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Published: 2006-10-14 16:56:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2110; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 20
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Chapter 1 is OVER!!!The mahem has ended! Or begun... whichever.
And now I shall take a break from this comic. :3
Don't worry, it shall be back for a second chapter. And in the second chapter, Ve and Rosie BOTH will be introduced.
I shall leave you with the title for the second chapter:
"Death by Groceries"
Hmmm.... wonder what it's gonna be about. XD
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Comments: 39
I just finished Chapter One, and I'm addicted! I'm going onto Chapter Two now, it's so cute!!!
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I just started reading your comic today, and I think it is funny and cute~
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Thank you!
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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Very cute comic ^^.
And I love Asura's hair when it's down 
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I wish I could read thoughts like Asura, then I would actually understand what the heck my Teachers are talking about.
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I really enjoyed reading the first chapter every panel is as beuatiful as the one before! I've always lvoed your style and way of colouring everything about the way you draw is and unique and I can't wait for the rest of this ~
*faves*
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Thank you so much!
I really appreciate such a wonderful comment! =^____^=
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this comic is by far the cutest thing i have evar sawed on devart. seriously. that's why i got into this, the cute japanese-y comics. it's inspired me to do my own manga-y thing, even though we be americans.
i can't wait for chapter 2!
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really? XD thank you so much! =^__^=
ch. 2 isn't gonna come for a while, unfortunately. 
but I shall do it eventually. One day, it's gonna call me. XD
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Lol Aww, SO cute XD
I like the little umbrellas XD I want the orange one. I claim it meee!
Reminds me of our dance tap one year...we got to dance with little umbrellas to the song raining men 
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lol XD that sounded like it was fun. =^__^= I'd love to dance with umbrellas. :3
thanks a bunch!
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I always wanted to make a comic sooo bad!! how do you start it? cuz I can never start mine...
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I usually start with writing a script for the whole chapter. :3 Then I start drawing pages from there. =^__^=
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eh.... how do you start writing o.O? cuz I can't do that either =\
I suck -.-"
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well, you first need to come up with a broad storyline. Once you figure that out, you start going into detail about the storyline and break it up into chapters. :3
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;3 Awwr a good ending for chapter 1. Ehehe I simply adore the lumber jack outfit, I think it suits Talori well. Also its funny how she mixes up the occupation of a maid with a lumber jack. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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I ADORE cam's expression in panel 3. its so perfect. and I may have to steal your idea of doing two pages at once.
I also love the umbrella chibi's, though I must say I prefer asura's hair up.
how long does a set of pages take you, jsut cause I'm curious?
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nice! ^_^
although generougly isn't a word, i'll assume you meant generously XD
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XD I did, thank you for pointing that out. :3
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generougly.... i'm going to use that on people that look like generic looking ugly people
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O_O.. you're welcome, sorry.... it didn't seem to fit with the rest of the image as a whole XD
Hope i didn't hurt your feelings or anything T_T!! GOMEN NASAI!!!!!!! *runs away*
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at least she thinks she is. XD
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thanks so much! =^__^=
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no prob ur art looks lovely yes a guy said lovely zomg
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thanks so much! =^__^=
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Haha, awesome title for the second chapter.
Awww...I loved this first chapter. :3 I really like the end picture!
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thanks! XD the next chapter is gonna be so much fun. =^__^=
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You're welcome! :3
Ooooh..I can't wait.
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