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I love working on black and white pieces.They don't take nearly as long and I can still fit in my detail.
...given the critique this piece has received from start to finish, more than any other piece of mine, I may just crop off the bottom.
But here, let me help, so they're not brought up more. -_-
*The face is longer than a typical feline's
-Yes, I made it longer to fit a larger body frame. It was intentional.
*The legs seem too far forward, not under the center of gravity.
-I changed that from the original sketch, but look at how I draw anthro legs. The thighs are usually farther forward with the rest underneath. If the whole legs were showing, it might seem more understandable.
*The perspective of the face doesn't match the torso/body.
-This was unintentional. I do not like drawing straight on profile bodies and like to expose more of it, hence the suggested discrepancy.
© Julie M.
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Comments: 9
FeretStudios [2013-06-23 16:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, the one critique I had you mentioned in the comment box above so I guess I'll add in that I really dig the owl. Especially it's cute little claws. And I'm impressed there's no smudges anywhere on the paper.
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emeteriax [2013-05-04 04:05:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This looks like it could be a khajit from the elder scrolls. Very well done! The fur techniques are awesome and look so real too!
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FireMaster13 In reply to emeteriax [2013-05-05 20:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. It's just a typical mountain lion.
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kantuck-nadie [2013-04-24 00:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully done! The muscularity, and the head/face. So well done, I knew immediately this was a cougar anthro.
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FireMaster13 In reply to kantuck-nadie [2013-04-24 01:51:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. It's still probably going to get worked on more. A feline was a nice change of pace.
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WildWingedWolf [2013-04-18 12:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i really love it!
Its great. All those fur details!
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FireMaster13 In reply to WildWingedWolf [2013-04-18 16:45:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'll likely be adding more contrast to the body.
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