! Thank you!

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Undefined-Mari In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 11:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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Fineliners In reply to Undefined-Mari [2011-11-25 01:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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JutaWi In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 09:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Now that's one original piece, I enjoyed it greatly, and I dare to say it made my day ^^

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Fineliners In reply to JutaWi [2011-11-25 01:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you!

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Vigilo In reply to ??? [2011-11-23 09:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DD! This was lovely - so charming, so heartwarming, very wonderful and original. I do adore crazy ideas, and this is so well written, it's absolutely fantastic. Really well-deserved DD!

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Fineliners In reply to Vigilo [2011-11-25 01:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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xlntwtch [2011-10-16 21:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DLD. I was as charmed by this fine story as it seems many readers are. Thank you.

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Fineliners In reply to xlntwtch [2011-10-17 00:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for both your lovely comment and the !

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xlntwtch In reply to Fineliners [2011-10-17 08:39:02 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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DailyLitDeviations In reply to ??? [2011-10-16 06:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

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