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FireRai β€” The Mouse and the Otter

Published: 2010-04-08 22:28:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1959; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 26
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Description Just a picture I drew of my story :3 The one I've been writing and planning since the beginning of 2010 n.n

So this is from the very first chapter. The protagonist, Whiterfur (the mouse), standing on a riverside on early in the morning with his mentor, Jolee (the otter).

As some can probably see, I've taken influence from Tales of Redwall :3 But mostly just by the world being populated by anthro animals instead of men, elves and dwarves. Besides that point, it is your typical fantasy world with swords and magic

I'm still not sure, if I will post chapters to DA or not. We'll see. For now, I don't think I will as I am still not sure if this story will have any better future than Geo's Story.
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FireRai In reply to ??? [2012-12-26 11:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Hehe yeah n.n Suits the mood :3

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OlderLocoBoy In reply to FireRai [2012-12-26 15:24:10 +0000 UTC]

this song might be good for fight seens of redwall [link]

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FireRai In reply to OlderLocoBoy [2012-12-28 20:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Not bad n.n

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OlderLocoBoy In reply to FireRai [2012-12-29 01:15:07 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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j1w [2010-07-05 09:23:11 +0000 UTC]

have you heard of zen fetcher?

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-05 09:54:54 +0000 UTC]

No? o.o

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-06 20:47:11 +0000 UTC]

well anyhow his art seems a little similar to yours

[link]

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-07 11:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Somewhat yes, but not too similar, if you ask me. There are lot of furry characters.
How come?

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-08 05:22:12 +0000 UTC]

um, dunno...XD i just espied your art on the site and im like...hmm...that seems familiar

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-08 06:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Hehe X3

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-08 07:00:08 +0000 UTC]

:0) so how are you?

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-08 13:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Good, thank you n.n
You?

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-08 18:48:04 +0000 UTC]

XD, yeah random question. Im just tired lately and im bored mostly to a point...

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-08 20:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Awww <:3 I know the feeling u.u

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-08 20:42:00 +0000 UTC]

I need to post up new art! but i dont have a scanner and my moms camera is with well my mom so....

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-08 20:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Awww <:3 That sucks
I just haven't had the inspiration to do anything lately <:3

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-09 02:50:22 +0000 UTC]

heh heh, well im also a writer, a music writer, a guitarist, and i think now an illustrator...

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-09 08:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh~ =n.n= A musician~ Veeery nice :3
I am a story writer too, thogh I rarely public my stories in the internet :3
I am also a graphic designer, film photographer and editor and a digital artist (first two being my actual real-life professions) :3

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-11 19:51:29 +0000 UTC]

o_o i need to learn digital art! How do i get started?

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-11 21:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, i started by getting Photoshop and trying out some simple tutorials from internet ^^

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-12 06:49:35 +0000 UTC]

i dont have photoshop...will photoimpression work?

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FireRai In reply to j1w [2010-07-12 07:29:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't know that program, but I suppose any photomanipulation software will do :3

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j1w In reply to FireRai [2010-07-12 14:28:59 +0000 UTC]

ok...

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naquadrea [2010-06-18 19:37:01 +0000 UTC]

I like the size difference and the way they are sorta looking at each other. It sorta gives me a young master youshe from TMNT learning form his master. Thow I know it was I think a human he learned from.

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FireRai In reply to naquadrea [2010-06-21 20:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^
Yeah, the situation is somewhat same :3

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Caligatio-Umbra [2010-04-16 16:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Woots! \o/ Viimeinkin ensimmΓ€isiΓ€ nΓ€kymiΓ€ tarinastasi.

Ja hyvÀltÀ nÀyttÀÀ kuten tyâsi yleensÀkkin :3
Ilmeet kertovat hyvin selkeΓ€sti hahmojen tunteista

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FireRai In reply to Caligatio-Umbra [2010-04-18 20:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Kiitos paljon n.n

Toivottavasti saan jotain aikaan jatkossakin <:3

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LittleCharmander [2010-04-15 22:17:24 +0000 UTC]

When I saw this, I instantly thought of Tales of Redwall. Hehe. :3 You pulled off the look rather well in my opinion. ^^ I'm pretty intrigued by your story. Is it as violent as Redwall, though? X3

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FireRai In reply to LittleCharmander [2010-04-16 07:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, that is understandable, since the characters are quite similar <:3
Oh, Redwall isn't even the most violent books I've read X3 And...my story might be a bit more darker than those <:3

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LittleCharmander In reply to FireRai [2010-04-24 07:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee dark stories make the charchar sad. <:c

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FireRai In reply to LittleCharmander [2010-04-24 08:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww <:3 Well, I think this story isn't for you then <:3

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LittleCharmander In reply to FireRai [2010-04-24 09:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Hehe aw, probably not. Maybe if you censored, I'd be able to read it. X3 Hee hee just kidding. :3

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FireRai In reply to LittleCharmander [2010-04-24 09:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Hehe X3

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FelldohTheSquirrel [2010-04-10 17:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Very Redwall-ish. :3

Looks awesome.

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FireRai In reply to FelldohTheSquirrel [2010-04-10 19:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Yush :3 I loved the anthro animals of the Redwall series, so I wanted to make the characters of my world like them too n.n But only by the appearance though :3 At least I try to X3

Thank you n.n

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Stvalbert [2010-04-09 13:49:50 +0000 UTC]

I suuuuuuure remember your TALE!! 8D *pokes furry mouse*

awwww, the poor lil-guy looks so worried ;///;

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FireRai In reply to Stvalbert [2010-04-09 15:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Awww =n.n= *blushes and giggles*

He's not worried. He is just gone kinda insane from grief <:3

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saber-th [2010-04-09 13:17:01 +0000 UTC]

awww, the mousey looks cute <:3

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FireRai In reply to saber-th [2010-04-09 15:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Awww n.n Well, he might look, but he doesn't act too cute <:3

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LIUKANG08 [2010-04-09 01:52:21 +0000 UTC]

pretty cute pic x3

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FireRai In reply to LIUKANG08 [2010-04-09 02:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bro n.n

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LIUKANG08 In reply to FireRai [2010-04-09 18:25:48 +0000 UTC]

btw where this chars came?

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FireRai In reply to LIUKANG08 [2010-04-09 19:26:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't actually remember. He was just developed over time during the end of 2009, I suppose, when I was thinking of a main character to the story.

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LIUKANG08 In reply to FireRai [2010-04-10 03:25:40 +0000 UTC]

oh wait this chars are yours?
pretty cool

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FireRai In reply to LIUKANG08 [2010-04-10 07:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Well, I did say so in the description

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LIUKANG08 In reply to FireRai [2010-04-10 14:57:53 +0000 UTC]

oh i see gueez i dont read it well XDD

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CalvinDonut21 [2010-04-08 23:57:17 +0000 UTC]

uh oh..^_^

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FireRai In reply to CalvinDonut21 [2010-04-09 02:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me? o.o

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CalvinDonut21 In reply to FireRai [2010-04-09 02:24:33 +0000 UTC]

ooo...sorrry

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FireRai In reply to CalvinDonut21 [2010-04-09 02:27:10 +0000 UTC]

What? O.o Now I'm confused...

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